Gender: Female Location: May or may not be somewhere else.
okay... here's a scene from Star Wars... I kinda changed it so that it would be a Pirates scene.... I figured you guys might wanna read it(its a hot scene, sparrabeth style.. ), so i fished it out of the what POTC characters would never say thread..
Gender: Female Location: On the Black Pearl with JS :)
Yay yall are going to love this chapter.
While Jack and Elizabeth are fighting, Will and sarah were talking. They didn’t notice that there was thrashing and crashing going on in the cabin because they were to busy talking to themselves.
Will3: You know Sarah, hmm, we are very much you know I and you…..us.
Sarah: What?
Will3: Umm…we really are. Just you and me…us…we really are alike..in ways.
Sarah: Excuse me? Umm except I am respectful and I have honor and im not rude as much…..and I’m a pirate. What makes you think we are much alike?
Will3: Well…..theres…..ahh…..
Sarah: Hmmm…..
Will3: Ahh….
Sarah: Because we are very much alike…….and really once you find out what we have in common…I know you will show it. And why did you come on this ship and why were you out there in the 1st place?
Will3: Umm that is non of your buseness.
Sarah: Oh is it?
Will3: Why do you trust me? What do you know that I don’t Sarah? Im curious..and all….you know curiosty…it bugs me.
Sarah: I trust you because….that’s for me to know and for you to find out.
Will3: What? That’s not fair!
Sarah: Yea it is unless you can find away to get me to tell you I’m going to let you guess.
Will3: Well I know something that you don’t know…and it’s a secret. And do you want to know what it is?
Sarah; Oh do tell..oh do tell.
Will3: no. not untill you can get me to tell you you will have to keep on guessing.
Sarah: curiousty…..it always is. Now im curious. Im curious about what you have to say…and what you want to know….and what you want.
And she gets closer. Will looks at her and then turns around to look at her fully. He starts to get closer himself.
Will3: Keep….talking.
Sarah: Oh ill keep going all right…but my question to you is...will you do something that will compromise my honor and that will destroy my fathers trust?
And their lips almost touched but Will looked up and saw there parents fighting with swords and took a step back. Sarah smiled at Will.
Sarah: Im proud of…Will.
But then there was a rumble underneth the ship. And Sarah fell back and almost fell over board. Then there was another rumble underneth the ship again..and this time Sarah went over board but she held on to the rail…dingly over board.
Sarah: Will!
Will3: Sarah! Hold on! Grab my hand!
Sarah: I don’t think I can!
Will3: Reach for it Sarah! Reach!
And Sarah reached and grabbed his hand…Will then smiled at her and she smiled back.
Will3: Your heavy.
Sarah: Thanks.
Will3: Sarah I think I should tell you this if we die…
Sarah: what will?
Will3: That I….never mind sarah can you trust me?
Sarah thought for a moment she didn’t know if she could trust him…but then right as she stared into his gentle eyes, she already knew her answer for she loved him as much as she loved her father and she shook her head yes.
Sarah: Yes I do…
Will3: good cause I am going to have to hol dyou with on hand. Now let go of one of my hands and grab my other one.
Sarah did as he told her to do and he pulled her up with he one hand as he used his other hand to get a grip on a cannon. And sarah fell aboard. And as she fell Will caught her from her fall to the ground. And at that moment they both leaned in and as they were about to kiss Elizabeth saw it from the cabin and looks back at Jack.
Elizabeth: We will have to end it here.
And she runs out of the cabin. Jack tried to pull her back, but didn’t suceed.
Elizabeth: Will!
And Sarah stopped herself from going any further and opened her eyes and turned her head to look at his mother and she immediately dropped her hands from his.
Will3: mother? What happened...you dress its torn!? And your hair its wacky! What did Jack do to you!?
Elizabeth: He did nothing now we are leaving for sure now…come on!
Will3: Sarah!
Sarah: Will!
Jack: Let him go!
Elizabeth: No!
And Jack took out his sword again.
Sarah: Father! You bleeding! No! Don’t fight!
And Elizabeth took out her gun and pointed it towards Sarah.
Elizabeth: You get anyfurther and I’ll shoot!
Jack backed away and dropped his weapon.
Elizabeth: Oh Jack your so stupid.
Jack: No!!!!!!!!!!!
And she shoots.
Will3 pushed Sarah but then he got shot and Will3 came thrashing to the floor…bleeding.
