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PirateDiva
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OMG Dont tell me BARBIE falls for her too? lol
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savvysparrow
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Not so much falls for her, but I think he softens towards her. He recognizes an ally and a pirate when he sees one. Also, remember that Elizabeth is being compared to Calypso, who is the sea. Sao Fen has a line that says something to the effect of: All men love the sea.
So, really I'm sure he admires her for her 'sea-like' qualities. And in the original draft of COTBP, Barbossa warns Jack to be mindful of Elizabeth because she was livel to steal his heart.
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Ericadawn
The Admiral's Lover
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TIA DALMA
No, he was a man, once. Poor, unfortunate souls...now they must find their own way.
Ragetti nods, spots something ahead: a small boat, coming toward them, lit by a lantern's glow.
RAGETTI
Now it's boat's coming.
577 EXT. BLACK PEARL - FORWARD DECK - NIGHT
Will and Elizabeth join Tia Dalma at the rail. Far away, other boats can be seen, their own lanterns lit.
Gibbs arrives at the rail, loading a rifle, lifts it to aim -- Will stops him.
WILL
No, they are not a threat to us. Am I right?
He looks to Tia Dalma for confirmation.
TIA DLAMA
We are but guests to them. They heed us not.
BARBOSSA
Best just let them be.
Gibbs lowers the rifle but keeps it ready. The boats move past, an eerie, surreal sight. Elizabeth looks at the nearest boat, peers closer. Recognizes the passenger.
ELIZABETH
My father! We've made it back!
(to Swann)
Father, here! Look here!
Jack puts a consoling hand on Elizabeth's shoulder.
JACK
Elizabeth. We're not back yet.
He looks her in the eye. Elizabeth stares at him -- and realization dawns. Her next cry is one of anguish:
ELIZABETH
Father!
IN THE BOAT, Weatherby Swann glances over. His lantern lights half his face, leaving the rest in shadow.
SWANN
Elizabeth!
(concern)
Are you dead?
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I'm dying to see this scene ! Elisabeth is very sad and Jack puts a consoling hand on her shoulder...  Poor Lizzie...
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ELIZABETH
No....
Swann nods at that. Elizabeth has to move along the rail of the Pearl, toward the stern to keep pace with him.
SWANN
I think I am.
ELIZABETH
No. You can't be.
SWANN
(has trouble recalling) There was a chest, you see...How odd. At the time, it seemed so important.
ELIZABETH
Come aboard! (to the others) Someone -- cast a line! (to Swann) Come back with us!
Crewman prepare a line, to slowly for Elizabeth. She grabs it from them, casts it out. It lands neatly in Swann's boat, but he makes no move toward it.
SWANN
And a heart, and if you stabbed the heart...you would have to sail forever. That's how it worked. Stab the heart and take his place. The Dutchman must have a Captain. Silly thing to die for.
Will makes note of that. Jack makes note as well. Glances at Tia Dalma. But Tia Dalma is focused only on Will. She whispers, just loud enough for Will to hear --
TIA DALMA
A touch of destiny...
Due to the action of the two vessels passing, the rope begins to slip toward the edge of the boat.
ELIZABETH
Take the line!
SWANN
(suddenly this is important) Elizabeth.
She gives him her full attention.
SWANN (cont'd)
When I would reprimand you to obey rules, it was because I did not want you to ever be unhappy. But I should have recognized in your willfulness....your courage. I am proud of you Elizabeth.
The line is about to slip from Swann's boat.
ELIZABETH
The line! Catch the line!
The end of the line falls into the water.
ELIZABETH (cont'd)
Father!
His boat is near the aft of the Pearl.
ELIZABETH (cont'd)
Come back with us! Please! I won't let you go!
TIA DALMA
She must not leave the ship!
Elizabeth climbs the rail. Will gets here slightly ahead of Jack to haul her back.
SWANN
I'll give your love to your mother then, shall I?
Elizabeth stares after him. Watching, helpless.
Light of the boat's lantern is swallowed up by the darkness.
Elizabeth turns toward Will, into his arms. He confronts her...but his eyes drift toward Tia Dalma.
WILL Is there a way?
TIA DALMA
(shakes her head 'no') He is at peace.
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Apr 6th, 2007 01:46 PM |
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Ericadawn
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Aww, it's so sad and I love it. It has the only mention in the whole trilogy of her mother.
578 EXT. DAVY JONES LOCKER - SUNSET
An orange sun hovers over a dark horizon...
579 EXT. BLACK PEARL - MAIN DECK - SUNSET
No wind. No movement. The crew lays about the deck -- parched with thirst, no energy. Pintel tilts a water barrel over his head, cracked lips waiting, waiting -- nothing.
PINTEL
No water. Why is all but the rum gone?
Gibbs lets a final drop fall from a bottle to his lips --
GIBBS
Rum's gone too.
Tia Dalma and Will are at the rail. Elizabeth sits alone, withdrawn. Will watches her.
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Apr 6th, 2007 03:10 PM |
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Ericadawn
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I loved the twist of the Rum line.
