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REXXXX
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Meanwhile, get to writing a background!
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XanatosForever
Steward of RP
Gender: Male Location: Tending the throne. |
My second revision of my first attempt to make a character for Ushgarak's system. This is mainly to place all information, including a character biography, in one post for ease of viewing and whatnot.
Aurel Sing, Jedi Swordsman
“This issue can be resolved in many ways. I can assure you that violence is not the best course of action.”
STATS
Strength: 5
Agility: 5
Dexterity: 2
Defence: 1
Willpower: 4
Intelligence: 4
Charisma: 2
Perception: 5
Force Rating: 5
Force Attack: 7
Force Defence: 1
SKILLS
Lightsabre: 4
Combat: 4 (Fixed)
Jedi Lore: 1
Leadership: 1
Medicine: 2
Observation: 1
Intimidation: 1
SPECIAL
Born to the Sword- Aurel Sing gets a bonus die to all Lightsabre rolls.
FORCE POWERS
Master Balance
Co-ordination
Intuition
Leaping
Push/Pull
Sense
Master Swiftness
BLADE SCHTICKS
Balanced Guard
Bodyguard
Charge
Cleave
Orthodox Guard
COMBAT SCHTICKS
Dodge and Weave
Feint
Flying Attack
Focused Blow
Impervious
Martial Arts
MERITS
Ties - Jedi Order (Default)
Lucky
Aurel Sing was born in the lower levels of Coruscant. His parents, Beldor Sing and Eris Moonsong, did their best for the young boy, despite their circumstances. Beldor was indebted to the local crime lord, Junipero, forced to borrow credits to tend to Eris during her pregnancy and then the child. Once or twice the new father was close to paying the crime boss off, only to fall victim to an inopportune mugging. The couple often said they'd given all their luck to Aurel when he was born. It should have come to no surprise, then, when Aurel was brought home one day by a Jedi.
After the expected moment of fear and worry, Beldor and Eris were informed of how the Jedi had seen Aurel manage to escape from his less than friendly peers and avoid detection in some rather ingenious ways. The Jedi, who introduced himself as Lor-An Relm felt the Force was strong with Aurel, and so disbanded the mini-mob and sent the children home to their parents. Aurel came out of hiding once the last child was gone, and Lor-An realized that the boy had not been hiding out of fear, but to simply avoid unnecessary conflict. This impressed him, and with the boy's potential, he felt that a proper training by the Jedi was in order. Beldor and Eris knew this was a once in a lifetime opportunity for Aurel; so with tears in his eyes, Aurel left his home to enter the Jedi Temple with Lor-An Relm.
His early training progressed nominally, discovering that his "gut" feelings were really his connection to the Force. When not overwhelmed with exhaustion, Aurel would traverse the archives, scanning over datapads in search of subjects that piqued his interest. He found mild satisfaction with the extensive medical procedures and other healing lore. Then came the day the younglings were given their first training sabers; the boy had found his calling. He then devoted all his attention, including his development in the Force, towards swordsmanship, with one exception. He vowed that lest he be in a time and place where his lightsaber would be necessary, he would hold no other weapon. So Aurel Sing took greater pride in his physical training, and through it became adept at confronting opponents unarmed.
He spent what little time not devoted to the saber or the fist poring through the archives, absorbing the recounts of past Jedi and the history of the lightsaber itself. Through these studies and the memory of lessons taught to him by his parents, Aurel developed his own personal mantra that began to color his actions with a saber. The lightsaber was a power weapon of destruction, but it could also be used as a beacon of defense.
He, Aurel Sing, would do everything in his power to defend those he could, and let no being stand in his way, lest they be stuck down for their own folly to the vision of light and the sound of a hum....
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Jul 16th, 2010 08:02 AM |
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InfernoJG95
darth inferno
Gender: Male Location: The death star |
Josef Gibson
19
Jedi Padawan
Master: Serif Katoa
droid: R4-D17
jedi starfighter
and freighter named the rancors claw.
STATS
Strength: 4
Agility: 4
Dexterity: 5
Defence: 2
Willpower: 4
Intelligence: 4
Charisma: 3
Perception: 4
Force Rating: 5
Force Attack: 5
Force Defence: 2
SKILLS
Lightsabre: 4
Combat: 4
Guns: 2
Languages: 3
Savoir-Faire: 3
Leadership: 1
Medicine: 2
Observation: 2
Fix-it: 3
FORCE POWERS: Push/Pull, Sense, Intuition, swiftness, presence
BLADE SCHTICKS: block, cleave, reflection,
COMBAT SCHTICKS: unbreakable, dodge and weave, sidestep, counterstrike, , martial artist
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Sep 10th, 2010 12:56 PM |
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REXXXX
Networking
Gender: Male Location: San Diego Moderator |
Hello new person.
What template did you use? You've got quite a few things that don't quite add up in every category.
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Sep 10th, 2010 03:39 PM |
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Bespin Bart
Buggy
Gender: Male Location: Everywhere |
Also used old schticks! Weird!
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Sep 30th, 2010 06:07 AM |
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Rio Rio
Senior Member
Gender: Male Location: USA |
After looking around, I think I want to play a Seeker or a Ronin. I can't decide.
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Oct 5th, 2010 08:10 AM |
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Craft
CTE
Gender: Male Location: Australia! |
If it helps the Renegades currently have no Seeker, but one Pilot based Ronin.
