Kurk Restricted Registered: Jul 2015Account Restricted
Please review my first Star Wars fan fiction
Hey Guys this is my first official fan fiction (well a few of you may remember my first unofficial one—check out my quotes)https://www.fanfiction.net/s/126069...-s-Secret-Trial __________________ "Technology equals might!" "Evolve or perish"
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Kurk Restricted Registered: Jul 2015Account Restricted
And sorry for posting in the wrong section; I'm high af
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UCanShootMyNova Senior Member Registered: Aug 2016
Honestly Kurk ( and I'm feeling pretty honest today ) that was terrible. Both as smut and a serious fanfiction. Get some help, for both yourself and your writing.
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NewGuy01 perpetual Registered: Jan 2013
"I'm gonna cum!"
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UCanShootMyNova Senior Member Registered: Aug 2016
xD
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Kurk Restricted Registered: Jul 2015Account Restricted
quote: (post ) Originally posted by UCanShootMyNova Honestly Kurk ( and I'm feeling pretty honest today ) that was terrible. Both as smut and a serious fanfiction. Get some help, for both yourself and your writing.
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The Merchant Senior Member Registered: Sep 2012
I support Palpatine x Anakin and I loved this.
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Trocity Undefeated and Undisputed Registered: May 2012
quote: (post ) Originally posted by NewGuy01 "I'm gonna cum!"
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ChocolateMuesli Senior Member Registered: Aug 2017
LMAO AT ANAKIN ****ING SHEEV im dead good shit kurk
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adrainsmith Junior Member Registered: Aug 2017
Nice!!!
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thesithmaster Dark Lord of the Sith Registered: Jul 2017
The last two chapters were gold. Very good job once again.
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Beniboybling Worst Member Registered: Jul 2014
Why is my name attached to this trash. __________________
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Geistalt SilenceThatSpeaksVolumes Registered: Oct 2016
What have you done
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Kurk Restricted Registered: Jul 2015Account Restricted
quote: (post ) Originally posted by Beniboybling
Why is my name attached to this trash. __________________ "Technology equals might!" "Evolve or perish"
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