Elizabeth: No! Will!
And Sarah came down to Will3 and started to cry.
Will3: Sarah….
Sarah: Yes…
Will3: I want you to know that….
And suddenly a ship came from downunder except it wasent the FD. It was the Jolly Roger witch its captain was Jolly Roger. And JR aboards the BP.
JR: The diamond give it….now!
Sarah: No!
JR: Give it!
Jack: The diamond…sarah use the diamond! It can cure a man or bring him back to life! Use it! Quick!
And Sarah took of her locket and put it over Will3. And he then was being raised into the air, and he was cured with a green light and he was taken back down to the ship.
Sarah; Will!
Will3: sarah! You cured me!
JR: Give it! Now!
Jack: No Sarah! Don’t give to him!
JR: If I cant have it…then I will take who has it on to my ship!
And he grabs Sarah’s arm, and he disappears while Sarah screamed and struggled to get free.
Will3: No!!!!!!!!! Sarah!!!!!
But she was gone…vanished into thin air withought a trace and the ship was disapearing too. And after that Will3 began to cry…he loved her and he wanted to tell her that but now he couldent.
Will3: We have to find her!
Jack: But we cant! That’s just that!
Elizabeth: Oh Boo hoo! Who cares about your daughter! Of course….my famly dosent!
Will3: You thought wrong mother…I care for her!
Elizabeth: What!?
Will3: You heard me mother… I care for her! And I know jack and the crew cares for her!
Jack: Yes I do care for her..i love her. And now shes gone…forever.
But then suddenly there was a light that flashed above the ship. There was a girl..cloating above everyone and she looked at jack and gave him a smile. And he noticed that smile and he noticed her face. HE smiled back at her and began to cry himself. And the girl came down to him.
Christine: Jack…its me Christine..do you remember me?
Jack: yes..I would never forget your face…love.
And then after Elizabeth heard him call chirstine her old name she got mad.
Elizabeth: Alright who is this?
Jack: This is my wife…Christine.
Elizabeth: your WIFE!? Uh!
And she stomps of and then she goes inside jacks cabin and starts to cry herself for the 1st time in a long time.
Christine: Jack…You havent lost our daughter forever…folow my directions and I will show you the way. Do you remember your ompass and do you remember the foutain of youth?
Jack: Yes I do.
Christine: Go get the foutain of youth…and then try to find the words Jolly Roger Cove….then once you find it..you will know what you want you want to find your daughter and you want to find Jolly Roger Cove. Do you understand?
Jack: yes I understand…love.
And Jack leans over to Christine and kisses her gently and Elizabeth saw him and she really began to cry… she talked in her head saying “He dosent love me anymore…he loves her!”.
And after the kiss Christine left without a trace and jack looked up into the air and let the ocean breeze air blow through his hair and his face, and he was healed.
Hold on theres more but i have to post it on another one.
__________________ WAIT! NOBODY MOVE!!!!! I droped me brain!----Captain Jack Sparrow at AWE on the FD
Gender: Female Location: On the Black Pearl with JS :)
Heres the other part of it.
After that he told all of his crew to do us they were told and he left and went into his cabin. He saw Elizabeth on the his bed with her eyes watery.
Jack: Whats wrong Mrs. Turner?
Elizbaeth: Will you stop calling me that? Its Elizabeth!
Jak: Whats gotton into you? Oh wait is it the fact that you want to kill me and make sure my daughter dosent end up with your son and that you want to fight me? Well then ok!
And he pulls out his sword.
Elizabeth: Stop Jack! I don’t want to fight you anymore.
And Jack sits on his bed buy Elizabeth.
Jack: What? Why don’t you lo…nvm.
Elizabeth: I just don’t…I was being a fool.
Jack: I don’t think you were a fool…well maybe a little bit but not much.
Elizabeth: Jack….
And she gets up close to him and puts her head on his shoulder.
Jack: Yes luv?
Elizabeth: Do you…love me?
And when she said that Jack stood up and looked at her with a look that she will never forget.
Jack: Elizabeth…why do you want to know and no I don’t love you I love my daughter and my wife.
Elizabeth: Jack…when are you going to let your wife go? Shes passed away. And you can like only see her like once in a lifetime.
Jack: I know…I know.
And they just stood there for a while. And then finally Elizabeth said something.
