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Jaeh
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"I have you know"
reminds me of something... 
YAY TUTTLE! nice nickname willo, i love your post!
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willofthewisp
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Thanks. I'm all set for someone to continue.
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ibd4eva
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oo! good guys!! gah! i need more James/Anne guys! come on!!!
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working on a bit. will be up soon
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Oct 2nd, 2007 09:18 PM |
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katelovespirate
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Sorry guys, I completely forgot to post this the other day!!
The ship. The signal is going up, and the soldiers on deck are panicking. James and Elizabeth are working on keeping the flames going, while Jack tries to devise an escape route or way of surviving until help comes.
Unfortunately, Beckett suddenly makes an appearance, holding a hand to his head.
Beckett: (to the soldiers) What are you waiting for? Shoot them all!
Elizabeth and James leap behind Jack, who brandishes Hopkins.
Jack: Stay back, Beckett! Back, I’m warning you, or the boy gets it!
Beckett rolls his eyes and shoots Hopkins himself. Hopkins falls to the deck, leaving Jack, Elizabeth and James, exposed.
Jack: Oh. Well that wasn’t very nice.
Beckett: You’re next.
Jack: Is that really the way to treat us, Lord Beckett? After we so kindly left you alive only a few minutes ago?
Elizabeth: It isn’t right with the code.
Beckett: (disgusted) I’m not a pirate. And after all, they’re more like guidelines. Men, take aim.
The soldiers take aim at the trio… all of whom brace themselves for the shot… which never comes. A loud set of explosions suddenly interrupt the scene, and everyone turns to look behind the ship, where a huge firework display is going off. A loud eerie voice speaks the old pirate rhyme while the light show continues.
Soldiers: It’s Calypso! It’s the goddess!
One by one, the soldiers rush to the side of the ship, clapping and calling to the display. Beckett looks at the show critically. He moves to the rail, obviously not taken in, but before he can speak another sound interrupts him--- Anne.
Anne: Drop your weapons, every one of you, and start deciding whether you’d like best to resign yourself to the locker or to my mercy.
Behind Anne, Gibbs and the rest of the pirates hoist themselves onto the ship, weapons drawn. They quickly advance and surround Beckett’s men. Jack, James, and Elizabeth cheer and join them, and Jack approaches Beckett after borrowing Gibbs’ sword.
Beckett: Parley!
Jack: What? Don’t you parley me, sir. That’s insulting.
Elizabeth: Jack, may I do the honors?
Jack: Be my guest.
Elizabeth takes the sword and prepares to run him through. Beckett interrupts.
Beckett: The rest of my fleet will be here shortly. I do hope my death will rally your spirits enough to fight off the hundreds of ships now approaching.
Jack: (rolls his eyes) Nice try.
Beckett: In that case, I have one card left.
Beckett leaps out of Elizabeth’s reach and jumps over the side, shouting a summons to Calypso as he lands in the water. Sure enough, she rises out of the water, shutting down the firework display with one massive wave. The heroes look at her towering out of the water above them, as Beckett smiles evilly. The sun is setting, casting an orange glow over the scene.
Calypso: You have summoned me for de last time, Lord Beckett.
Beckett: But we have a bargain. You’ll never see your precious Jones again, unless you deliver me. I hold the keys to the locker.
Jack and the pirates look at each other in surprise—there’s some news.
Calypso: Do you? (smiles) I tink not, Beckett. It is de lady dat has de keys.
Calypso looks at Elizabeth, who looks surprised and confused.
Beckett: What nonsense is this? I have them… (suddenly realizes his situation, no longer on his ship.)
Calypso: Your late husband did bequeath you something of mighty importance, miss Elizabeth. Beckett had it in his possession for a while, but now ye’ll find it be on de ship you have control over.
Elizabeth turns and rushes out of sight, reappearing from Beckett’s cabin a moment later with a heavy object in her hand. Unlike the key to the chest from previous adventures, this key is huge and brutal, almost a weapon.
Elizabeth: How did Will come by this?
Calypso: His death was not in vain. Davy Jones’ lie vanquished, and dis key passed to him dat ended his rule of de sea.
Elizabeth: and now it’s mine…
Calypso: Yours, for de time being.
Gibbs: The key to the locker? Elizabeth… with that key, you could free Will, and bring him back to this world!
Elizabeth: (as though the world has stopped, she chokes) What?! I could… bring him back? (barely a whisper) Will…
A sharp murmur goes among the pirates, and then dead silence.
Barbossa: Aye. But it’s more complicated than that. For by freeing Will, you’d free all the dead from that place, and Davy Jones would be restored to his former power. All would be as it was before his death, and the tides would again shift.
Calypso: A dangerous but tempting choice, is it not? (she smiles, and approaches Elizabeth, shrinking to the size of a human to stand beside her and whisper in her ear) I have one more choice, if ye be uncertain…
Everyone remains in motionless tension, as Calypso speaks softly to Elizabeth. Elizabeth clutches the key in her hand, a desperately determined look on her face. Everything about her is trembling with shock.
