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willofthewisp
Savvy did my sig
Gender: Female
Location: at the second star to the right |
You're still up, Kate, just a reminder. We don't have that much left.
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Feb 25th, 2008 08:47 PM |
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katelovespirate
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i haven't forgotten, I'm just a slacker with no creative juices left right now. You are welcome to continue, or else I will be sure to do so tonight as soon as I get home... 
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Feb 25th, 2008 10:21 PM |
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Jaeh
Possibly here.
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GAH! TEE! Where have you been!?
AWEsome guys! sooo totally wanna read more... GAH! there's gonna be a sequel! YAYZ!
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Feb 26th, 2008 02:21 PM |
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tee_pirategirl
YoHo!YoHo!
 Gender: Female
Location: on the dingy with dear ol' Jacky |
Missed you too Jaeh!
*bites nails* Can't wait for you guys to continue!
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Feb 26th, 2008 11:42 PM |
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willofthewisp
Savvy did my sig
Gender: Female
Location: at the second star to the right |
You're still up, Kate. I'd like to bounce off of what you do next.
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Feb 27th, 2008 01:15 AM |
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katelovespirate
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Suddenly, Pintel and Ragetti, dressed up like flappers with garters and all, walk into the midst of the fighting, waving feather boas. The fighting pauses.
Ragetti: Hey boys!
One of Norrington’s cops: What in the…?
Norrington: (groaning) Dames…
Ragetti: (flaunts his boa) Want a closer look?
Pintel: (annoyed) Laugh it up, missy. We’ll never be able to live this down.
Meanwhile, the distraction has given some of the mobsters time to creep up behind Norrington’s men. Pintel leans to hit Ragetti, but his wig falls off, revealing a very bald mobster head… Norrington’s men catch on just in time to turn around and beat off the next attack.
Back to Jack and Barbossa…
Barbossa: You can’t win, Jack.
Barbossa suddenly plunges his knife straight towards Jack’s heart. He pulls back in triumph, only to see that… Surprise! The knife has merely hit the Mob necklace Jack stole and is wearing under his shirt.
Jack: I knew that would come in handy. (pulls the necklace out of his shirt) Real gold, I guess.
Barbossa: Listen palsy, this ain’t going to fly. Either you give up or—
Jack: What? You’ll stab my other necklace? Maybe try for a ring this time?
They continue fighting. Meanwhile, Gibbs and the crew have hot-wired the mob cars and begin driving away, with Gibbs taking Barbossa’s black car. The mobsters hear and run outside, aghast.
Ragetti: They’re stealing our cars!
Pintel: If I live through this, they’re going to get some very nasty ransom notes…
Back inside, Will is fighting a few of Barbossa’s men, and Jack and Barbossa continue knifing at one another. Elizabeth runs in just in time to see Will about to be stabbed by a mobster.
Mobster: So what’ll it be? Clean and deep or short and messy?
Elizabeth shoots him in the head.
Elizabeth: Clean and deep.
Will: Liz!
Elizabeth: First time you’ve called me that…
Another guy comes at them and they get down to work fighting him off.
Will: Hopefully it won’t be the last!
Suddenly, a back door opens.
Will: Jack!
Jack tosses his necklace to Will, who rushes for the door. Meanwhile, Barbossa whips out his pistol and aims at Elizabeth.
Jack: Liz!
Barbossa: Yes, Liz. (smiles evily. Shot rings out—Barbossa looks puzzled, looks around to see Jack with a newly fired pistol. He looks down—the shot has hit his shoulder. He clutches at it, smiling) Poor aim, Sparrow. You always did do poorly under pressure.
Will: You might want to re-think that, Barbossa.
From the open door, David “The Squid” Jones steps into the room, surrounded by his own posse of hitmen and holding the necklace Will just gave him. Barbossa looks around frantically.
Barbossa: (realizing his defeat) Foiled… and by a coupla civilians…
Jack, Will, and Elizabeth quietly back away and escape while Jones makes his way over to Barbossa.
Outside, the arrival of Jones has been noted by Barbossa’s remaining men and they try to make a dash, only to be headed off by Norrington and a fresh batch of cop-cars bearing back-up.
Norrington: Not so fast, scum. You’ll have a long drive down to the statehouse to decide who among you’s to blame for this fiasco. Into the cars!
Jack, Will and Elizabeth arrive outside to find only cop cars awaiting them.
Elizabeth: Jack, forget about it. There’ll be other cars.
Jack: (giving her a half-hearted grin) And other dames with guns strapped to their thighs. (sighs) This town ain’t what it used to be…
All right Willo, the ending’s all yours! Take it away!
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Feb 27th, 2008 03:40 AM |
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Sifzensinril
Meself
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Location: In middle of nowhere |
aww awesome!
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Feb 27th, 2008 05:36 AM |
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tee_pirategirl
YoHo!YoHo!
Gender: Female
Location: on the dingy with dear ol' Jacky |
AWESOME! God! I'm laughing so hard. Can't wait for the ending.
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Feb 27th, 2008 09:38 AM |
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savvysparrowluv
Queen of the Night
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Location: Under the stars |
Awesome, Kate - Loved pintel and ragetti in the flapper dresses *snicker*
Totally OT, but LOVE YOUR SIGGY SIF!! 
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Feb 27th, 2008 02:00 PM |
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willofthewisp
Savvy did my sig
Gender: Female
Location: at the second star to the right |
I'll come up with the ending either tonight or tomorrow. Exciting climax, Kate!