Elizabeth: jack… I didn’t want out kids to be together because…I…I…
And then jack got closer to her with a glare in his eyes.
Jack: You what?
Elizabeth: I….I…Jack….
And Jack got closer to her…he is inches away from her lips.
Jack: What Elizabeth? What do you need to say?
Elizabeth: That I….
But then Jack and Elizabeth kissed from right there. She knew that they were enemy-like, but she still loved jack…all she wanted right now was him nothing more. But then Will3 came running inside the cabin.
Will3: Mother….*gasp*
And the kiss ended right there.
Elizabeth: Its not what it looks like Will.
Will3: Mother what are you doing? Your cheating on father! For him!?
Elizabeth: Im not…I promice…I’m not…I love your father!
Will3: Whatever!
And he runs out of the cabin. Elizabeth looks back at Jack and sees him with a sad face.
Jack: Elizabeth…why did you want to kiss me? Why did you betray me on the BP when you werent married? And why did you kiss me now?
Elizabeth: Jack….I betrayed you because…Jack it was the only way I could save everyone and….Jack….I kissed you so I could distract you.
Jack: But if you wanted to save everybody then why leave me to my death? And your kiss it felt as if it was real. As if….it meant something…as if you were afraid that you would never see me again.
And he looked down to the floor and closed his eyes.
Elizabeth: I…
But she didn’t finish her sentence instead she walked away but then Jack pulled her back and pushed her against the wall of his cabin.
Elizabeth: Jack…what are you doing?
Jack: Elizabeth I want you to know that back then I did love you, but you tore my heart apart into many pieces…all I wanted from you was your love and care but instead, you just gave me hate and you didn’t care for me…you just used me…to get to Will…you broke my heart.
Elizabeth: Oh Jack…
Jack: I have nothing else to say.
And he looks back down to the floor. But Elizabeth took her hand on his cheek she got up really close to him…and she raised his face, and there she kissed him passionately. There kiss was gentle, and sweet. And this time Elizabeth’s kiss for Jack was real.
I hope yall loved it!
__________________ WAIT! NOBODY MOVE!!!!! I droped me brain!----Captain Jack Sparrow at AWE on the FD
Gender: Female Location: On the Black Pearl with JS :)
Heres some more you in for a treat!
When the kiss was over, Jack looked at Elizabeth with a faint smile.
Elizabeth: Jack…I…love you.
Jack: Elizabeth…We cant…you will always be Will’s wife and our kids will always love each other…I can feel that they love each other…and I wont ruin there life’s by letting them be brother and sister and I wont let you break Will’s heart, as you have done to mine.
And Elizabeth looked down to the floor and her eyes watered but she didn’t cry.
Elizabeth: Your right Jack…I wont ruin my son’s life just so I could be happy. And I don’t want to ruin you daughter’s life either.
And Jack smiled at her weakly and Elizabeth put her hand on his face again and his face leaned in her hand and Elizabeth was about to kiss him again…but he pulled away.
Jack: No…Elizabeth…I’m sorry…but we just cant…anymore.
And he left his cabin. Elizabeth was left there, standing, with her eyes watery and about to cry.
Setting: JR ship
Sarah was put into a cell was kept there for along time. In all the time she had she thought about Will3 and about his face and about the times they had almost kissed…which they never have. Then suddenly someone came down from the upper deck.
Stranger: The captain will see you now.
Sarah: Well you can tell your captain that I wont come.
And she turns away.
Stranger: For some reason he knew that you would say that and he said that if you wouldn’t that he will give me the permission to kiss you and to kill you.
And sarah gave him a glare and started to walk.
Stranger: Fine then, be that way.
JR: Come in Sarah Sparrow.
Sarah: How do you know my name?
JR: I know a lot of things about you, my dear.
Sarah then looked at him puzzled. She didn’t know what he was talking about.
Sarah: What are talking about?
JR: Oh I know your life. Its miserable isn’t it?
Sarah: No…
JR: Oh Sarah…why do you think your father put you in an orphanage?
Sarah: It was for my own good. And your not my father…he has his reasons.
JR: Ah…well what about that boy…Will?
Sarah: Keep him out this.
JR: Oh I would but I’m not going to.
Sarah: What’s he got to do with this?
JR: Oh you don’t know? His father…if you have heard tales about the FD…
Sarah: yes I have from my father of course.
