Neo Darkhalen
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quote: (post ) Originally posted by caedusrulesall
You got one of the more major roles in the story.
thank you
I write stories as well, i have sort of forgot about one as time has gone on.
Jul 27th, 2008 08:43 PM
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quote: (post ) Originally posted by caedusrulesall
I'm at 67 pages and have been working on it for 2 months.
Quality over quantity. I've reworked the entire book twice, as the plot started getting cliche'd in places.
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Jul 27th, 2008 08:44 PM
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wait, not a year. I must have started it January or February this year, my mistake.
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Jul 27th, 2008 08:44 PM
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quote: (post ) Originally posted by The Grey Fox
Quality over quantity. I've reworked the entire book twice, as the plot started getting cliche'd in places.
I'll probably have to rework the book, but what I've got so far is still pretty good.
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Jul 27th, 2008 08:45 PM
Neo Darkhalen
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quote: (post ) Originally posted by The Grey Fox
Quality over quantity. I've reworked the entire book twice, as the plot started getting cliche'd in places.
always a good thing, notes prove useful...more often then not.
Jul 27th, 2008 08:45 PM
Sol Valentine
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quote: (post ) Originally posted by caedusrulesall
To be truthful, you're only in a few scenes, Mr. Valentine. But you send Darkhalen after the first main character, so you play a fairly important role.
quote: (post ) Originally posted by Sol Valentine
But still!
I am in your debt.
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Jul 27th, 2008 08:45 PM
BruceSkywalker
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I have said that there is a possibility for you and me
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Jul 27th, 2008 08:47 PM
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Mine is about the life of a manically depressed loner, who suffers from multiple personality syndrome,l schizophrenia, and paranoia, and spends his time trying to figure out where his life took it's major wrong turn. It's mainly based in his thoughts and feelings, only really talking or engaging with others on a very infrequent basis. As it goes on, his mind gets more and more warped and disturbed, and starts getting obsessed with a certain person.
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Jul 27th, 2008 08:48 PM
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quote: (post ) Originally posted by The Grey Fox
Mine is about the life of a manically depressed loner, who suffers from multiple personality syndrome,l schizophrenia, and paranoia, and spends his time trying to figure out where his life took it's major wrong turn. It's mainly based in his thoughts and feelings, only really talking or engaging with others on a very infrequent basis. As it goes on, his mind gets more and more warped and disturbed, and starts getting obsessed with a certain person.
That sounds kind of like Darkhalen. He's pretty insane in the story.
I'm not revealing the plot of mine though.
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Jul 27th, 2008 08:49 PM
BruceSkywalker
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Some people like it when you look at them
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Jul 27th, 2008 08:49 PM
The Grey Fox
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quote: (post ) Originally posted by caedusrulesall
That sounds kind of like Darkhalen. He's pretty insane in the story.
I'm not revealing the plot of mine though.
you're posting it here?
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Jul 27th, 2008 08:49 PM
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Writing from experience is useful, too. You should try that, if you haven't already.
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Jul 27th, 2008 08:50 PM
Neo Darkhalen
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quote: (post ) Originally posted by caedusrulesall
That sounds kind of like Darkhalen. He's pretty insane in the story.
I'm not revealing the plot of mine though.
that sounds kinda like me in real life
Jul 27th, 2008 08:51 PM
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quote: (post ) Originally posted by The Grey Fox
you're posting it here?
No. My story is too long to post here. I don't know who I'm going to show it to.
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Jul 27th, 2008 08:51 PM
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I need some cereal before I sleep. back soon.
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Jul 27th, 2008 08:53 PM
Sol Valentine
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quote: (post ) Originally posted by The Grey Fox
Mine is about the life of a manically depressed loner, who suffers from multiple personality syndrome,l schizophrenia, and paranoia, and spends his time trying to figure out where his life took it's major wrong turn. It's mainly based in his thoughts and feelings, only really talking or engaging with others on a very infrequent basis. As it goes on, his mind gets more and more warped and disturbed, and starts getting obsessed with a certain person.
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Jul 27th, 2008 08:53 PM
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SPAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAM!
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Jul 27th, 2008 08:53 PM
Agent White
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quote: (post ) Originally posted by Sol Valentine
I'm sure Mr. Fox's plot reminds you of yourself, Mr. Valentine.
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Jul 27th, 2008 08:53 PM
Sol Valentine
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quote: (post ) Originally posted by caedusrulesall
I'm sure Mr. Fox's plot reminds you of yourself, Mr. Valentine.
No not that.
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Jul 27th, 2008 08:56 PM
Agent White
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quote: (post ) Originally posted by Sol Valentine
No not that.
Are you sure, Mr. Valentine? It sounds quite like you.
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Jul 27th, 2008 08:56 PM
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