TIA DALMA
If we can not escape these doldrums before night, I fear we will sail on trackless seas, under starless skies, doomed to roam the reach between worlds...forever.
GIBBS
With no water, forever looks to be arriving a mite soon.
Ragetti, hand over his eye, chases the monkey past. Jack notices Ragetti's eye as it rolls on top of the charts.
WILL
(re: Barbossa)
Why doesn't he do something?
(reads)
"Over the edge, back, over again, sunrise sets, flash of green."
ON JACK: gazing at the chart where rolls Ragetti's eye.
GIBBS
There's no sense to it. Sunrises don't set.
WILL
And the green flash happens at sunset, not sunrise.
GIBBS
Over the edge....driving me bloody well over the edge.
They fade into the background as Jack watches Ragetti's eye, rolling back and forth, idly plays with the rings of the charts. Chineese characters line up to read: UP IS DOWN.
JACK
Up is down. That's maddeningly unhelpful. Why are theses things never clear?
Jack idly watches as Ragetti's eye roll scross the table;
ship moving with the waves…
Jack has a sudden idea. Gets up, watches the eye. His movement is enough to draw the attention of the others.
JACK SPARROW
Hmn. When sunrise sets. Now there's a notion.
He moves over the railing at port. Everyone follows… the ship tilts that way a little. Jack thinks - -
Jack suddenly races to the starboard side. Everyone follows - -
what is he up to? He looks out at the sunset. Suddenly seems to see something on the port side.
JACK SPARROW (CONT'D)
There, it moved!
ELIZABETH
What?
WILL
I don't see anything - -
But Jack runs across, and everyone follows, and the ship tilts a little more. Jack goes the other way, and Gibbs figures it out.
GIBBS
He's rocking the ship.
BARBOSSA
Aye, he's onto it. All hands together!
GIBBS
Time it with each swell!
Jack races back to port. Then to starboard. The ship tilts back and forth - -
PINTEL
He's going to tip us over!
Ragetti already has a rope ready.
RAGETTI
We tie each other to the mast, upside down, so we'll Beckett right side up when the boat flips!
Pintel thinks about it. Thinks about it Thinks about it - -
PINTEL
Good idea!
Will gets to the rail as the ship tilts, look out - -
The sun SINKS into the sea, a small orange flam left - -
- - Black pearl tilts further - -
They rock the Black Pearl completely over; waves fill the sails and cause the ship to continue to roll - -
CAMERA MOVES AROUND THE ROLLING SHIP, UNDERWATER - -
Chains, cannons, small objects fall down toward the depths.
Jack, Will, Elizabeth, Barbossa, Gibbs hold on, flat down away from the ship.
Pintel and Ragetti hold their breaths, cheeks bulging.
- - CAMERA TURNS, SO THE BALCK PEARL IS RIGHT SIDE UP - -
ON THE HORIZON, the FLASH OF GREEN shoots up!
AND SUDDENLY - -
THWUMP!
586 EXT. BLACK PEARL - SUNRISE
All of the water FALLS with a giant SPLASH. The objects fall, people fall, the parrot falls, SLAMMING onto the deck. The water washes away, and the Black Pearl bobs on the sea.
Gibbs still holds his breath, unsure, turning red . . . finally has to let it out. Takes a deep breath --
GIBBS
Blessed sweet westerlies! We're back!
He wets his finger, lifts it.
Jack opens his fist, forces himself to look -- no black spot. Pintel and Ragetti hang upside-down, tied, tied to the mast.
PINTEL
This was your idea, and the fact that I went a long does not make you any less stupid!
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Apr 8th, 2007 02:10 AM |
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Minie Mina
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AHA! That's the part where thy start tipping the ship!! Like in the short clip showed a while ago from Disney channel. And the trailer where we see the pearl upside down.
GIBBS
Blessed sweet westerlies! We're back!
LOL. Gotta love Gibbs.
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Lilimimi
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Funny... I had this, but I missed one part in it ! Anyway, the script of 36 pages lacks of some scenes... 
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Apr 8th, 2007 06:18 PM |
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Ericadawn
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Because you have to incorporate the 36 and 56 to have a more complete script...
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Apr 8th, 2007 09:58 PM |
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Ericadawn
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RAGETTI
Well it don't make you no more smart, neither.
PINTEL
Yes it does, my lack of instigating stupid ideas makes me smarter by omission.
Next to Pintel's head, Cotton's parrot shakes off water and ruffles its feather. Elizabeth gazes at the horizon.
ELIZABETH
It's a sunrise.
Will looks out and sees the sun rising above the water. A brief moment of celebration as everyone grins at each other --
Then EVERYBODY instantly draws their pistols at once, and points them at each other --
Will at Barbossa. Barbossa at Jack. Gibbs at Barbossa. Elizabeth at Jack.
Jack at Will, draws at second pistol, at Barbossa. Barbossa draws a second pistol, at Gibbs. Elizabeth picks up a second pistol, points it at Barbossa.
