Well that peom/letter (call it whatever) was writen about my ex best friend. And like the poem said we basicly took her in as part of our oun family. She was CONSTATNLY over our house, never went home. We fed her and loved her so much. She wasnt brought up great and hsa a tendinsy to be shifty... and light fingured. We never really caught her stealing from us before red handed that is and when we did.... it hurt so bad. Also she was like my 1st love... hidden of course .. because then bi/lez was not excepted at all. So now our family moved and i have weird emotions about the whole thing... like i said i miss so alot... but im still glad i got away from her.
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aww babes bites im glad too i mean if u grew more feelings for her it would hurt a lot more
also even if u moved babe maybe u should think i mean ive done some bad things too but bein a good bff is looking past that i know ur family moved but do try gettin in touch with her and remaining a friend if she had to steal from her bff she must hav a good reason even if not she has problems and needs support
Wow i have not write in a long time. Our Internet went down last night and i wrote 2 poems
The 1st one goes alone with my sig.
I lay next to you late at night.
Not able to sleep so instead I enjoy watching you sleep so peacefully.
A tear runs down my cheek.
My mind flows with emotion.
I hold your warm soft body close to me.
I think to myself.
“How could someone treat this beauty so wrong?”
Then an unexpected feeling of anger fills my thoughts toward the man who hurt you.
Random and scattered visions of revenge now show up in my minds eye.
Then I feel your body shiver and I am brought back to the moment.
I hold you even closer stroking your cheek and softly kiss your head.
Internally swearing to nether let a man hurt you again.
I whisper softly
“I’ll take good care of you”
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Last edited by ~Bun Bun~ on Jun 16th, 2006 at 07:56 PM
And this next one i asked my sister for a subject and i would write on it.
The subject- Honesty.
A lie there, a lie there the lies are everywhere.
Where is the honesty?
Simple lies or big lies they are all the same.
Where is the honesty?
A man lies to his wife when she asks where he has been.
Where is the honesty?
A child lies to his teacher about a missing piece of homework.
Where is the honesty?
A young teenage girl lies to a guy about her age.
Where is the honesty?
Everyone lies but I wonder if we even know why?
Could be fear of the truth but yet some will say they do not have fear.
So again I ask where is the honesty?
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I don’t know what to do.
The only thing I am sure about is that my love for him is true.
But I fear I have only remained for selfish reasons.
Though I made a promise to stay threw out all the many sessions.
What I fear most is to be alone.
With his love and with his touch I feel I am home.
But I am only hurting him.
Because he is in this to win
Threw my anger I run from him
Now I wonder if I really was running away for him.
Only if he knew
What would he think
Nobody has ever made me feel the way he has.
But also nobody has put me threw what he has.
I tried to leave for good
But instead of moving on
I drove myself into insanity
I want to be there for him in his darkest hour
Instead I only push him away.
He thinks he found the perfect women
But I am merely a girl trying to find her way.
Lost and twisted up inside
Now all I can do is sit here and cry.
Thinking so many thoughts inside.
I’ll take a breath and hide.
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Looking into your eyes I melt inside.
I can see the passion in the wau they sparkle.
A rush of emotion fluds threw my body.
A singel tear runs down my cheek.
A tear of passion
A tear of love
A tear of what we have become
A tear of the past
A tear of the furture
A tear of now
And most of all
A tear for you.
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It's dark down here
In this hole i dug
No speck of light
Surrounded by nothing
No sliver of happieness in sight
I tryed to big myself out but I only fell deeper
Deeper and deeper i fell
Into absolute nothingness
The only sound I hear
All the voices of those who i disopointed
Those voices ringing in my ears
And yet i hear nothing
It's dark down here
In this hole I dug.
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your poems are beautiful simple and innocent .. i like it too much .. indeed just I was reading and asking my self .. is there any body can write like this nice poems? and i found the answer yes .. she is bunny !!!
Okay okay lets not get hostel here.
I am not the only one at fault my dear.
Tho I will not stoop down to your level
The words you speak are like words of the devil.
Now let me ask you just one thing
Why was it you ever gave me that ring?
Some how inside I don't want to believe that I was blind
Blind to the fact that this road of love had so many twists and twines.
You speak of how you felt mummified.
Was it because you had so much to hide.
I think you are forgetting one thing
Who is the one who took care of you when you were bleeding
I never really felt your side
Even when all i wanted to do was run and hide.
Terrell. S. Baxter I really did love you
And I will never be the same because whats left of my heart
Beats only for you.
I don't want to believe it no make it go away.
This can't be the end and it ended in such a bad way.
But whats done is done
I'll move on somehow someday.
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ill explanin to you guys if u want.. 
Nov 8th, 2005 08:24 AM
A few hidden meanings are in there 
ur poems are awesome!!! i liked the one Lost a whole lot, but its all good, absolutely wonderful 
