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Zamp
The Blind Critic
Registered: Jun 2007
Location: Haven
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Terrorrists Die from Awesomeness Concentration
The sheer awesomeness of Aemerika system in the Outer Rim draws the attention of both Plo-Koon, renowned Jedi God, and Darth Bandon, the most powerful Sith in existence.
The mere presence of these two titans on the planet immediately cows (and later overwhelms to the point of brain-fluid explosion) the insurgency preventing the current superpower from projecting its dominance over the planet and joining the republic. On a desert sand dune amidst a sea of the evildoers' blood, will the Jedi or the Sith prevail?
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Dec 6th, 2010 04:19 AM |
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truejedi
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the planet immediately "cowls"
*helps*
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Dec 6th, 2010 04:29 AM |
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Zamp
The Blind Critic
Registered: Jun 2007
Location: Haven
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Cowls:
–verb (used with object)
to cover with or as if with a cowl.
to put a monk's cowl on.
to make a monk of.
Cow:
–verb (used with object)
to frighten with threats, violence, etc.; intimidate; overawe.
Cow, as in, "what Plo-Koon would do to you were you to meet him face to face."
Not as in "what yourfaunus's mother is."
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Dec 6th, 2010 04:38 AM |
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truejedi
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Location: United States
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you are right, and I am wrong. Always thought that was spelled cowl with a silent "l"...
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Dec 6th, 2010 04:39 AM |
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Zamp
The Blind Critic
Registered: Jun 2007
Location: Haven
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When you are frozen in the purifying creek your mistakes shall be Force-Pushed out of you.
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Dec 6th, 2010 04:49 AM |
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truejedi
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Location: United States
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this entire thread is confusing with many things I don't understand. If however, this is merely Koon against Bandon, I have to give it to Ka'sim the Magnificent by default.
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Dec 6th, 2010 04:51 AM |
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Zamp
The Blind Critic
Registered: Jun 2007
Location: Haven
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You know, I really hate you.
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Dec 6th, 2010 11:31 PM |
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Slash_KMC
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Begone haters!
Oooooooh, icwutudidthere.
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Dec 6th, 2010 11:39 PM |
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truejedi
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Location: United States
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I'm a lover. A hot lover.
This is actually probably inappropriate. I'll cross it out.
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Dec 7th, 2010 01:40 AM |
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Omnislash Kid
I did not Mordor him!
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Location: Star Forge
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You had one immediate grammar mistake that I noticed.
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Dec 15th, 2010 03:57 PM |
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Zamp
The Blind Critic
Registered: Jun 2007
Location: Haven
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Lazy troll is lazy
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