Cale breathed hard closing his eyes he hated flying he was a marine for a reason not a born pilot like his older brother Zane. "You doing ok?" came the calming voice of the suprisingly beautiful blonde green eyed com specialist sitting across from him at the sensor board. "Yeah I'm ok," he coughed. "Haha dont worry we'll be out of atmo in a few minutes and then you'll have your feet firm on Orestes. Oh I'm Riley but you can call me Siren everybody does...- she was cut short as the scouting rapto surged violently and a bright blinding light ovetook the cabin. "What the frak!!" came the pilots voice as the raptor shook violently then suddenly Cale was slammed agains the wall as a powerful wave slammed into the raptor again. "Hold on we're going down!" yelled Siren looking across at him as the world seemed to slow to trickle as the raptor spun round and round. Then his world went black.
"Get up!" a voice pulled him from the darkness... "Gods please get up!" then Cale's eyes opened slowly to the smoke filled remains of the cabin. "Thank gods," Siren fell back her eyes filled with tears her helmet gone and her forehead bleeding from a small headwound. Cale slowly came to looking around at the wreckage of the raptor he was just in now seperated across a small meadow in a forest. Siren pulled him up "What the frak is going on?" he asked looking around still stunned. "That's what's wrong she pointed to the east to a dark plume cloud over what seemed to be the direction of Caprica City. "Is that?.." "Yes its a nuke ... all i can get from my radio is its the Cylons... they've attacked all the colonies." Cale stepped out from the wreckage and as they looked around another plume to the west rose into the sky.....
no, and i thought he would know what to do since he did the same thing in the star wars rp thread. this guy just never learns. their is only one word to describe him. noob.
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oh youre cause you can call someone else a noob how corny is that. yeah i made a mistake i have posted in plenty of other forums so in fact i am not a "noob" its just this site is a little more restrictive and i thought taking a quick glance at the unhosted rules that you could post a story here because it was an open forum meant for threads that didnt have to be approved my mistake but you might want to be a little less arrogant because that is not a great way to keep or attract fellow gamers you could have been a little more respective and sent me an email. thanks and im sorry to the moderators if they want to close this thread
Yeah guys, it's not the end of the world. It'll get closed until further approval and get back on if there's enough participation, as usual. We shouldn't go into insults.
Um but you are a noob bub, dont take it personally but you dont even have a Avatar or Signature. When your new to a forums you always start out Noob and work your way up. Besides as long as you follow the rules no one would bother you about this. This thread though will be closed eventually
Hoping that comment was not attributed to me, I dare say that you look upon my profile if you have any doubt of how long I have been here. And one more lesson;
It's not because you can get something that must must get it.
I see you joined 1 month after i did all those years ago. But my old name is Dyingstar i got banned for fighting. But somone allowed me back into the forums under a new name. Ush was nice enough to let me stay at the forums xD His father !?!?! ;O
3 times 4th time was a charm ^.- i missed the feeling because i was 14 and well i just got my first PC and i liked talking to the people here. I missed the happy feeling of being able to make a story with people online
True. As for me, I've spent my first 2 years exclusively on the LotR forums, opening after to the OTF, and no so long ago the rp forums. That's why I don't have that much posts in all those times.
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Aug 22nd, 2008 06:37 AM
Dyingstar
yays , lol now this has become a discussion thread xD ! hope we dont get in trouble for chating in here
