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surfchikpir8fan
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But what to write, what to write. Now I know how Shakespeare must of felt at times!
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surfchikpir8fan
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Well, here is the third chapter … I’m extremely sorry it took forever and hopefully they’ll much quicker updates from now on. So here it is, and thankyou so much even if you read it. Oh, and certain shippers, you’ll start getting interested at the end. I will not reveal anything; I could be identifying Sparrabeths, Willabeths or even Monkeydogs!
Enjoy reading and thankyou!
http://www.fanfiction.net/secure/li...3&chapter=1
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surf, that was pretty good. You're very good with dialogue. This is a pretty dark story so far, too! Keep it up.
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Apr 1st, 2007 04:01 PM |
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surfchikpir8fan
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Thankyou very much I thought I sucked with dialogue ...
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Apr 3rd, 2007 07:23 AM |
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surfchikpir8fan
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AHHHHHH is anyone else gonna review or will I just keep trying to make this thread bigger!
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Apr 3rd, 2007 08:35 AM |
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jenbojenbojeno
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wow that was really good! Great how you explained the details
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Apr 4th, 2007 05:10 PM |
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surfchikpir8fan
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THANKYOU very much!
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Apr 5th, 2007 09:28 AM |
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pirate179
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i loved it surfchikpir8fan!! its very good!
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Apr 5th, 2007 06:40 PM |
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pirate179
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wow forum is empty today!!
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Apr 5th, 2007 06:40 PM |
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pirate179
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sorry edit! stupid computer!! i have no idea what its doing!! sorry
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Apr 5th, 2007 06:41 PM |
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surfchikpir8fan
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Lol, thankyou so much! Next chapter will be up in a week max!
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Apr 6th, 2007 12:14 PM |
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pirate179
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cant wait!!
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Apr 9th, 2007 02:18 AM |
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surfchikpir8fan
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Funnily enough I think I'll be calling this chapter Port Royal Massacre or Port Royal Battle Sketch. I don't know, something along those lines. But it is far from being the end chapter!
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Apr 11th, 2007 02:31 AM |
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willofthewisp
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Do you use the same name on fanfiction that you do here in case I want to just look up your story without coming here first? I'm so ready for another chapter.
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Apr 12th, 2007 02:53 AM |
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surfchikpir8fan
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Yep, same name. Lol, I'm so creative - not!
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Apr 13th, 2007 10:48 AM |
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surfchikpir8fan
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YES it is uploaded! Finally, sorry. I just like to make sure I'm absolutely happy with a chapter before uploading it. This is my shortest chapter, but I'd say it's the most violent/horrific/poetic. I like what kate said about being dark and poetic so I hope I have kept that idea and maintained it, lol.
But here it is - Chapter 4 - Blood-Red Ink Sketch of Port Royal - http://www.fanfiction.net/secure/li...&chapter=4/
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Apr 22nd, 2007 08:47 AM |
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willofthewisp
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That is reallyl dark. I'm looking forward to more.
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Apr 22nd, 2007 03:13 PM |
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surfchikpir8fan
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Thankyou!
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Apr 23rd, 2007 05:24 AM |
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May 13th, 2007 04:17 AM |
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surfchikpir8fan
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Ahhhhh does anyone care, or do I delete the story?
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May 13th, 2007 10:52 AM |
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