critias
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Gender: Location: United States
thx
Jul 28th, 2005 06:26 AM
intoxicatedpoet
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Gender: Male Location: France
np
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Jul 28th, 2005 06:28 AM
Coldfire
<3 <3 <3
Gender: Female Location: Vancouver, Canada
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Jul 28th, 2005 07:15 AM
intoxicatedpoet
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Gender: Male Location: France
quote: (post ) Originally posted by Coldfire
Here we go again *sigh* Do I really sound like a guy or something?? Cuz I'm not
I never presumed that, I was oblivious to your gender either way.
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Jul 28th, 2005 07:17 AM
Coldfire
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Gender: Female Location: Vancouver, Canada
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Jul 28th, 2005 07:21 AM
DreamingWarrior
Knight Errant
Gender: Male Location: Holding on tight, never lettin go!
danggg..... dude nice work. quote: (post ) Originally posted by Coldfire
Omg that's beautiful. Reminds me of me unfortunately Cept now I need to find a new muse... hey baby i can (a)muse you for a while... heh heh hahaha j/kquote: (post ) Originally posted by alcoholicpoet
I know Feanor, DW, and myself are of the male gender, are you a guy, Coldfire?
quote: (post ) Originally posted by alcoholicpoet
I know Feanor, DW, and myself are of the male gender, are you a guy, Coldfire?
dude... terrible. SHE IS A WOMAN !!!! and a hottie at that.... hahaha
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Jul 28th, 2005 09:55 PM
intoxicatedpoet
Senior Member
Gender: Male Location: France
Two new "line" poems
I
Death surrounds us
As the rich grow fat off the land.
Young men,
And their sons,
Die in cold wars in far off lands,
As the poor are felled by malnutrition.
Potter's graves
Are made on plains
That stink with death and oppression.
What is there to gain from war?
What is there to lose from death?
In a land of poverty,
And blackened hearts.
Why should we care of Tom Cruise,
and Britney Spears?
When with every breath we make,
Another breath is absent.
II
When sitting in,
Fields not dettered,
By worldly concerns,
And poverty.
I think, and I see,
And know that here, now,
Is what I should see,
of the land of the free.
The wars are forgotten,
And oppression is absent,
As I wander,
Freely,
Through the sunkissed forests,
And the soft rifting ponds,
Of lands not owned,
By human hands.
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Jul 30th, 2005 04:17 AM
Coldfire
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Gender: Female Location: Vancouver, Canada
Nice
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Jul 30th, 2005 04:24 AM
Coldfire
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Gender: Female Location: Vancouver, Canada
quote: (post ) Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
hahahahaha ohhhhhh yeahhhhh... hahahha
nice work al! very nice. how is the contest going?
Yeah I was wonderin that too
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Jul 31st, 2005 11:02 PM
intoxicatedpoet
Senior Member
Gender: Male Location: France
quote: (post ) Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
hahahahaha ohhhhhh yeahhhhh... hahahha
nice work al! very nice. how is the contest going?
Contest? Do you speak of my magazine publication?
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Aug 1st, 2005 12:22 AM
Coldfire
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Gender: Female Location: Vancouver, Canada
quote: (post ) Originally posted by alcoholicpoet
Contest? Do you speak of my magazine publication?
Mmmmm... right it was a magazine not a contest.... lol but yeah how's that goin??
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Aug 1st, 2005 01:34 AM
Fëanor
Senior Member
Gender: Male Location: Winterfell
quote: (post ) Originally posted by alcoholicpoet
Two new "line" poems
I
Death surrounds us
As the rich grow fat off the land.
Young men,
And their sons,
Die in cold wars in far off lands,
As the poor are felled by malnutrition.
Potter's graves
Are made on plains
That stink with death and oppression.
What is there to gain from war?
What is there to lose from death?
In a land of poverty,
And blackened hearts.
Why should we care of Tom Cruise,
and Britney Spears?
When with every breath we make,
Another breath is absent.
II
When sitting in,
Fields not dettered,
By worldly concerns,
And poverty.
I think, and I see,
And know that here, now,
Is what I should see,
of the land of the free.
The wars are forgotten,
And oppression is absent,
As I wander,
Freely,
Through the sunkissed forests,
And the soft rifting ponds,
Of lands not owned,
By human hands.
that is some awesome sh*t bro'!!!
Aug 1st, 2005 04:17 AM
intoxicatedpoet
Senior Member
Gender: Male Location: France
quote: (post ) Originally posted by Coldfire
Mmmmm... right it was a magazine not a contest.... lol but yeah how's that goin??
I sent three poems to them on july fifth hoping to get published in the augest issue, I still haven't gotten a response from them. If they're not going to publish me then they should atleast respond.
Fea---> Thanks.
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Aug 1st, 2005 09:24 PM
Fëanor
Senior Member
Gender: Male Location: Winterfell
quote: (post ) Originally posted by alcoholicpoet
I sent three poems to them on july fifth hoping to get published in the augest issue, I still haven't gotten a response from them. If they're not going to publish me then they should atleast respond.
Fea---> Thanks. dude, your poetry is all the thanks i need
Aug 1st, 2005 10:10 PM
intoxicatedpoet
Senior Member
Gender: Male Location: France
Another love poem.
III
I love you.
Do you, me?
I love your walk,
I love your face,
I love your body,
Your body's grace.
I love your life,
Your bright aura,
That radiates,
From your beautiful form,
In light of day,
And dark of night.
I love you,
And I hope you know,
I love you,
And I hope to show,
That love,
And to express,
Such love.
In the form of these poems,
And in the notes of my songs
I love you.
That,
You know,
Is true.
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Aug 2nd, 2005 06:07 AM
vaya_the_elf
You know you love elves
Gender: Female Location: In the forest where I belong
It's cute
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Aug 2nd, 2005 07:43 PM
Tassie
Senior Member
Gender: Female Location:
quote: (post ) Originally posted by alcoholicpoet
Two new "line" poems
I
Death surrounds us
As the rich grow fat off the land.
Young men,
And their sons,
Die in cold wars in far off lands,
As the poor are felled by malnutrition.
Potter's graves
Are made on plains
That stink with death and oppression.
What is there to gain from war?
What is there to lose from death?
In a land of poverty,
And blackened hearts.
Why should we care of Tom Cruise,
and Britney Spears?
When with every breath we make,
Another breath is absent.
II
When sitting in,
Fields not dettered,
By worldly concerns,
And poverty.
I think, and I see,
And know that here, now,
Is what I should see,
of the land of the free.
The wars are forgotten,
And oppression is absent,
As I wander,
Freely,
Through the sunkissed forests,
And the soft rifting ponds,
Of lands not owned,
By human hands.
What is there to lose from death?
Wow, these are great!
Aug 2nd, 2005 08:34 PM
Coldfire
<3 <3 <3
Gender: Female Location: Vancouver, Canada
quote: (post ) Originally posted by alcoholicpoet
Another love poem.
III
I love you.
Do you, me?
I love your walk,
I love your face,
I love your body,
Your body's grace.
I love your life,
Your bright aura,
That radiates,
From your beautiful form,
In light of day,
And dark of night.
I love you,
And I hope you know,
I love you,
And I hope to show,
That love,
And to express,
Such love.
In the form of these poems,
And in the notes of my songs
I love you.
That,
You know,
Is true.
I loverz it!
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Aug 3rd, 2005 05:13 PM
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