It's a moment everyone has been preparing for. A beat --
And then EVERYBODY LAUGHS. They can't help but grin, lower their pistols. Suddenly the LAUGHTER STOPS and the pistols are raised again. Pintel and Ragetti work to get free.
PINTEL
Get untied, we need our pistols! Hurry!
RAGETTI
Who would we point at?
BARBOSSA
All right, then! The Brethren Court is a-gathering at Shipwreck Cove. Jack, you and I be going there, and there's no arguing the point.
JACK
I’m arguing the point. If there's pirates a-gathering, I'm a-pointing my ship the other way.
ELIZABETH
The pirates are gathering to fight Beckett. And you're a pirate.
She swings her second pistol forward Jack. Jack stops aiming at Will, aims at her. Will aims at Jack, draws a second pistol to cover Barbossa.
WILL
Fight or not, you're not running.
BARBOSSA
If we don't stand together, they'll hunt us down, one by one, 'til there's none left but you.
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Apr 9th, 2007 12:44 AM |
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PirateDiva
So In LoVe WiTh JoHnnY!
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^^ Lmao omg everytime i read that scene, I LMAO!!!  I can't wait to see it in the movie....i bet it will be hilarious, and then tense up right away when Jack and Liz point guns to each other....soooo HoTT!!!
I always thought this scene was brilliant!!!
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I hope they sword fight, too. They have every reason to judging by the script.
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have them fight becasue they won't agree with how they really feel deep down inside.
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Ericadawn
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JACK
Then I'll be the last. I like the sound of that. Captain Jack Sparrow, the last pirate. At least then there will be only one of me.
BARBOSSA
Then you'll be fighting Jones alone. How does that figure into your plans?
JACK
Still working on it. But I'm not going back to the Locker, Barbossa. Count on that.
Jack fires his pistol -- 'click' Barbossa and Will and Elizabeth fire -- more 'click.' Gibbs checks his pistol.
GIBBS
Wet powder.
Will checks his own pistol, tosses it aside.
WILL
So for now we're in this together. Right now, we need water. The charts show an island nearby.
Will indicates on the chart to Jack and Barbossa.
WILL (CONT'D)
There. With a fresh water spring. We can re-supply, and then get on with shooting each other.
JACK
You lead the shore party. I'll stay with the ship.
BARBOSSA
I'll not be leaving my ship in your command.
WILL
And he'll not be leaving his ship in your command. And here's an idea. You both go, and leave the ship in my command.
(off their looks)
Temporarily. All right?
AT THE RAIL -- Barbossa steps up, pulls out his telescope. Jack arrives next to him.
BARBOSSA
An uneasy alliance?
Barbossa opens his scope, looks through.
JACK
An unholy one.
Jack opens his own telescope, until it is long as Barbossa's ... then opens it further, until it is much longer. It droops at the end. Barbossa looks at him. He smiles. Barbossa snaps his telescope closed.
Behind them, Pintel and Ragetti finally free themselves from the mast, and it drops to the
EXT> BLACK SAND BEACH - DAY
Pintel and Ragetti crawl out of the surf as the other boats land. Jack and Barbossa step onto the sand, spot something. The rest of the pirates see it, too.
PINTEL
Criminey!
Jack and Barbossa walk toward it. Pintel and Ragetti hustle past them toward --
The KRAKEN, It lies dead on the shore. Pintel finds a driftwood stick, pokes it.
RAGETTI
Careful!
PINTEL
Ahh, not so tough now, are you? Stupid fish! Serves you right!
Jack approaches the Kraken almost reverently.
RAGETTI
Hello! I bet, folk would pay a shilling to see this! And a second shilling for a sketch or 'em sitting atop!
PINTEL
Kraken slayers we could carve miniature Krakens out of coconut and sell those, too! We could give 'em a slice as a souvenir.
RAGETTI
Or friend! For lunch.
PINTEL
I wonder which of the parts is edible?
Jacks stares into the huge eye of the beast, his image reflected back. Barbossa appears behind him.
BARBOSSA
Still thinking of running, Jack? This you can outrun, the world? The problem of being the last of anything: by and by, there be none left at all.
JACK
Sometimes things come back. We're living proof, mate.
BARBOSSA
Aye, but that's a gamble with long odds, ain't it? There's no guarantee of coming back. But passing on -- that's dead certain.
Jack contemplates that one. Barbossa regards the beast.
BARBOSSA (CONT'D)
The world used to be a bigger place.
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Apr 10th, 2007 01:30 AM |
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Minie Mina
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I love that scene so much. Every scene is kick ass, really.
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pirate_1987
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I heard the 100pg script it ends Will and Elizabeth get married and Will becomes the captain of the FD.
No Jack and Elizabeth 
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Apr 11th, 2007 03:31 AM |
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savvysparrow
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Meh, it's not the real deal. Nothing to worry about yet.
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Apr 11th, 2007 03:36 AM |
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Minie Mina
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Nothing to worry at all, really. Not even the Willabethers like it or buy it.
If it was true then Beckett is talled than Micahel Jordan.
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