Barbossa stands next to Jack; both are nearly holding their breath.
Barbossa: Can’t blame the lass. No one could refuse that chance.
Jack: No one indeed…
Barbossa: I shudder to think what the rest of our days will look like, then…
Jack: They won’t be long. For any of us. But if there’s a chance for her to be happy, even for a few minutes, I’d give my life for her to take it.
Barbossa: At the expense of so many lives—yours included?
Jack: Mine especially included, Captain Barbossa.
Barbossa looks at Jack in wonder, as they both turn back to Elizabeth and Calypso. Slowly, her look changes as Calypso speaks. She glances around at the ship, the pirates, the sunset. It’s almost as Elizabeth relaxes, sighs, her face both sorrowful and yet peaceful. She closes her eyes and lowers her chin, as if nodding. Then she hands the key to Calypso.
The pirates look at each other grimly—it seems she has made her choice. But suddenly, unexpectedly, Calypso almost explodes into her former size and power, and wrenches the key apart. A blinding flash spills from the broken fragments of the key, as the sun dips lower into the horizon. Everyone falls to their knees, covering their eyes. Only Elizabeth stands tall by the rail, watching as the fragments fall from Calypso’s hand into the water, her face bathed in the fading red glow of the sun. A smile touches the corners of her mouth, and then the sun completely disappears beyond the water, leaving Elizabeth in pale twilight. Calypso sinks into the water until her face is level with Elizabeth’s; both faces are wet with tears.
Calypso: Dey are at peace, now. ‘Twas not in vain, for either of dem to die. An awful decision to make, but it seems his destiny was fulfilled by your help, too.
Elizabeth: (drawing in a deep breath) Yes, they are at peace. And so am I.
Calypso smiles mysteriously, vanishing into the water, silently dragging Beckett to the depths with her, never to be seen again.
Elizabeth stays at the rail, in the stillness a moment longer. Everyone remains on their knees, unable to move, except for Jack, who stands. Elizabeth turns to him, and he embraces her and rocks her gently for a moment. They don’t say anything. The moon rises, and Elizabeth pulls away as the rest of the company get to their feet. One by one, they discover what’s happened. Beckett’s men raise their hands in surrender. The pirates look at Elizabeth and remove their hats. She nods to them, still smiling. Jack removes his hat and places it on Elizabeth’s head.
Jack: Well, captain? Where to?
Elizabeth: (glances up at the hat, and then at her crew) Signal the Pearl. We’ve still got a fleet to outrun, or we’ll all end up at the bottom of the sea. To your stations, sailors! And hoist the colors.
Jack: And Mr. Gibbs!
Gibbs: Aye, Captain?
Jack: Break out the rum.
Gibbs: (grinning) Aye captain.
Cut to James and Anne, standing on the deck as everyone moves towards stations….
Alright, someone else wrap up things for James and Anne and give a good ending!!!
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Oct 9th, 2007 09:29 PM |
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willofthewisp
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Oh, Surreal, don't kill me, but I want a piece of this.
PS: "Beckett rolls his eyes and shoots Hopkins himself. Hopkins falls to the deck, leaving Jack, Elizabeth and James, exposed."----Kate
You killed my little guy! I mourned his loss. Poor Hopkins/Tuttle. He could have been a happy little pirate. Anyways...
(James and Anne give each other an awkward but longing stare. It is as if neither knows what to say.)
CUT TO...open sea
(Several crew members have broken out their instruments [musical, you perverts] and entertain everyone with lively shanties. A few pirates start dancing and the rum bottles are passed around. Only Jack and Elizabeth are nowhere in sight.)
(Anne appears and laughs at the sight of pirates dancing with each other. Her eyes are searching. She sees Barbossa, in a corner drinking. He seems bitter.)
Anne: Don't you have a lot to celebrate, Captain Barbossa?
Barbossa: Heh, once again, the Pearl is lost to me (raises his bottle to the Pearl, traveling next to the ship), me old crew dispersed, and not a female soul in sight save you and, no offense to ye, madame, but you and I would never work out.
Anne: There are a few women here if you bothered to look. (she gestures to the local women the crew picked up. A matronly, but lovely, woman smiles coquettishly at Barbossa.)
Barbossa: If this conversation be over... (walks away from Anne.)
(The song ends and some applause is heard. The musicians, pleased, begin a slower waltz. A forlorn look comes over Anne's face.)
James: There you are. (She turns to see him) May I have this dance?
(Anne smiles and takes his hands. They dance closely, the sexual tension building, wafting in the air around them. Each looks as though they are dying to say something.)
James: Anne, I would have never, ever, traded you to anyone. You aren't to be traded.
Anne: I know. I'm ashamed to think I doubted you even for a second, especially to someone like Beckett, deceitful little man.
James: (laughs) As long as you forgive me...
(Anne nestles her head on his shoulder. James closes his eyes, savoring the sensation of it. He swallows. His lips move as if he is speaking, but nothing comes out. Finally, his voice manages to be heard.)
