Gender: Female Location: on the dingy with dear ol' Jacky
ok u guys I'm gonna write a really small scene...and I just wanted to suggest that maybe we shouldn't get them together in this one...maybe we should get them together in 6 cause this love/hate thing they got going on is wayyyyyy hot it's nice to have suspence in there but it may also be too much so lets just wait and see what happens if someone has a nice way of getting them together that'll be good...so anyways:
jack is in his cabin playing around with his new north-pointing compass...
jack: the BLOODY stupid thing ONLY points north what kind of a...
Gibbs comes in.
gibbs:capt'n the crew's up so...do we have a heading? I know you gave the compass back to it's owners so we would ALL understand if...
jackh noooo....not you too? don't tell me you don't know who I am....
gibbs mumbles nervousely.
jack:what's that?
"you're..captain jack sparrow..."gibbs says in a VERY tired and impatient voice.
jack:BEING captain jack sparrow..I'll know how to find the treasure even if I have a compass that points north savvy?
gibbs:we're setting off to find the..treasure?
jack:isn't that what we were ORIGINALY going to do?soooooo....head out to the west we're headed to...the new world. rather exciting if I say so myself..one of the very VERY few places I haven't visited.03
gibbs stumbles out of the cabin. we can hear him yell "hoast the sail" and "head to the west" as he goes runing around.
suddenly will comes barging into the cabin.
jack:what NOW?
will:you're headed to the WEST? JACK I thought we agreed that I can go back to port royal and resume my rightful place as....
jack:wow..woooow hold on. let's examine that claim for a moment shall we? who was it that led you to destroy you're worst enemy and who was it that was responsible for you becoming governer in the first place so who is it really that should be governer of port royal?
will opens his mouth to protest but jack beats him to it.
jack: BUT I graciousely forfit my position to you AND I save you from doing something incredibly STUPID....so instead of going back to you're boring little life you get to join me on ONE LAST ADVENTURE savvy?
will looks shocked and still has a finger in the air and his moth open as if he wants to say something but jack pushes him out of the cabin.
jack: no need to thank me lad..you're VERY welcome! now you must excuse me this new compass is rather hard to work with so I must get busy.
jack shuts the door in will's face
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YAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH go tee_pirategirl that was a mad scene n i luv ur idea bout fixing da relationship in da 6th script thats a very good idea cuz i think da movie is at bout a 2hour length nearly so heres an idea we end dis in a cliffhnger again lol but b4 we do dat bring some past enemy in2 it rite at da end. the enemy is also going after da treasure but instead of copying da 2nd movie he/she (who said it had 2 be a he? ... oh me oops) could be after it 2 i dunno destroy england (its a magical chest right lol) so of course liz, victoria n julian would want 2 save england cuz its still sorta their home n i dunno every1 at da end every1 gets captured n hung cept 4 jack n liz/victoria lol they escape but get caught again jack is shot dun dun dun n dies but b4 dat he tells victoria/liz 2 keep going n not look bak n keep running n save themselves n above all continur da age of piracy very very sad .....
just jokin my imagination ran away wif me lol we'll do something on a happier note lol but i hope we do make a 6th n make full of action, swordfighting, da seven seas and above all full of "wobbley-legged rum-soaked pirates" lol
oh just had an idea cuz we killed beckett wouldnt mr.mercer be in charge next wat if he took becketts place ..... and was even more evil (if thats possible lol)n mr. mercer actually gets rid of piracy n the surviving pirates go in2 hiding 4eva ....... n ........ no soz it happened again - imagination got da beta of me lol
anyway i luv dis story n hope we do write a 6th i think itll be da best out of all da scripts weve created .... i hope so cuz i think they keep getting beta n beta lol dis is gr8 fun guys cuz we keep getting more experienced anyway enough of my rambling random tlk lets keep going full sail ahead!
Last edited by surfchikpir8fan on Sep 30th, 2006 at 01:55 AM
lol thanx i thought about introducing an army of mermaids lol that join da pirates n fight 4 piracy i dunno cuz beckett still thinks hes controlling da compass still, but now da mermaids? or flying seahorses if ya like r reading da compass then they go 2 where beckett wants jack n da black pearl but anyway that was wat i thought was gonna but beckett is dead now so well just replace Mr. Mercer? or whoeva else is an evil EITC twit wif becketts name. so i dunno if any1 can understand wat im saying n catch me drift lol! i really wanna write a sixth
Gender: Female Location: on the dingy with dear ol' Jacky
ok lets end the 5th with another scene (someone write it please cause I'm really not good at this) and then we can go off to the sixth and I loved your idea surfchik but yeah it would be better if it was just a tad happier but I liked the whole idea in general
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I might as well introduce you to her in this thread. This Is Jaqulien Sparrow (in my fic alex is jack sparrow's adopted son) any way daughter of Alex and Abi surrendered to Norrington when she was a babe in fear of her safety, Norrington Kept her till she was twelve but gave her to the orphange b.c he wasn't able to care for her anymore. Jackie is a nice outgoing girl whom's popular with her peers (unlike her mother) and has dreamed of meeting her parents for as long as she could remember. Tell me what you think of her please
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Sep 29th, 2006 06:16 AM
h noooo....not you too? don't tell me you don't know who I am....