JR: His father is the captain of the FD…
Sarah: What?
JR: Oh he didn’t tell you…the reason why he was aboard you ship was so he could get to his father and so he could be with his father. He was using you…for information. He just wanted to know what you knew.
Sarah: No…that’s not true!
JR: Oh is it? Maybe he thought he couldn’t trust you…that’s way he said that it was non of your business to know why he went on BP when you too were about should I say kiss. He wanted to kiss you so he could get trust from you so you would tell him anything he wanted to know about.
Sarah: No! It can’t be true!
JR: Oh but it is true…you thought wrong about him…you didn’t think he was a pirate.
Sarah: I never thought…
JR: Well now…you know. And now you can get revenge from him.
Sarah: No! I won’t get revenge from him…I don’t want to fight him! No!
JR: Oh but you must…it’s the only way you can get what you want and make sure he dosent break you heart anymore.
Sarah: No! I would never forgive my self!
JR: But you must…
Sarah: NO!
JR: Fine…but dosent your heart had it with him…he broke it…what you going to do about that?
Sarah: But…
JR: But you what, Sarah?
And he touches her hair and swifts it out.
Sarah: But I love him.
JR: Oh you poor thing…but he doesn’t care for you he just wanted to get your trust that’s all, And now you can get rid of his trust and do what you need to do.
Sarah: Yes…I will do what I need to do.
JR: What’s your plan then?
Sarah: My plan…to kill him.
Setting: On the BP
Will3: captain!
Jack: What?
Will3; Are we close to where she is?
Jack: Yea we getting there.
Will3: Good.
And he breathes slowly and happily.
Will3: As long as we are close and she’s ok…I’m ok.
Jack: Why do you care so much about my daughter?
Will3 notices this question and he begins to blush and turn away.
Will3: She’s my friend. That’s why.
Jack: are you sure that’s why?
Will3: Positive.
Jack: You don’t need to lie to me boy…I saw you two talking at night and that almost kiss at night…and the other 2 almost kisses.
Will3 then began to get really red.
Will3: You saw that.
And jack smiles and shakes his head
Jack: Don’t worry your secret is safe with me.
Will3; what secret? Umm I don’t have a secret! What was that Mr.Gibbs? Oh right be right there! Sorry captain but I need to go! Uh bye!
But then as Will3 was about to leave jack grabed his arm and pulled him back.
Jack: Don’t worry. I won’t tell your mother you can trust me.
Will3: I don’t know.
Jack: Look I keep secrets ok and I knew your father too…I kept his one and only secret.
Will3; you knew my father?
Jack: And I knew your grandfather too.
Will3; you knew my family. What was my father’s secret.
Jack: The “I love Elizabeth secret”. And Elizabeth is your mother.
Will3: Oh that…wait why did you kiss her?
Jack: Uh…
Will3: You kissed my mother why?
Jack: She kissed me.
Will3: What? But she would never do that to father!
Jack: How do you know? She’s a pirate!
Will3: Can’t you tell me why?
Jack: Fine all right.
And so Jack told will3 everything. After Will3 heard everyone word he was sad…he never thought his mother would do that to his father.
Will3: If she loves you and if you love her…
Jack: Which I do son…I really do.
Will3: then why didn’t she go with you?
Jack: So she wouldn’t brake your father’s heart…like I have been through with your mother.
Will3: She broke your heart once?
Jack: yea…she kissed me and she tied me up while I wasn’t looking…the kiss was a distraction.
Will3: Oh…
Jack: yea oh. Well its getting late. Get some rest. You will get up really early in the morning tomorrow.
Will3: Oh all right.
And so Will3 went up to bed and Jack went up to his post.
I hope yall liked it!
__________________ WAIT! NOBODY MOVE!!!!! I droped me brain!----Captain Jack Sparrow at AWE on the FD
Gender: Female Location: On the Black Pearl with JS :)
:-) I hope you like this chapter...cause I think this is the last chapter I'm doing.
It was night time on the BP and Elizabeth couldent sleep. She was thinking about what Jack said and she knew it really could never be. But she couldent help it now, she was in love with him but she knew that she shouldn’t. It bothered her a lot, she wanted to stop. It was like I love him but I know I shouldnet but I cant help it! So she just sat there trying to get her mind of Jack but it was hard, but she tried. She started to think of Will, but all of her memories were going out, he was always gone, so she could barely remember him. Then suddenly Jack came in.
