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jlee17xoxo412
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that was good.
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Sep 28th, 2005 09:52 PM |
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HPRox90
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That was awesome!!!
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Sep 28th, 2005 09:54 PM |
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fallingoutgrl
Finally Free
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great!
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Sep 29th, 2005 01:38 AM |
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SweetMagnolia17
making it count
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wow. I love your story. I love the way that you have it in Ginnys POV. It's original and your writing is very good! Finding original stories like this is pretty hard!
Keep Writing and I'll keep reading.
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thanks melane!
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Sep 29th, 2005 11:06 AM |
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jlee17xoxo412
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when you plannin to post pink
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Oct 6th, 2005 09:56 PM |
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Diamonds
I'm Special.
Gender: Female
Location: Newcastle, England |
okay, just let me tell you guys something:
my computer broke a month ago, and , as some of you may know, I'm not supposed to be on any kind of forum. i have windows XP, and the internet only works on my dads account. not mine, or my brothers, or my mothers. so, if you are INCREDIBLY lucky, i will sneak on and post. I will not be answering PMs
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Oct 25th, 2005 08:32 PM |
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Diamonds
I'm Special.
Gender: Female
Location: Newcastle, England |
okay, i have promised a friend something PM me NOW if you enjoy a good read
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Oct 26th, 2005 09:00 PM |
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Diamonds
I'm Special.
Gender: Female
Location: Newcastle, England |
my computer is gonna be taken apart today/tomorrow so i dunno when my next part is gonna be out im so sorry guys
if anyone tells you that you can see who's blocking you on msn, and they send you a link DO NOT UNDER ANY CIRCUMATNCES CLICK THE LINK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!! this is the reason my computer has to be taken apart
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Oct 27th, 2005 01:15 PM |
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Diamonds
I'm Special.
Gender: Female
Location: Newcastle, England |
"So? I'm a growing man, Herm!"
"Yeah. Right. Your arms are so tweedy they look like they could brake," you teased.
"What, and yours aren't?"
"I'm a girl, Ronald, I don't need muscles,"you retorted.
'Ha. Take that. He hates that name!' you thought.
"Yeah, well, you're just, um, you-"
"Are the best at clamping you." you finished his sentence for him.
"No. Mum, I'm hungry," Ron moaned.
"Shut up, Ron," you muttered to yourself (loudly).
"What's to eat, Mum?"
"You know, I should start calling you Ronaldo. Yeah, I like that. Ronaldo! Ha!"
"Ginny, stop teasing your brother. I could whip up some fish, if you like," Mrs Weasley said.
"Please."
"Why is everyone in this house obsessed with meat and fish? And birds?"
"Ginny..."
"I refuse to eat it! I've told you, I'm going veggie," actually, you were going on a diet, but your mother would probably explode if she found out.
"Shut up, Ginny! Nobody cares about you turning into a stupid vegitarian," Ron snapped.
"Nobody cares about your fish, Ronaldo!"
"I do!"
"Well I care about going on a- I mean veggie!"
"SHUT UP!!!! Both of you! I've had enough!" Molly shouted, "Ginny, upstairs, Ronald, sit down and eat."
She plonked the fish under his nose, onto the table.
"No fear. I'm outta here, nobody wants to see him eat," you eyed Ron and his fish before turning on your heal into the hallway.
~*~*~*~*~*~
Skip.
It's now the 30th of July, the day before Harry's birthday.
"Whazgoinon?" you asked when you walked downstairs to pandemonium at 8am that morning. You'd gotten up early (well, early for you) because everyone had been clattering around making a racket.
"It's Harry's birthday tomorrow, and we need to find the presents we've hid so well we can't find them, wrap the presents, keep Harry occupied, find a spell to make the food and keep it 100% fresh until tomorrow, get the perfect decorations, which Fleur's choosing so it's gonna take a few years for that, and find Pig, who's gone missing," George explained to you.
"And we're making a surprise," Fred winked at you as he walked past, carrying some huge, weird shaped...thing.
"My God..." you murmered.
"And Mum's gonna rope you in, so get dressed and put your game face on. Chop chop," George finished, patting your face as he said "chop chop".
You dragged yourself back up the stairs and into your room.
"Hey."
"Get out," you said to Harry, who was sitting on your bed.
"You're friendly," he smiled.
"Whatever," you mumbled, "I need to get changed."
"I'll just hide under your bed. Everyone seems to be avoiding me and telling me to go somewhere else. Your mum said to wake you up and stay in here."
