OK you guys i cant sleep so i thought i would write a little bit more story!
" Harry,Harry wake up mum says its time for your birthday breakfast" Ginny said Harry opened his eyes slowly and said " Five more minutes." "no now" ginny said pressing her lips to his and laughing a little bit " " Harry hurry up lupin and tonks are here and they need to talk to you." ginny said before walking out the door swaying her hips heavily. harry looked over to Ron and saw that he and Hermione were arm in arm asleep together. he laughed softly before getting a quick shower and getting dressed and going down stairs.when he got there he saw everyone he considered his family all except.......Sirius and his real family he sighed heavily and walked the rest of the way into the room " Well is a-bou time i am hungry and mummy made me wait for you" said natilea Fleur hushed her quickly and said " Appy birthday arry" sweeping over to him to give him a kiss on each cheek. ginny gave her a disgusted look that bill saw and he burst out laughing Fleur turned around and asked he husband " vhat ees eet bill?" " oh , nothing he said hitting ginny playfully on the arm."lupin looked up and smiled faintly at harry and harry noticed that he was playing with tonks fingers under the table and rubbing her hand with his thumb every so often. tonks looked at harry and smiled and then looked at lupin adoringly before saying "happy birthday harry, and i have to go to work now but i will See you soon" she stood and pecked lupin on his lips and apparated before he could kiss her back. ginny then came to stand with harry and he put his arm around her waist before pulling her out a chair and then sitting himself. polite conversation was made until they heard a shrill scream from Hermione. harry was the first to the stairs lupin right behind him harry noticed that Fred and George were holding back ginny and natilea he burst through the door and saw Ron on top of Hermione chocking her and saying in an all too familiar voice "where is harry?! where is harry?!" " I don't know!" Hermione wailed. "I'm right here you stupid git!" yelled harry. Ron looked up and his eyes were pure whit and an evil grin spread across his face " Just the person i was looking for" said voldemorts cold cruel voice.......... thats all for know hope you enjoyed!!
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OMG! okay first none of you can spell it's FLEUR!!!!!! meaning flower not fluer...that sounds liek a bad flu or something. TWo sorry but this just doesn't work for me....bill and fleur wouldn't have a child old enough to do all of this. THREE! sorry to sound liek a mod but you need spoilers if your gonna continue with expicit nature, or it will be closed.
and finally the story is going alittle fast, i don't think ron adn hermonie would get married quite so soon, or decide to, and harry and ginny wouldn't be doing it in a shed, harry is more classy and would do it right...sorry but i'm nto believe this at all.
(sorry for being a jerk)
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Ron and harry began deuling, while evryone else went out side. Molly went to go floo the order. curses and hexe's and jinxe's were flying all over the place, then at the same time as each other ron/voldemort and harry both said the killing curse, voldemort's missed but harry's hit dead center a high pitched wail filled the room, harry watched in horror as rons body got it's coloring back and his eye's turbed to normal and then ron dropped to the floor, lifelessly.
don't hate me but this is all i can coe up with i know its like really really short but i will post more soon and plus i have like four other story's im typing right now on this website
fanfiction.net when you get to the homepage click on the search link and type in my screen name. my screen name is
misses-charlie-weasly,
so yeah chek it out and tell me what you think of my story's there!
latah my freaky friends
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ok problems with the story first off you said Harry was living with the Weasley's because he was of age, then you also have his birthday, which either means you made a mistake, or we skipped entire year seven which would make Ron/Voldemort make sense, but if it is still seventh year, it wouldn't happen so soon, Voldemort is to worried about his horcruxes.
You need to learn how to spell before you start correcting peoples mistakes.
For instance I was taught to spell like L-I-K-E.
Not L-I-E-K
Use a dicitonary next time!
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Apr 11th, 2006 12:58 AM
... Im enjoying every minute of it!!! 
more post.... FINALLY!