Jack: Elizabeth…what are you doing in here?
Elizabeth: I…I don’t know Jack. I feel different.
Jack: Oh Elizabeth…
And he comes by and sits next to her and he smooths her hair.
Jack: I know luv…I know what your thinking…you have to stop...you have to fight it.
Elizabeth; I cant Jack! I just cant!
Jack: Try harder.
And she tried and tried and tried, but nothing worked. She was madly in love with him…how could she stop?
Elizabeth: Jack!
And she grabs him and hugs him and starts to cry.
Elizabeth: I just cant Jack! I’m madly in love with you! How can I stop if I’m in love with you? Huh? Jack even though I was married to Will… I thought of you…every single day! How do you except me to stop if I do it almost every day?
And Jack looked at her with his sorrow eyes. He had never looked so handsome to her in her life. He touched her hair and he touched her face and he looked at her, with sadness in his eyes with his sorrow.
Jack: Elizabeth…I cant help it either…I’m in love with you too.
And Elizabeth sat up and looked at him. She never knew he had feelings for her too. She sat up and put her head on his shoulder and snuggled up beside him.
Elizabeth: Oh Jack…
Jack: Elizabeth we have to fight it…if we cant stop…
Elizabeth: I know Jack…I know.
And she held hands with him until they were fast asleep by each other sitting with head on head, and they fell asleep with sorrow and love.
Setting: On the BP in the Morning.
Mr. Gibbs: captain! Where is he? Captain!
And Jack heard Gibbs voice, and woke up with Elizabeth asleep on his shoulder. He looked at her and decided to kiss her head and then he carefully picked her up and layed her on his bed, and left her.
Jack: Yes Mr. Gibbs?
Mr. Gibbs: Captain! Where have you been?
Jack: Umm…no where! I have been here! All along!
Mr. Gibbs: Uh huh…well anyways were going into a forest on in island, take a look here!
And Jack takes a look and he realized where he was…he was at Jolly Roger Cove. And he saw a ship there with black seals just like his own. And he knew that they were here.
Jack: This is it!
And when Will3 heard that he jumped up with joy and ran around the ship and then came up to the captain.
Will3: Oh captain! Can I come with you? Please? I must see Sarah! Please?
Jack: Umm…I don’t think you should come lad…you could get lost or you could get killed.
Will3: Come on jack please?
Jack: I’m sorry son…but I just can’t take that risk. Now you stay with the ship.
And he left him there standing. Will was sad, he really wanted to come.
Will3: I don’t know what to do…I know they will need me. That’s it! I’ll go by my self and follow the group they will never notice!
And he leaves the ship and runs after Jack but he makes sure he can’t be seen or heard. And they walked for a long time but that didn’t stop Will3 from walking or keeping up. And finally, the crew came up apon a castle in the dark woods.
Will3: Woe!
And then Jack turned around and saw Will3 right behind them smiling and waving at the same time.
Will3: Uh Hi! Heheh…
Jack: Your not suppose to be here!
Will3: I couldnet help it…I had to come!
Jack: Well now your going to have to stay with us so I guess you will have to stay with us now.
And Will3 came up with jack in the front.
Setting: In the castle
JR: My sweet, are you ready for your revenge?
Sarah: I am, I am ready JR, and Will will wish that he would have never been born.
JR: Yes I like your thinking.
And he looked down at her black silky dress and then noticed the locket around her neck.
JR: You look beautiful, my sweet.
Sarah: Thank you, JR. And now I’m ready to get going.
JR: Yes my sweet we will get going now.
And they leave the room. And they went down stairs and then they heard a knock at the door then a crash and Jack Sparrow and Will3 came in from outside.
JR: What? How did you get here? And he puts Sarah behind him.
Will3: WE came in here they way we came in here.
And he looks at Sarah, he thought she was beautiful, more beautiful then he had ever seen her.
Will3: Sarah!
But Sarah didn’t respond. She just stared at him with a glare in her eyes and she smiled a wicked smile that he had never seen before on her face.
Will3: Sarah? Sarah? Speak to me! It’s me, Will Turner!
And she came down the stairs still with that smile on her face.
Will3: Sarah? Whats wrong with you? What did you do to her?
JR: She just getting her revenge from you…it wont hurt…much! MUHAHAHAAA!!!!
