Gender: Female Location: Griffindor common room,
Hogwarts
The dwelling was shortly after interrupted by none other than the Headmaster of Hogwarts school of Witchcraft and wizardry ALBUS DUMBLEDORE.
“Good evening Mr.Black, Mr. Potter, Mr. Pettigrew and Mr. Lupin. Ah and you are quite a good dweller Mr. Black. Mr. Pettigrew here can learn many things about dwelling from you which will affect his dwelling standard. But dwelling is not allowed in corridors so it will be better if you save your energy for the defense against the dark arts classes,” Dumbledore said with twinkling eyes.
“Yes sir. Peter was in a hurry of practicing for the next practical period, weren’t you Peter?”
“Yeah,” a terrified Peter replied.
“Sure and Mr. Potter I want you to take care that Mr. Pettigrew does not feel an urgent feel of practicing like he felt today again, alright?” Dumbledore asked with a significant twinkle in his eye which showed that he knew what exactly was happening.
“Come on fast. Let us go to the common room before anyone else catches us,” Remus said and the four students hurried off to their common room.
I really hope you like it and co-operate with me for some time please.
Comments please. Also be kind to check my other fic Please which is by the name of Harry Potter and the four horcruxes.
don't post when you only have that short of a post. Build it up. Write a part save it on Word then come back to it then add more. It make it sound a lot better I promise!
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Gender: Female Location: Griffindor common room,
Hogwarts
“Hello everyone. Where were you all,” asked Lily narrowing her eyes in suspicion.
“We were in the library luv. But why are you asking?” James asked in the sweetest voice he can manage (he always used a very sweet and polite voice in front of Lily to keep his impression.
“Oh nothing. I just…… well I was thinking about your prank,” Lily answered in her prefect voice.
“We postponed it,” Sirius muttered.
“Pardon I didn’t get it. What were you saying Sirius,” Lily asked a bit annoyed. She was going to say more but stopped as James started kissing her.
“James what are you doing?” Lily asked.
“Kissing the second most beautiful woman in my life,” James answered in his flirtiest voice.
But Lily instead asked,” And who is the first one JAMES POTTER?”
“Oh my mother,” James answered sweetly. He also added,” your mother comes first too along with mum.”
This was enough to soften Lily and to divert her mind from asking about the prank.
“Oh! My eyes are burning. Someone save me,” Sirius commented in mock anger.
“Come on Lily we shall go walk around the lake and leave these stupid features who don’t have any idea how fantastic it is being with you,” James said before Lily could answer Sirius back.
With that they both left the common room and went towards the portrait.
After the small session of snogging behind the bushes James and Lily headed back towards the castle. On their way they crossed an empty classroom and James pushed Lily into the classroom and locked the door. He started kissing Lily.
“James enough. If someone sees us then it will be a matter of time and whole of the school will know,” Lily said.
But James was not interested in listening. Suddenly Peeves voice filled the corridor. He was singing some stupid song.
“Fast James! We should hurry,” Lily said.
And with that they both ran to the Gryffindor tower only to meet Severus Snape and few Slytherins in their way.
How was this? I know it wasn't long but ............. well I hope u like it and PLEASE REVIEW.
look it was great romance but you can't just have them be in one place then have them pop into another you have to build up to it describe when, how, and why they got there in the first place. and don't use abrieviations like luv for instance. and about Prank. i would have said like this.
“Hey guys! Where were you all?” asked Lily narrowing her eyes in suspicion.
“We were in the library. But why are you asking?” James asked in the sweetest voice he can manage (he always used a very sweet and polite voice in front of Lily to keep his impression.)
“Oh nothing. I just…… well I was thinking about your thing,” Lily whispered.
“What thing?” Sirius asked confused.
"The prank, Sirius." Lily said aggervated.
"OH! We decided to wait til later." he said.
"Oh well........." She tried to say but James suddenly started kissing her.
“James what are you doing?” Lily asked.
“Kissing the second most beautiful woman in my life,” James answered in his flirtiest voice.
But Lily instead asked,” And who is the first one JAMES POTTER?”
“Oh my mother,” James answered sweetly. He also added,” your mother comes first too along with mum.”
This was enough to soften Lily and divert her mind from trying to convince the Marauders from doing their silly prank.
“Oh! My eyes are burning. Someone save me,” Sirius commented in mock anger.
“Come on Lily we let's go walk around the lake and leave these stupid features who don’t have any idea how fantastic it is being with you,” James said whileirius smirked.
With that they both left the common room and went towards the portrait.
After the small session of snogging behind the bushes James and Lily headed back towards the castle. They were walking along and talking about Potions class hand-in-hand. There was a silence and James turned to Lily. They got closer and closer. Lily could feel James' breath on her face. James hesitated and looked at Lily's lips. Lily put her hand on the back James's neck and pushed his lips to hers.
Suddenly Peeves voice filled the corridor. He was singing some stupid song.
"C'mon we should go! That stupid Peeves will ruin our lives if he sees us." James said. They took off sprinting towards Gryffindor Tower
only to meet Severus Snape and few Slytherins in their way.
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Take what you can from
your dreams, make them
as real as anything
-Dave Matthews
Last edited by iluvhp1_7 on Apr 18th, 2006 at 09:04 PM
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Apr 12th, 2006 05:44 PM
Mmmm...nice new Doctor.... 
... Im enjoying every minute of it!!! 
