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Yeah, I think Kate and I posted at the same time. What you could do is have them go back to the cabin. In fact, have Jack ask where they've been and they've been in different places and he can lock them in there. Would that work?
yeah, i actually skipped the reunion between them all, so Willo, yours fits in right before mine, if you added a few lines to mine about the answer to the riddle... right?
If you give me a teeny bit of time, I would be much obliged. I have something written out, and I need to change it around a bit...plus it's my sister's birthday and I have to go out to eat. I'll post it up as quickly as I can. If you want to continue anyways, of course you can.
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Just a suggestion: after Surreal writes her post, it should cut to other sections of the ship where people will be turning in and we can see what they're doing, what they're thinking about. It'd be really cool and some development for Bootstrap if he took out like a little painting of Will or something Will gave him as a kid and hoping he's okay. That's when we can cut to Will. Okay! I'm out!
Working on my post, but I was thinking, in order to prevent more cross-posting, maybe we should each take a turn, such as after I post, Kate can post, and then Willo, and then me again...when others want to join in, we can put them in the cycle, and if we can't think of something to post, we can just 'pass' on it.
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Meh, most of the time those kinds of things fix themselves, but we can do that if you need. Remember I'll probably post this on fanfiction, so it can be a rough draft and we'll tweak what we think needs to be tweaked in time for the finished product. I'm anxious for the cabin scene, too, wondering if it will be the equivalent of the curiosity scene where they'll just be getting under each other's skin, or if they're actually going to kiss....I don't know! I'm excited!
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While we're waiting
CUT TO Will's ship
It is still night and like those on the Pearl, most of the crew is trying to sleep. Ragetti is at the helm. Anamaria is sitting on the steps
Will: Small little vessel, isn't it?
Anamaria: Too small if you ask me (cocks her head over to Pintel and Ragetti)
Will: (laughs) Usually they mean well, and even if they don't, they'll still do what you tell them to.
Anamaria: How's this pirate life holding up with you? From what I gathered, you were only dabbling in it for a little while.
Will: I'm not a pirate (disappointed tone)
Anamaria: In some ways you are, others not so much. Daft like one.
Will: But no Jack
Anamaria: (laughs back) Face it, Turner, no one on earth is like Jack.
Will: Were you two lovers?
Anamaria: Uh, (getting uncomfortable) everyone at one time or another was Jack's lover.
Will: I only ask because...
Anamaria: It's all right. I've never held much stock in being treated like a delicate blossom or whatever ladies are called these days.
Will: You're a lady. I ask because, Elizabeth...
Anamaria: No.
Will: How do you even know...
Anamaria: Her and Jack? I won't lie, Turner, there is some kind of love there, but I don't think it's what you make it out to be.
Will: (takes out the compass) I know exactly where this will point if I hold it, but if I were to put it in her hands, I'd have no idea, and that can't possibly be normal.
Anamaria: No, it can't.
(Will toys with opening it)
Anamaria: Go ahead.
Will: No. I don't know a cheat for me to recognize what I want. (throws it into the ocean)
Anamaria: Will!
Will: Now I won't have to obsess over it.
Anamaria: How could you do that? We might have needed that later!
Will: Maybe it was just a trick for you to call me Will.
Anamaria: (sighs, laughs) You shouldn't have gotten rid of it.
Will: What good has it done anyone? If there really are two, Jack will still have his, although I'm not sure who has that anymore.
Anamaria: Where is Davy Jones?
Will: Probably in one of the cabins, dreaming of his lost bride...(stops as if he's just realized something)
Anamaria: Scary how that sounds so familiar?
Will: What did you say? (getting angry)
Anamaria: You can't help but notice the similarities. Elizabeth is an untamed woman...
Will: I asked you a personal question to gain insight about Jack. You don't ask someone something like that.
Anamaria: I make it a habit to speak my mind, Will. If you don't like the truth...
Will: It's not the truth!
Anamaria: You're not even on the same ship! She's a pirate. You're not.
Will: Elizabeth is not a pirate. You are, and as one you have no idea when something is horrible to say, and you certainly have no idea about how other people feel, least of all Elizabeth and me. (furiously walks away from her)
(Anamaria is too shocked and hurt for words. Her mouth just sits agape, tears starting to well in her eyes. Biting her lip, she wipes them before she starts crying and stares out into the ocean, an unreadable expression on her toughened face)
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Real quick note: after the cabin scene, I want to do one, and it is going to be Liz finally confronting Jack about how aloof he's been to her. Trust me, this will not be romantic, but I have a lot of dialogue in my head right now and I need to spill it out, so nobody take that, please!
Ooh, I already had Jack have it out a bit with Lizzie...so maybe you should post first, Willo, then I can pick up afterwards. Besides, it would be weird for James and Liz to have their big moment, and have her trotting back over to Jack to talk to him, don't you think?
alright, I'm getting bored and I'm libel to write some major plot twists that screw up the story, as I often do when people don't post for a while...
I'll just pick up where Willo left off.
Anamaria is leaning against the rail, when Davy Jones approaches her.
Jones: It hurts, doesn't it.
Anamaria: (starting at his presence, and quickly wiping off her face, her normal sarcastic look returning) What?
Jones: Being rejected by someone you love.
Anamaria turns and crosses her arms.
Anamaria: What doesn't kill you makes you stronger.
Jones: Ah... a cynic. I'm delighted.
Anamaria: (laughing caustically) We all have our ways of escape. You too, if the legends are true.
Jones: They are. My time is coming, I can feel it. But it doesn't matter. My life has been over for years, ever since she left me...
Anamaria: (strangely moved to compassion) What happened between you?
Jones: Who can say? I never asked to fall in love... (struggles for a moment, is he faking it, or being serious? But Anamaria, hurt and upset, feels deeply sorry for him.) If only someone would really stab that heart, and let me be at peace...
Anamaria: (with a slight gasp) Is that really what you want?
Jones: It's all I've wanted for years.
Anamaria pauses for a moment... and slowly pulls that small, heavy bag out of her coat pocket... the heart. Stolen from Will. Jones looks down at the bag as Anamaria pulls instinctively away, her other hand on her sword.
Anamaria: Stay back...
Jones: Do it. Stab the heart...
Anamaria pulls out her sword and looks down at the bag.
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ps. Willo, when you're editing it, you might want to stick in a part about how The Black Pearl, Jack, and the rescuers got out of the locker and back into the land of the living. Green flash, that kind of thing. I sort of skipped that whole part... whoops.
lol there *orbitz* well be some SERIOUS kissing soon in this story, or im prepared to leave!.........ok, i wouldnt b able to resist reading this story, but it would make me very unhappy while reading!
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Jan 17th, 2007 10:55 PM
I have full confidence in you, Surreal.