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Feb 27th, 2008 06:56 PM |
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willofthewisp
Savvy did my sig
Gender: Female
Location: at the second star to the right |
CUT TO...Jack's indictment.
(We are in a courtroom, filled with spectators. Will and Elizabeth are among them, but not sitting together. The judge reads off the charges.)
Judge: "Racketeering, hijacking, blackmail, money laundering, impersonating a priest.
(Jack laughs, remembering something known only to him.)
Elizabeth: (to Norrington who is next to her) This is wrong.
Norrington: Law can't be wrong, baby. (puts his arm around her. She shuffles out of it. He looks hurt.) Besides, the only reason he went to help you in the first place was for revenge against Barbossa.
(Elizabeth shakes her head, knowing that's not true.)
(Will suddenly stands and moves closer to the front. He stops at the row where Elizabeth and Norrington are sitting.)
Will: I just wanted to thank you, Norrington, for clearing all this up.
Norrington: (stunned) Gee, thank you. I guess this story made the papers?
Will: Every single one of them...after The Herald printed it first. But I doubt anything about Jack's conviction and execution will be. (turns to Elizabeth) Liz, there's something you should know. (pause) I'm over the moon for you, sweetheart. I love you.
(He walks towards the front leaving her shocked.)
Judge: Jack Sparrow, do you have anything to say in your defense?
(Jack sees Will walking. His hands are tied.)
Elizabeth: I feel a swoon coming on. (pretends to faint. Norrington is distracted)
(Will has passed by Jack and handed him something. He then punches out the guard next to Jack. Jack uses the knife Will just handed him to cut his bonds. The two of them dodge the guards out the door and through the hallway until they are outside.)
(Norrington and Elizabeth, along with some officers, chase them.)
Norrington: Not so fast, Sparrow. You have nowhere to go.
Will: No! (steps between Norrington and Jack)
Norrington: I got no beef with you, Turner. This man is a mobster!
Will: And a good man. And here I stand, between you and him.
Elizabeth: (racing next to them) So am I.
Norrington: (to his men) Lower your weapons! Elizabeth, this, this is what you want?
Elizabeth: Sorry, James. You're a nice guy and all and I never wanted to hurt you, but these two sheiks have got the better of me.
Jack: (seizing the moment. He sees a black car pull up across the street) Well, this has been an eventful day for all of us. Commissioner, I was rooting for you. Know that. Liz...it just wouldn't have worked out. I'm sorry. (starts to walk off. He turns) Oh, and Will, uh, nice fedora. (he runs across the street and dives into the car)
Detective Gillette: Sir, aren't we gonna rush after him?
Norrington: (smirking) I can afford him a day's head start, don't you think? Turner, I wish you all the success and (swallows, looks at Elizabeth) happiness in the world. Just keep in mind your pen is mightier than your sword. (walks off)
Will: What did he mean by that? I mean, I know I'm just a reporter, but...
Elizabeth: Shut your trap. You're a criminal. (pulls him in for a kiss)
CUT TO...inside the car.
Gibbs: I'll give you the driver's seat.
(Jack scoots over and puts his hands on the steering wheel. He carresses it almost lovingly, lost in his own world with it.)
Jack: (snapping out of it) Get your atlas out! It's time to get back in the game. (starts driving. He begins to hum to himself and then sings) ...it's still the same old story/a fight for love and glory/a case of do or die/the world will always welcome lovers/as time goes by.
FIN
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Feb 28th, 2008 01:51 AM |
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katelovespirate
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Awe YAYAYAY!! Excellent ending. This was such a blast. I'm guessing it won't be long before we take on DMC...
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Feb 28th, 2008 02:07 AM |
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willofthewisp
Savvy did my sig
Gender: Female
Location: at the second star to the right |
Your decision since you are going to start that one. I look forward to reading what you write every time. 
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Feb 28th, 2008 02:12 AM |
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katelovespirate
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Gender: Unspecified
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It's up! I broke it down into five parts and started by just posting the first part---review hounding and all that. 
I'll post the link when it actually shows up on the site, you know how it takes a while to show up.
I reckon someone could report us and kill the fun right away, but what the heck. Personally, I think we should edit and clean up the translations a bit and re-post them while we're at it. Those were fantastic.
So, everyone... as soon as I post the link, we're counting on you to head over to FF and give us some reviewin' love...
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Feb 28th, 2008 02:45 AM |
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katelovespirate
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Feb 28th, 2008 02:51 AM |
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willofthewisp
Savvy did my sig
Gender: Female
Location: at the second star to the right |
I left a review and it looks like I'm the first. Step it up, ladies!
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Feb 28th, 2008 03:07 AM |
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Sifzensinril
Meself
Gender: Female
Location: In middle of nowhere |
I wish it was Sparrabeth ending, but since we need DMC, then this ending is awesome
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Feb 28th, 2008 05:28 AM |
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VioletEyesPop08
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Location: OC, Orlando, FL, USA, NA Account Restricted |
Well, that was pretty rough a piece of work to through. XP ?
WOW! Great work!!!!!!!!!!!!! I hope you enjoyed that.
I really learned a lot from it. It woke me up to when I was still in 10th grade.
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Feb 28th, 2008 06:54 AM |
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tee_pirategirl
YoHo!YoHo!
Gender: Female
Location: on the dingy with dear ol' Jacky |
*Cheers* I am madly in love with it! Best Parody I've read. You gotta start the DMC one...I'm sure everyone can join in and it'll be a blast.
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Freedom...
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