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Spideys Sister
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Location: That place with the stuff... Yeah,

Think of anyway that The host could be connected to this insted of some random pedestrian...

Ex: Eddie dumps her she goes off mad symbiote attaches itself to her they go on a rampage, find Edd beat the crap out of him spidey defends edd she goes off on spidey.... blah blah blah...

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Dazzler619
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LOL she wasn't a love interest of Eddie.This takes place after Spidey separates Eddie and the symbiote.

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Oh well you're own your own with this one.

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Sep 19th, 2006 09:11 PM

Scarecrow756
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Here is the Carnage/Vivian Scene.

Fade In:
Vivien comes out of her hairdresser and walks into a deep dark alleyway. She is 25 years old; she has long black hair with yellow streams. She also has fairly dark skin. As she approaches the alleyway, a big huge man approaches her from behind her. He is wearing a sea blue t-shirt, he has orange hair and looks in bad shape.

Cletus Kassady: Have you got the package.
Vivien: Yes I have.
Cletus Kassady: Well get it then?

She suddenly takes the package out of her handbag; the object is a small brown box.

Vivien: I had to get through a lot of trouble to get this. Now where is the money you promised?
Cletus Kassady: Ah here it is my dear just as promised.

He reaches into his pocket and takes out $200 and hands it to her.

Vivien: Only $200, I need more then, how do you expect me to pay the rent and bills with this kind of money.

Suddenly he grabs her by the collar.

Cletus Kassady: You think that you are the only person who has got problems, I am a ****ing wanted man on the ran. So I suggest you be happy with what you are given. Now if you don�t mind I need I another one of those packages.

Vivien: No I won�t do it.

Suddenly he takes out a gun from his pocket and points it at her head.

Cletus Kassady: I am afraid you have no say in the matter. Do you want me to tell your father of what you have been doing recently?

Vivien suddenly turns around and groans.

Vivien: No.
Cletus Kassady: Good. Now I will be back in five days. Remember I was so close to pulling the trigger this time, next time I won�t be so patient.

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Sep 20th, 2006 06:49 PM

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Kovacs86
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Re: Any Good Writers For Spidey Script Out There?

quote: (post)
Originally posted by Dazzler619
I need help of a certain Spider-Man script for a character I created in it and I was wondering if anyone is interested to help me

I can give it a go, i've written various JSA scripts for amateur films and have an English A-Level... smile

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quote: (post)
Originally posted by Scarecrow756
Here is the Carnage/Vivian Scene.

Fade In:
Vivien comes out of her hairdresser and walks into a deep dark alleyway. She is a 25 years old; she has long black hair with yellow streams. She also has fairly dark skin.
As she approaches the alleyway, a big huge man approaches her from behind her. He is wearing a sea blue t-shirt, he has orange hair and looks in bad shape.

Claudius Kassady: Have you got the package.
Vivien: Yes I have.
Claudius Kassady: Well get it then?

She suddenly takes the package out of her handbag; the object is a small brown box.

Vivien: I had to get through a lot of trouble to get this. Now where is the money you promised?
Claudius Kassady: Ah here it is my dear just as promised.

He reaches into his pocket and takes out $200 and hands it to her.

Vivien: Only $200, I need more then, how do you expect me to pay the rent and bills with this kind of money.

Suddenly he grabs her by the collar.

Claudius Kassady: You think that you have got problems, I am a ****ing wanted man on the ran. So I suggest you be happy with what you are given. Now if you don�t mind I need I another one of those packages.

Vivien: No I won�t do it.

Suddenly he takes out a gun from his pocket and points it at her head.

Claudius Kassady: I am afraid you have no say in the matter. Do you want me to tell your father of what you have been doing recently?

Vivien suddenly turns around and groans.

Vivien: No.
Claudius Kassady: Good. Now I will be back in five days. Remember I was so close to pulling this trigger this time, next time I won�t be so patient.

Cletus

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Sep 20th, 2006 06:51 PM

Scarecrow756
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quote: (post)
Originally posted by Doc Potato
Cletus

I edited that, thanks Doc. What did you like about the scene?

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Last edited by Scarecrow756 on Sep 20th, 2006 at 06:59 PM

Sep 20th, 2006 06:56 PM

Dazzler619
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Re: Re: Any Good Writers For Spidey Script Out There?

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Originally posted by Doc Potato
I can give it a go, i've written various JSA scripts for amateur films and have an English A-Level...

