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Originally posted by RagingSilent
*claps* good good mon ami...very romanticnessness....eheh..
but really.....very romantic and sweet.....I could not have imagined it any more perfect.....i love stories with romantic moments like these...

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Originally posted by 4pocalyps3x
Whoa...thats one big spoiler!

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Originally posted by BOPRecruit 16
i love reading and dreaming up romance stories, esp. fantasy type ones like your story! so thank you for the compliment! made my day after a semi crappie week *hugs*

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Originally posted by BOPRecruit 16
i love reading and dreaming up romance stories, esp. fantasy type ones like your story! so thank you for the compliment! made my day after a semi crappie week *hugs*

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Originally posted by RagingSilent
oh, thanks...

ehehe.....weally?.......den its no problamo...

*hugs back*

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Originally posted by BOPRecruit 16
looks like you double posted, you could've edited the first one you know...unless your comp. was being a butt and all....

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Originally posted by RagingSilent
yeah.......das de comp.....I try and type before de page is finished loading...so naturally, it has to be a lil shit n screw up.

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Originally posted by BOPRecruit 16
i hate it when you try to post something and it won't! it gets stuck on the reply to post page and you keep pressing the post button and it ends up posting more than one of that post without your knowledge until you see it in the thread? i know you can edit it, but dammit!

anyways...back to story chat!

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Originally posted by BOPRecruit 16
dude, quit patting my shoulder! it's gettin' annoying, missy

sorry, been too busy this week for that. besides, i don't work on unless i'm online and at kmc here. then i go to work on making a new one. i'll try to this weekend or soon...sorry about the wait.

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Originally posted by BOPRecruit 16
dude is my expression of "oh my god". stuff like that. than missy was missy. stupid!

i dont' like it! it's annoying!

i'll try to work on my bit soon...was going to do it a few minutes ago...but later later. i think i'll make it short.

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Originally posted by RagingSilent
Here’s my next story bit Boppy:

My broken life. The life I had once known and grown to love, yet also loathe. Gradually, I stopped walking, my curious eyes roaming over the hard earth I stood upon. I closed my eyes, the subtle wind gently brushing against my cold skin, as I remembered the days of my old life. My wife, my child, how I loved you, yet you left me, my dreams turning to ash, ash as grey as the dead evening that mourns for the glimmer of sunlight. My trembling hands soon became fists, yet through my anger, my aching eyes sang quietly to the night, longing to once again see those who brought me true happiness.

My heart turned dark then, my body weak with grief. Sluggishly, I continued my steps, my eyes upon the dying soil. Abruptly I paused, finding myself standing before the aged property I had once lived in. The night seemed to deepen as the shadows of my old world washed over me. Upon a musty window, I placed my hand, wiping away the dust that was layered thick over it. Through the window, painful memories lay, cinders darkening any trace of color. I smiled gently, unaware of the tear that rolled silently down my cheek. I turned away, melancholic peace settling upon the surrounding night I cherished.

My eyes slowly drifted above, the moon gazing at me as it sparkled light across the sky. At that moment, I remembered when I had truly seen the beauty of the night, when I had first learned of pure darkness. At that time, I was a new born vampire, weeping at the splendor of the world, weeping at the chance I had been offered, a chance to live another life, to see what mortals would not. Grimly, my heart danced, a bitter thought forming in the back of my mind. Lestat. You gave me that chance, yet you never warned me of the torment it would bring. Despite the memory of his bitterness, and the evil behind his offer to me, a sullen truth still remained in my mind. I longed to see his face.

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Originally posted by BOPRecruit 16
Recalling all of what has already come to pass, brought a sudden bitter taste to my palette that sliced a huge bitter knife through my reverie. The open mental wound of negativity brought forth my conscious, nagging me ever more, washing across my senses and cleansing me free of the pleasant, positive aura that brought forth the reminder of a familiar place. For now, the country side had lost it's sway upon me. The invisible shadows of the night come forth to claim my danmned soul once more. Drawing me further back into this oppression that I refer to as my eternal life. A sensation like this, makes my heart become increasing obsessed with my newly discovered addiction. An addiction to go on a journey that will allow some warmth and light back into my life. For now, I don't really care of how long this will take. I would like to at least make an attempt to redeem myself and not have to regret so much of my miserable immortality. To quit viewing this gift of neverevending life as a curse, but more as a blessing.

Author's Note: Shall I continue or would you like to add your new bit, a short one at that?

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Originally posted by BOPRecruit 16
well, i could go on for a bit longer, but you can continue on right now if you would like to. i can keep myself busy by exploring the hot topic site.

i know, thanks. i appreciate that. got some great writing done this week, woot woot

if you do carry on, you can just have louis deciding to walk back to town cause he doesn't want to be around his old house anymore. he wanders through the streets with stores. gazing into windows maybe. looks for a place to stay and debates about it. stuff like that. finding a place to sleep for the night since morning is approaching. no mortal can see it coming so dark at that point in time in the morning, vampires like louis can sense it in the air, wheather, stuff like that. do you savvy on that?

oh yeah, one more thing. that bit about addiction to redemption, i kind added in a bit of an agent sands touch/tone to it. did you notice?