Will3: What? Sarah, please be your self! Sarah! Listen to me! I’m your friend! I care about you! Cant you see what he has done to you? Sarah! Listen to me!
But she just kept on going straight at him non stop and Will3 kept backing away and he then ran into a wall.
JR: Nothing is going to work! Shes going to kill you and nothings going to change her mind about it! MUHAHAHAAA!!!!
Will3: Sarah! Please!
And Sarah took out her knife, and she struck at Will3 but she missed. Now she was right in front of him. Her face and his face right by each others.
Will3: Sarah…don’t listen to him…he has brain washed you! I’m your friend! I would never try to hurt you! I promice! If I hurt you I would never forgive my self! Please Sarah! Don’t do it!
And Sarah got her knife out of the wall and she struck at him again!
Will3: Sarah! Please! Sarah, do you want the truth from me? Do you want to know why I care for you and why I would never forgive me self if I hurt you?
Sarah: No…you hate me and I don’t want to listen to you talk again!
Will3: No Sarah…I love you…with all my bloody heart! I would kill my self just to make sure your safe! Sarah, you have to believe me!
JR: No Sarah it’s a lie, don’t listen to him…he just wants your trust!
Will3: I want your trust and your love, Sarah. I have your trust and I know that your good and I know that you would not try to hurt me…I know you Sarah…your not like this! Don’t listen to him any more! Listen to me!
And Sarah didn’t know who to trust or who to listen to.
Sarah: I don’t know who to trust or to listen to!
Will3: Listen to me! Sarah! I love you! And if you trust him and if you listen to him…you will break my heart. But no matter what I will always love you.
JR: He lies! Sarah…my sweet…my love…don’t break my heart!
Will3: Would I lie to you? Please Sarah Would I really lie to you?
Sarah: I don’t know!
Will3: Sarah…make up your mind…or Sarah will you make up you mind if I do this?
And he leans over and kisses her gently on her soft lips. She closes her eyes and he closes his. They both could feel and see fireworks spring up. And Sarah put one of her hands on his neck and he put on of his hands on her face. There kiss was long and sweet and while this was happening Jack could feel a tear spring up from his face and he knew that this was it. And Elizabeth knew the same, she saw it too. And Elizabeth and Jack held hands for the very last time. And there kiss ended right there and Sarah and Will3 smiled at each other. But JR was mad…
theres more
__________________ WAIT! NOBODY MOVE!!!!! I droped me brain!----Captain Jack Sparrow at AWE on the FD
Gender: Female Location: On the Black Pearl with JS :)
Heres the other part of it.
JR: That’s it! I have had it with pirates! Ill just kill him myself!
And JR rose up into the air and Sarah was in Will3’s arms and he pushed her but she got back up and ran to him and pushed him away but then it happened. She fell down to the ground…JR stabbed her in heart. And Will3 came running and screaming out her name. And he fell to the ground to see if she was allright.
Jack: No!!!!!!! You…you evil man!
JR: I’m not a man…I’m a ghost! Haha!
Will3: Sarah…no Sarah stay with me! No!!!!!!!! NO!!!!!!!
And while he was screaming Jack got up and took his sword and said to JR:
Jack: You die today…
JR: Oh Jack…cant you see I’m already dead?
Jack: Well then lets fight till I die then cause I will fight till I die! AH!!!!!
And they start to fight.
Elizabeth: JACK!!!!!!!!!!
Sarah whispered: Father…*cough cough* Will…
Will3: Yes…
And his eyes began to get watery.
Sarah whispered: I’m sorry I tried to kill you and…
Will3: Its ok and…what…
She pulls him in close and she puts her lips on his. They kissed for about 5 seconds and then she stopped.
Sarah whispers: I love you and I want you to take this.
And she takes off the locket and gives it to him.
Sarah: Take care of it…
And she took her last breath in his arms…and Will3 began to scream and cry at the same time.
Will3: NO!!!!!!!!!!! Sarah! No!!!!!!!
Jack: I’m still alive aren’t I?
JR: Yes you are Jack. But not for long…
Jack: Huh? Oh…
JR: You fool…did you really think you could kill me Jack?
Jack: Uh…oh…ah…
And jack falls to the ground.
Elizabeth: No!!!!! JACK!!!!!!!!!
Will3: Jack!!!!!!!!!!