Thanks man smile

Scarecrow, that was a good scipt you did.I can't wait to read the rest of it thumb up

BTW guys, I think I have an idea of how Vivian gets her symbiote

Sep 20th, 2006 08:57 PM

Scarecrow756
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quote: (post)
Originally posted by Scarecrow756
Here is the Carnage/Vivian Scene.

Fade In:
Vivien comes out of her hairdresser and walks into a deep dark alleyway. She is 25 years old; she has long black hair with yellow streams. She also has fairly dark skin. As she approaches the alleyway, a big huge man approaches her from behind her. He is wearing a sea blue t-shirt, he has orange hair and looks in bad shape.

Cletus Kassady: Have you got the package.
Vivien: Yes I have.
Cletus Kassady: Well get it then?

She suddenly takes the package out of her handbag; the object is a small brown box.

Vivien: I had to get through a lot of trouble to get this. Now where is the money you promised?
Cletus Kassady: Ah here it is my dear just as promised.

He reaches into his pocket and takes out $200 and hands it to her.

Vivien: Only $200, I need more then, how do you expect me to pay the rent and bills with this kind of money.

Suddenly he grabs her by the collar.

Cletus Kassady: You think that you are the only person who has got problems, I am a ****ing wanted man on the ran. So I suggest you be happy with what you are given. Now if you don�t mind I need I another one of those packages.

Vivien: No I won�t do it.

Suddenly he takes out a gun from his pocket and points it at her head.

Cletus Kassady: I am afraid you have no say in the matter. Do you want me to tell your father of what you have been doing recently?

Vivien suddenly turns around and groans.

Vivien: No.
Cletus Kassady: Good. Now I will be back in five days. Remember I was so close to pulling the trigger this time, next time I won�t be so patient.

Can I have some feedback for this scene please??? wink

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Sep 21st, 2006 07:22 PM

Spideys Sister
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quote: (post)
Originally posted by Scarecrow756
Here is the Carnage/Vivian Scene.

Fade In:
Vivien comes out of her hairdresser and walks into a deep dark alleyway. She is 25 years old; she has long black hair with yellow streams. She also has fairly dark skin. As she approaches the alleyway, a big huge man approaches her from behind her. He is wearing a sea blue t-shirt, he has orange hair and looks in bad shape.

Cletus Kassady: Have you got the package.
Vivien: Yes I have.
Cletus Kassady: Well get it then?

She suddenly takes the package out of her handbag; the object is a small brown box.

Vivien: I had to get through a lot of trouble to get this. Now where is the money you promised?
Cletus Kassady: Ah here it is my dear just as promised.

He reaches into his pocket and takes out $200 and hands it to her.

Vivien: Only $200, I need more then, how do you expect me to pay the rent and bills with this kind of money.

Suddenly he grabs her by the collar.

Cletus Kassady: You think that you are the only person who has got problems, I am a ****ing wanted man on the ran. So I suggest you be happy with what you are given. Now if you don�t mind I need I another one of those packages.

Vivien: No I won�t do it.

Suddenly he takes out a gun from his pocket and points it at her head.

Cletus Kassady: I am afraid you have no say in the matter. Do you want me to tell your father of what you have been doing recently?

Vivien suddenly turns around and groans.

Vivien: No.
Cletus Kassady: Good. Now I will be back in five days. Remember I was so close to pulling the trigger this time, next time I won�t be so patient.

Cass sounds to... sane. Other than that it's great.

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Sep 22nd, 2006 10:06 PM

spencerspider
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its great but yea cassady should be a little...different

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Dazzler619
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quote: (post)
Originally posted by Spideys Sister
Cass sounds to... sane. Other than that it's great.

True but maybe he's tricking her wink

Last edited by Dazzler619 on Sep 23rd, 2006 at 02:40 AM

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A new drawing I did

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Sep 27th, 2006 03:05 AM

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Sauucy

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Scarecrow756
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Good drawings Dazzler, did you get my PM?

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Sep 27th, 2006 03:39 PM

Dazzler619
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Yes I did and that was a very good radio show.Good work big grin

Did you get my PM about seeing the Dragonheart movie?

Thanks for the comment btw

Sep 27th, 2006 04:36 PM

Scarecrow756
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quote: (post)
Originally posted by Dazzler619
Yes I did and that was a very good radio show.Good work

Did you get my PM about seeing the Dragonheart movie?

Thanks for the comment btw

Yes I did, I am about to PM you my foreword on the radio show.

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Sep 27th, 2006 04:38 PM

Dazzler619
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K thanks

Sep 27th, 2006 04:58 PM

Scarecrow756
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quote: (post)
Originally posted by Dazzler619
K thanks

Did you like it?

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