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cutie_pie13
4eva young
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Location: Pluto, or is it Saturn hmmmm... |
believe me we all no
dont worry about the PM thing, i will take care of that, mwhahaha (evil laugh) mwahahahahahaha
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Sep 15th, 2005 01:33 PM |
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jlee17xoxo412
Senior Member
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very nice evil laugh........very nice 
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Sep 15th, 2005 09:25 PM |
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xEsaulx
Bringer of Life
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Location: The Land of Quar |
Chapter Three:
Tragedy of the Knight
"And their he goes! Look at him fly on his Firebolt! He dodges a speeding bludger, and does a quick spin underneath the opposing chaser." shouted an excited voice from the stands. "And...I don't believe it folks! Volker just slammed the Chaser Karja. And I do believe that it is going to be a foul. Yes that is right folks, the USA recieved a foul shot. England isn't looking too good right now..."
(pitiful i know, but i want to know how people think of this, and where it is going.)
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Sep 15th, 2005 09:53 PM |
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HermioneLover14
*CRAZY IN LOVE*
 Gender: Female
Location: *somewhere??? who nows only I do.* |
What???? 
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Sep 15th, 2005 11:46 PM |
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xEsaulx
Bringer of Life
Gender: Male
Location: The Land of Quar |
just a different angle...i will pm you...
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Sep 15th, 2005 11:49 PM |
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HermioneLover14
*CRAZY IN LOVE*
Gender: Female
Location: *somewhere??? who nows only I do.* |
ok.
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Sep 15th, 2005 11:56 PM |
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cutie_pie13
4eva young
Gender: Female
Location: Pluto, or is it Saturn hmmmm... |
totally confused, but i think i kinda get it, but im not sure
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Sep 16th, 2005 11:20 AM |
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xEsaulx
Bringer of Life
Gender: Male
Location: The Land of Quar |
"Dreadful isn't it?" asked a man coming up to the top stands. "I mean England losing to the USA. I mean they must be the worse team in the league."
"Indeed they are...indeed they are." said another voice. "Too bad that they aren't going to finish the match. You do remember what Master asked us to do, right?"
"Of course I do. I am one who doesn't forget." said the first voice.
"But you are one to back down...right Draco?"
"I wasn't backing out." said Malfoy defensivly. "Dumbledore was poisoning my mind with lies."
"...And he misses!" shouted the commentator over the two's argument. "USA 140 England 30. England better shape up, or they are as good as dead..."
"...what Master said does not concern you." said the mysterious man.
"Who are you more fraid of...the Dark Lord, or Master?"
"You shouldn't be talking about this here." hissed the man.
"It doesn't matter any way..." Draco said to him. "No one will do anything about it. Plus Master knows what he is doing. And pretty soon, the Dark Lord will get a taste in what he deserves."
"Your honestly thinking about going with the Master? I mean, what if he fails? You will be punished too."
"Well, at least I know where my loyalty lies." he said smugly.
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Sep 18th, 2005 10:40 PM |
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HPRox90
Auror
 Gender: Female
Location: USA |
Great!!! Please post soon!
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Sep 18th, 2005 11:16 PM |
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cutie_pie13
4eva young
Gender: Female
Location: Pluto, or is it Saturn hmmmm... |
finally, phew!! it was great, post soon
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Sep 19th, 2005 06:38 PM |
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xEsaulx
Bringer of Life
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Location: The Land of Quar |
is this making more sense?
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Sep 19th, 2005 07:25 PM |
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cutie_pie13
4eva young
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Location: Pluto, or is it Saturn hmmmm... |
yup, i kind of get it!!!!
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Sep 21st, 2005 12:32 PM |
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shwilly
Junior Member
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Location: United States |
Why is it that everyone wants to get Harry and Hermione together? Harry is supposed to be with Ginny, and Ron with Hermione...gees...otherwise, the story is great!
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Sep 21st, 2005 04:10 PM |
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cutie_pie13
4eva young
Gender: Female
Location: Pluto, or is it Saturn hmmmm... |
okay, you have issues, you need to go on oprah
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Sep 25th, 2005 02:14 PM |
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xEsaulx
Bringer of Life
Gender: Male
Location: The Land of Quar |
hehehe how about Jerry? can't forget about him.
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Sep 25th, 2005 02:23 PM |
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cutie_pie13
4eva young
Gender: Female
Location: Pluto, or is it Saturn hmmmm... |
lol
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Sep 25th, 2005 02:24 PM |
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fallingoutgrl
Finally Free
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Location: off in the woods |
hey just found this. great job!
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Sep 30th, 2005 07:50 PM |
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xEsaulx
Bringer of Life
Gender: Male
Location: The Land of Quar |
Thank you all for your comments, and support. Me, and I am saying this for Hermionelover14...we really appreciate it. I shall post more shortly I promise.
"And I suppose your suggestion that I don't?" asked the man heatedly.
"No, I am not suggesting anything." said Malfoy acting innocent. "I'm merely saying that you should choose where your loyalty is. Can't be in the middle I suppose, because I can assure you that soon, once Master gets his full strength, hell will break loose, and all of the wizarding families will die, well except the ones who are loyal to the Master."
"So Master plans on killing the Dark Lord eh?" he asked half excited half worried.
"What's that? Oh, 'course he is. Don't you think he's getting a bit too old for the job? He's been using his dark magic for over thirty plus years."
"But the Dark Lord can't be killed easily." said the man anxiously. "You haven't even seen the Master before. For all we know it could be the Dark Lord himself trying to see where our loyalty lies."
"How would you know?" asked Malfoy once more in his smug voice. "I've always known who he was. He ordered me to tell no one of his identity."
Their was a loud cheer coming from the crowd. Malfoy forgot that he was at a Qudditch game, and he had more important things to do. He gripped his wand that he had concealed. He was gazing cross the stadium, as if he was searching for someone. The man took great interest in what he was doing. He noticed that he was concentrating on a fixed place. He followed his gaze, but it revealed nothing.
"What are you doing Malfoy?" he asked suspiciously.
"Silence, you insolent fool. I'm looking for my contact. I shouldn't have trusted the fool. Now shut up while I look for him."
"DO you actually THINK I am going to let some SEVEN-TEEN year old BOY tell me what to do?" he roared. He whipped out his wand. "Petrificus-" he had started.
"ADVADA KEDAVERA!" shouted Malfoy. The man was dead, and was falling from the stadium, hurling to the ground. Screams had filled the stadium.
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Sep 30th, 2005 09:02 PM |
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jlee17xoxo412
Senior Member
Gender: Female
Location: US / UK |
that was good. that snape he killed right? hmmmmm
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Sep 30th, 2005 11:52 PM |
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xEsaulx
Bringer of Life
Gender: Male
Location: The Land of Quar |
i cannot reveal that right now.
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