"Um...okay...just sit in the wardrobe..." you said, a little confused (hey, you'd just got up!). You had a wardrobe/closet fitted into the wall, so it wasn't taking up room. You realised how awful you must have looked at his time in the morning, all groggy and stuff. You pulled your tightest black jeans and red off the shoulder top and pointed to your wardrobe.
"In."
"What?! I'm not going in!" Harry obviously thought you'd been joking. You hadn't.
"Well, you're certainly not staying out here," you said.
"Just...turn around."
"No."
"Can I not just stand in the corner?"
"Fine," you agreed, pulling a pillowcase of one of your pillows.
"What's that for?" Harry eyed the case warily, as if you were going to strangle him with it.
"To put over your head. Gimme your glasses." He handed them over reluctantly. You yanked the pillowcase over his head and steered him to a corner in your room.
"No peeping." You pulled a strapless red bra out of your drawer, slipped off your PJs and slipped on the jeans and tee.
"Done."
"Can I take this off my head now?"
"Uh huh, " you couldn't help but smile at him. When he pulled off the case, his hair was even more messed up than usual, and he just looked so cute. "Here's you glasses."
When Harry slipped them up his nose, and he could see properly, he nearly gasped out loud at you. You looked fabulous, who wouldn't gasp?
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mcd222
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keep going
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Oct 28th, 2005 05:21 PM |
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Diamonds
I'm Special.
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more tomorrow hun 
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Oct 28th, 2005 05:28 PM |
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Diamonds
I'm Special.
Gender: Female
Location: Newcastle, England |
btw can you see my sig?
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Oct 28th, 2005 05:28 PM |
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mcd222
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no
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Oct 28th, 2005 08:32 PM |
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SweetMagnolia17
making it count
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Man that's So good!!!! hurry up and write some more!!!!!!
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thanks melane!
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Oct 28th, 2005 08:42 PM |
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Brunette Angel
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Glad you could write more! I really like it!
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Oct 28th, 2005 09:50 PM |
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jlee17xoxo412
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loved it 
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Oct 29th, 2005 12:26 AM |
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cutie_pie13
4eva young
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Location: Pluto, or is it Saturn hmmmm... |
yeah it rox
post more soon, pleeeeeeez!!!!
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Oct 29th, 2005 11:04 AM |
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fallingoutgrl
Finally Free
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Location: off in the woods |
awesome. more!!!!!!!!
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Oct 29th, 2005 01:28 PM |
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Diamonds
I'm Special.
Gender: Female
Location: Newcastle, England |
MCD222 HHHHHHHHHHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLPPPPPP
PPP if its gonna be out today please HELP!!!
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Oct 29th, 2005 06:49 PM |
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Diamonds
I'm Special.
Gender: Female
Location: Newcastle, England |
"What?" you grinned at him, recognising that face and sharp intake of breath; that reminded you of Dean Thomas. You smiled a little; he was so sweet, but he was a bit <i>too</i> sweet, sometimes. He acted as if you were three years younger than him, not one. You just wanted to be treated like an adult for on; you were sick and tired of being the baby Weasley. You wanted to be the babe instead, but that wasn't going to happen in a hurry. Not in the Burrow, anyway.
"Nothing..." Harry muttered, going slightly pink. Excellent
"No, really. What?" you asked in a sugary voice, that you used for pulling guys. But it wasn't all wet and drippy, more sexy but sweet at the same time.
"Nothing, I told you!"
"Whatever," you sat down next to him, making sure your arm brushed his. It sent the butterflies in your stomach (which were just flying around at a normal pace) clattering around as if there was a hurricane in your stomach. "We haven't talked much lately. How are you?" You looked right into his deep green eyes as you said this. This was your Subtle Flirting techniche. Keep 'em wondering, and they'll stay keen.
"I'm good. A bit left out from Hermione and Ron, though. I mean, they're not all cosied up, but it's like they have this...wall between them and the real world. It's like they're surrounded by a bubble." Harry said, a little sadly. "What about you, you seem a bit zoned out lately?"
"Well, I s'pose. I just feel left out, too, I guess. I mean, last summer, we were hanging out together, the four of us, and it was great," you smiled at him, "but now Ron and Hermione...well, like you say, it's like they have a barrier between their world and the actual world."
'I miss that feeling,' you thought to yourself, sighing inwardly.
"Yeah..."