And Elizabeth goes towards Jack and touches his face and hair.
Elizabeth: Oh jack…
Jack: Elizabeth…I can barely breathe…
Elizabeth: No!
Jack: Elizabeth come nearer…*cough*
And she got nearer, and Jack leaned up and kissed her and he didn’t want to let go but he knew he must for he knew he was going to pass away in a min. And he stopped.
Jack: Elizabeth…I…love…you…
And he took his last phew breaths in her arms and she watched him die and she hugged him up close.
Elizabeth: Oh Jack!
And she cried. Now the Sparrow family was gone, and nobody to protect them.
JR: Theres nobody to save you now! HAHAHAHA!!!!!!!
Elizabeth: How do you know?
JR: Because the Sparrows are finally dead and nothing can bring them back any way are any how! HAHAHAHA!!!!!!!
And then Will3 remebered that time where Sarah saved him with the locket.
Will3: You thought wrong…you must have forgotton about the thing you wanted most and that you didn’t get it.
And he holds up the locket.
JR: No!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
And Will3 holds it apon Jack Sparrow and he began to be healed and then later he was fully healed.
Jack: I’m back! Now Will…use the power of the diamond to kill JR! Now!!!
And Will3: held it up high and the bright sun shined through it.
JR: No!!!!!!!!!
And JR began to die and melt away into a dark nasty puddle. It bubbled and it was gooey. And then if finally disappeared.
Elizabeth: You did it son!
Jack: You sure did! You should be proud of your self!
Will3: But I have to do some unfinished business…1st.
And Jack and Elizabeth looked at each other and then back and Will3 then they knew what he was talking about.
Jack: Oh…all right son.
And Elizabeth smiled at her son and walked off with Jack. Then Will3 looked at Sarah’s lifeless body. And he put the locket over her and she rose up and she was healed.
Will3: Sarah!
Sarah: Will!
And they both hugged each other.
Will3: I thought I would never see you again!
Sarah: Well…I’m alive right?
Will3: Yes your alive…again.
And they both smiled at each other and Sarah held Will3’s face with one of her hands and leaned in a kissed him. He grabbed her waist and held her tight.
The next story i'm doing its going to invlove Will3's father and hes not going to want then to be together and yea oh and Will3's father dies!!!!! YES!!!!! And NOOO! At the same time!
__________________ WAIT! NOBODY MOVE!!!!! I droped me brain!----Captain Jack Sparrow at AWE on the FD
Gender: Female Location: I'm American, but I live in Beijing
I did not write these, but I found them on fanfiction and loved them.
You may have read the first one already, but I love it. It's really short but amazingly cute. This is called "Secret" by misaoshiru:
"'ey, luv?"
Elizabeth sat up from where she lay on the sand, her head spinning. She had drunk more rum than she had planned - Captain Jack Sparrow was sharper than she had anticipated, even given his increasingly drunken state.
Jack grinned at her from across the fire, his face slightly reddened from the alcohol he had consumed. "Can you keep a secret?"
"A secret?" she half-slurred, biting her lip. She would have to be more careful. "What sho - sort of secret?"
Her companion crossed over to her side of the fire more gracefully than she would have thought possible, considering his inebriation and kissed her on the lips, firmly but gently. Elizabeth's face warmed, and she knew it wasn't the rum. "That sort."
The next is just a small piece of a story, and there's a lot behind it and reasons she's angry at him, and if you want to read the whole thing, tt's called "L'esprit de l'escalier," by labyrinths. It's really good, and I loved the ending so much:
The first thing Elizabeth did was to walk straight towards Jack, ramming her index finger against his chest.
“You disgusting lout are not fit to kiss my boots!”
Which was an accurate description since she was wearing some rather large, manly boots.
She turned around, ready to head back to the docks now that little point had been settled.
Quickly, Jack pulled her towards him crushing her into a passionate embrace and an even more passionate kiss, his lips fervently coaxing her own.
When he drew back he was grinning.
“It’s not your boots I’m after.”
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"You'd better hurry up, they'll be waiting for 'the Chosen Captain' --- 'the Boy Who Scored' --- whatever they call you these days."
Gender: Female Location: I'm American, but I live in Beijing
I have another one. I don't know why I like this one so much. It's called "Moments and Memories" by Freothuwebbe, and each chapter is a different little moment between characters. This is chapter 2, called "Jealousy":
Jack gazed at her as she smiled at the waves. Now that she had married Will, everything between them seemed awkward and strained.