James: Marry me.
(Anne looks up at him, a gleeful smile across her face. She throws her arms around his neck and kisses him.)
(The camera pans from their passionate kiss to Barbossa and the woman.)
Barbossa: ...So there I was, about to shoot the little wench what caused me so much trouble. And then, there was a loud 'bang,' as loud as could be heard all the way down in Hades.
Woman: What happened?
Barbossa: I looked down, and it was me that was shot!
Woman: Who did it?
Barbossa: Some nameless beggar. Never saw the no-account after the incident.
Woman: You must have been terrified. But you survived it, and here you are talking to me.
Barbossa: Lucky me.
(Gibbs, Swann, Groves, and the rest of the minor characters are in ear-shot and roll their eyes at his ramblings before toasting themselves on a job well done.)
Someone want to write the very end? Kate? Surreal? I'm ready for a bit of smut...I mean, fluff.
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Oct 10th, 2007 01:25 AM |
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willofthewisp
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Oh, I'll put this all on a separate thread so our comments and scrutinizing don't interrupt the story. Any ideas for a title?
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Oct 10th, 2007 01:26 AM |
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katelovespirate
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that was brilliant. smut. loved it.  i dont know if I can end things well for Jack and Elizbabeth without making it overly smuty and not realistic. haha.
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Oct 10th, 2007 02:44 AM |
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willofthewisp
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Realistic? Who cares? It's the epilogue. It's meant to tie things up. Overly smutty? I don't think too many people here will complain. And as soon as we're done, I can congratulate everyone on a really fun story.
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Oct 11th, 2007 01:20 AM |
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katelovespirate
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okay. let me take a whack at it. i was needing an excuse to procrastinate the exam junk.
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Oct 11th, 2007 01:38 AM |
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ibd4eva
Ivebeendepped 4 ever!
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YYESSS!!!! WE NEED A FINISH!!!
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Oct 12th, 2007 03:34 AM |
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Jaeh
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*waits patiently.. TRIES TO wait patiently*
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Oct 12th, 2007 04:12 AM |
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katelovespirate
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i cant seem to be able to do it. what ever happened to surreal?
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Oct 12th, 2007 10:44 AM |
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Surreal_44
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I don't know what we could add to it, honestly.
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Oct 15th, 2007 03:24 PM |
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Jaeh
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you guys need to add something! *pleads*
I'm POTC deprived these days, and KMC and FF.net and my computer are the only refuge I've got.. *sigh*
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Oct 15th, 2007 03:33 PM |
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katelovespirate
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I think we just needed a smutty j/l ending of sorts. some resolution for them, that's all. you up to the task, Surreal?
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Oct 15th, 2007 07:55 PM |
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ibd4eva
Ivebeendepped 4 ever!
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lol whenever i think of smut i think of The Fast Show with Johnny...d'you like a bit of smut, sir?
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Oct 17th, 2007 04:05 AM |
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willofthewisp
Savvy did my sig
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I'll take it since it's been a while and no one's claimed it. Hope this is to everyone's liking.
(Barbossa's ramblings fade into background noise and the camera pans to the Pearl, looking gorgeous as always. It is almost from a fly's point of view as we squeeze through a crack in the captains' door.)
(Inside, entangled in ivory linen sheets on a large bed, Jack and Elizabeth lay sleeping in each other's arms. It does not take vulgarity to observe they are unclothed. There is a calm silence.)
(We cut briefly back to the band playing on the other ship. They have just ended their slow song and begin a rousing, extremely, EXTREMELY loud rendition of a familiar song. The crew begins singing the famous opening words, "Yo ho, yo ho, a pirate's life for me.")
(Cut back to Jack and Elizabeth. They stir with a jump to the loud music. They sit straight up and look around, somewhat disoriented. They shake their heads and look at each other. There is a comfortable pause.)
Elizabeth: They're probably all looking for us.
Jack: That is my guess (gathers her back into his arms). Think you can ignore it?
Elizabeth: (gives him a sexy kiss on the neck) If you can distract me.
Jack: Pirate. (grips her. They share a hard, lingering kiss.)
("He's a Pirate" starts suddenly as the screen fades to black. The credits begin rolling. There is a special thanks to Willofthewisp for writing such subtle, yet spectacular, vivid smut. There is a special thanks to Kate for all the drama and twists the story has. There is a special thanks to Surreal for the POTC comedy and the great narrative. There is a special thanks to Minie Mina for the little touches that make Jack, well, Jack.)
(Finally, there is a special thanks to everyone that read the story, because a movie is nothing if it does not touch people's hearts.)
Glad you enjoyed!
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Oct 19th, 2007 01:59 AM |
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katelovespirate
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hallelujah! it's been accomplished!!!
the ending scene was PERFECT. seriously, the best ending of ALL TIMES> COngrats Willo, on your BEST SMUT YET!!!!
CHEERS!!!!!
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Oct 19th, 2007 02:24 AM |
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Jaeh
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You guys need to right a new one again.. please! that was totally awesome!
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