For at least five minutes, you were both silent, thinking about your past with each other. Well, you were, you didn't know about Harry, but he probably was, too.
"Ginny!! Harry!! Quiditch!!" Ron called.
"Great, I could do with some Quiditch," Harry grinned.
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Two hours later, you four trudged into the house, battered, bruised ( Ron had taken place of Beater), cold and wet (it had been raining slightly).
"Hey, where'd the circus go?" you asked as you walked into the quiet kitchen.
"Ha, ha. Everything...got sorted out. All prepared." your father answered.
"Good. Can I relax now, without having to hide the house from You-Know-Who? Well, not him, but you guys know what I mean."
Everyone pretended they hadn't even heard you.
"Right, well, I'm off to the shower." Ron announced.
"Not before me!" you yelled, running up the stairs. For the first time in weeks, you were the first person to have a shower.
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The next day, you woke up refreshed, excited and lively, but you weren't sure why. You looked at your calander, saw that it was Harry's birthday, and squealed. You had a plan, and you had to put it into action as soon as possible.
You dressed in old jeans and tee, not very galm, but okay for now. You were going to spend most of the day in your room, getting ready, anyway. You had to look perfect.
You ran downstairs, got some cereal (fitnesse if you must know -Hermione enjoyed it and she brought it over for you), some fruit (strawberries, rasberries, apples, grapes, and whatever else you want) and a bowl of salad. And a LOT of Heinz Salad Cream Light (2% fat, y'know), and dragged it up to the bathroom. Everything else was in there (except your good clothes, but whatever).
Harry's surprise party started at three, so you had five hours to get ready, but first you ate the cereal.
Now to get ready, you thought.
You started by getting a load of candles, a face mask and loads of bubble bath and dotting the candles around the bath. You then started filling the bath, and added the bubbles. Then you took great care to apply the face mask.
You slid into the bath and had a good, half hour soak. You then took off the face mask. Then towel dried your hair the best you could, and but styling cream all over it. Then plaits, to make it wavy (not normally how you wore it, but you loved it). You dried yourself, but on clean underwear and began on the make-up. This took an whole hour. By the time you were finished, you had two hours and a half left.
Now for the make-up. This took a whole hour. One hour and a half left.
You ate most of the salad, and some fruit.
You blew out the candles, and walked to your room.
Clothes, you thought.
You opened your wardrobe and sighed. You didn't have a clue what to wear. You looked through your wardrobe, and came up with a short, really tight black bandau top with a pair of lips on the front and a black mini-skirt. You looked fab. With forty-five minutes to spare, you just sat, leaning against your door, a wizard romance book. It was one of your favourites, and it was called Blossoming Love, By Sasha Graden. You were so engrossed you didn't realise the time until Hermione knocked on your door.
"Ginny? It's starting in ten minutes!" you jumped up and opened the door.
"'Kay. I'll walk down with you, one sec." you slicked on some extra lip gloss on top of your already red lips to keep it shining. You looked up at Hermone and looked at her clothes. She, like yourself, was wearing a skirt, only her's was a longer than yours. It was plain denim, and her top was pink with "What ARE You Talking About" written on.
"You look great, Gin!" she cried, shutting your bedroom door.
"You too, Herm."
"Can I lend some jewelry?" she asked.
"Sure...I better but a necklace on, too." you picked out a silver chain with a pair of lips at the end out of your box, and a bracelet with all sorts of different chams, which Hermione had got you for your birthday.
"Let's go." Hermione was wearing a necklace with a pink pearl heart at the end, with three small pearls on either side of it.
You walked down to the front room, your arms linked.
"It's us," you whispered to everyone, and crouched down behind a chair with Hermione.
"Hey, Harry, come down here, mate!!" Ron called, and everyone stopped breathing all of a sudden.
Harry's footsteps could be heard on the stairs, and the room was silent.
"Ron?"
"In here."
"SUPRISE!!!!!!!!!!" you all screamed at him.
"Happy birthday, Harry!" (Hermione)
"You're of age, now!" (Ron)
"Harry, open your presents!" (Fred)
"What does it feel like to be seventeen for the first time?" (Ron again)
"Drinks all round!" (Mad Eye Moody)
"Good on you, Harry!" (Tonks)
"This is from me." (Lupin, who was holding Tonks' hand)
"Hey." (You)
After five minutes, the babble died down and Harry had his presents thrown at him. Well, all except the one you were gonna give him.
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