“You know--” he began as she turned around. The intensity of her eyes startled him.
“I know what, Mr. Sparrow?”
Her jaw line was all he could think about. Her hands were twisting the wedding right that he should have given her. He suppressed a growl that grew at the back of his throat.
“You know he’s a eunuch, right?” He said it more seriously than he had meant to.
Elizabeth rolled her eyes and stalked across the deck. His brown eyes dug holes into the nape of her neck.
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"You'd better hurry up, they'll be waiting for 'the Chosen Captain' --- 'the Boy Who Scored' --- whatever they call you these days."
Gender: Female Location: on the dingy with dear ol' Jacky
SIIIIGH! I checked all three of them out on fanfic and I read some other stories from the authors too! They are GOOD! thanks for posting. I added all of them to my favorites.
BTW does anyone have an account on fanfic or some fics there? Mine's teepirategirl!
__________________ My hats off to joanjoan
Freedom...
I wasn't sure if to write this, but I've found the idea for saving the ending and wanted to share.
10 years later Will comes back but he's no longer the person he used to be. He smiles to Liz but his minds are far away from her. She tries to hug him but he's not interested, he walks out and goes to the beach. Liz is very anxious. She doesn't know what to do. She thinks that it's because his heart is no longer in his body. She asks Gibbs for advise. He tells her that only Calypso can help her in this matter.
Liz: But how can I find her? Is it possible?
Gibbs: before she was captured into human's body she used to leave on one island...
Liz: Where's the island? Is it possible that she returned there?
Gibbs: I don't know my dear, but we both know someone who may know it.
Liz *opens her eyes widely, she can hardly speak*: ... jack? *His name makes her heart pound fast.*
Jack sits in his boat, noticing maelstrom.
Jack: Not now ... the rum's gone.
The maelstrom comes closer. Jack (holding the bottle to his nose): At least the last smell I feel is the smell of rum.
He smiles. Suddenly the maelstrom changes into the woman getting into Jack's boat.
Jack: It can't be... Calypso?
Calypso (looking like clean Tia Dalma) : Jack... Did you miss me?
Jack: Should I? Calypso (touching his face): You haven't changed at all. So it's true that you've found it. Well done Jack, I've always believed in you.
(She keeps touching him ) Jack smiles and squints his eyes.
Jack: How did I deserve an honour of your visit, Tia Da... Calypso? Do you have a business for me or you just simply couldn't resist the temptation of seeing my face?
Calypso *still smiling*: Both? Jack, you have to do me a favor, you owe me something.
Jack: Do I?
Calypso *she becomes serious*: let me refresh your memory, I was the one who helped you get out of Davy Jones' Locker.
Jack: Oh, yes, I remember now.
Calypso: I want you to take Elizabeth away from Will.
Jack: What? Are you joking? *His face changes* I don't want to have anything to do with her...
Calypso: Poor Jack, unrequited love hurts.
Jack: I don't know what you're talking about my only love is the sea.
Calypso: How about the Black Pearl?
Jack: Oh, I'm about to get her. I've been just chasing after her while you...
Calypso *laughing very loud*: Jack, you always knew how to make me laugh. I can help you get your ship back if you take Liz out of my way ... *she stops laughing* unless you want to see her dead.
Jack: I don't care. I can get my ship back by myself.
Calypso: Do you really not care?
Jack: Lady, It was nice to see you, but I don't have time for this small talk, so please be so nice and leave my boat. I don't want to hear that name "Elizabeth". It sounds so unpleasant. It's too long. Liz is too short, so anyway her name is not the name I would like to mention.
Calypso: I see you do have a feelings for this girl...
*Jack doesn't say anything* Calypso continues: This is good, so good, so you probably be happy learning that you have a son with her.
Jack*looks disgusted*: What?
Gender: Female Location: On the Black Pearl with JS :)
I like it!!! More more MORE!!!!!!!!!!! no wait i dont like it...I LOVE IT!!! Absalutly LOVE it....MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!! Please? Its really good....
__________________ WAIT! NOBODY MOVE!!!!! I droped me brain!----Captain Jack Sparrow at AWE on the FD
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Jun 15th, 2007 12:55 AM
), so i fished it out of the what POTC characters would never say thread.. 
Yay!