Hi! I play Wentar Reiua, Renegade pilot and negotiator. Welcome!
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Oct 5th, 2010 08:17 AM |
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Rio Rio
Senior Member
Gender: Male Location: USA |
Hey thanks for the welcome man.
I think I will do a Seeker. My Ronin idea was cowboyish gunslinger but I like the concept I have for a Seeker. Smart guy but kind of space casey and mystical. Not a bookworm like Jelena or Jovan I think?
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Oct 5th, 2010 08:27 AM |
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Craft
CTE
Gender: Male Location: Australia! |
It's up to you! It's your character play him however you want... Within reason. No need for a blood hungry Jedi.
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Oct 5th, 2010 08:39 AM |
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beeblebrox
Junior Member
Gender: Male Location: San Diego CA |
Hey everybody. My good buddy is a regular here and sold me on trying some rping out. Hope this template is up to scratch, let me know if there are any problems.
Name: Jonn Thrane Daisuke
Renegade Ronin
Bio_
Born to middle class parents on Alderaan. Father was Alderaanian and worked in the Alderaan Core of engineers as a lead technician (maintenance, refurbishing, modification). Mother was daughter of drifters, lived on Ando, Algara II, and finally Alderaan. Developed a deep love of alien cultures--sang me alien nursery rhymes--in her travels growing up and instilled that in her son. Spent nearly every waking hour until being selected for the jedi academy in a hangar, gave me a love for starships that I could never shake. Growing up in the academy I didn't really gel with the other learners. I had a few close friends that shared my ideals, and interests, but was never really”popular” with the vast majority of the students. I largely went under the radar. I excelled at single combat and my love for starships only expanded at the academy. Eventually the corrupt nature of the galactic senate and the complacency of the jedi order led me to leave the order in my teens. After leaving the academy I begged, borrowed, stowed away, and mind tricked my way back to Alderaan looking for my parents. Upon my arrival I found that my father had died in a starship repair accident, and my mother was living very meagerly. Got a very rewarding job (morally, not financially) with the Alderaan Security Detail chasing down slavers and pirates in the region. This allowed my to support my mother and fight evil that fell under the gaze of galactic oversight. Eventually the passing of my mother and dissatisfaction with the beauracracy of the ASD led me to secure a honorable discharge. After that I bought a dis repaired Davaab Class star fighter, fixed it up, and set off to parts unknown.
STATS
Strength: 3
Agility: 4
Dexterity: 5
Defence: 1
Willpower: 4
Intelligence: 5
Charisma: 3
Perception: 5
Force Rating: 7
Force Attack: 7
Force Defence: 1
SKILLS
Lightsabre: Take the highest of Strength, Agility and Dexterity away from 9. This is your Lightsabre score.
Combat: 2 (Fixed)
Savoir-Faire: 2
Languages: 2
Survival: 2
Intimidate: 1
Leadership: 1
Medicine: 1
Fix-it: 4
Jedi Lore: 1
Observation: 2
SPECIAL:_Life amongst the Stars: A Ronin chooses one of the following skill/schtick packages
B. Wandering Ace: Pilot 4
Favourite Ride
Ruthless Hunter
Tactial Awareness
FORCE POWERS: Push/Pull, Sense, Intuition;
Swiftness-Mastery
Lifting-Mastery
Coordination Mastery
Inner Calm
Tranquility
BLADE SCHTICKS: 4
Forward Guard
Focused guard
Cleave
Reflection
COMBAT SCHTICKS: 3
Whirling Strike
Duck
Feint
Renegades have an extra Merit but have no authority as a Jedi
Starship
I like the Davaab-type if you all accept KOTOR era ships
Ties (Contacts x3)
Alderaan Security Detail Anti Slavery and Piracy Division (ASAP)
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Jan 18th, 2011 08:02 AM |
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Ushgarak
Paladin
Gender: Male Location: Chelmsford, Essex, UK Co-Admin |
... I was waiting for the normal community oversight on a new member! Especially Xeth, who always vets potential Renegade recruits.
From a quick look over: generally good! KOTOR era ships- nothing against them per se, but even in Star Wars fashions and names change over thousands of years, even if the tech is more steady.
I think your social stats are too high (they should total 16) and Ties take up three of your merit slots, so you are over-merited.
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Jan 18th, 2011 07:19 PM |
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Craft
CTE
Gender: Male Location: Australia! |
Oh! A new Renegade! Dunno how I missed this. Welcome aboard!
Come to think of it he reminds me of Wentar, Wandering Ace Ronin from Alderaan.
Wait, how is he over merited? Ties takes three, starship takes one and he's a Renegade so he get the extra merit bonus. So 4 should be fine.
Yeah, if I use my Ronin as an example one of his mental stats should be a 4 instead of 5.
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Jan 19th, 2011 12:04 AM |
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beeblebrox
Junior Member
Gender: Male Location: San Diego CA |
Hi, thanks for the warm welcome.
My mistake on the mental stats, I'll just take one off charisma to equal 16:
Willpower: 4
Intelligence: 5
Charisma: 2
Perception: 5
Should I consider the jury still out on the Merits? If I need to I'll just go to contacts x2.
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Jan 19th, 2011 06:29 AM |
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Craft
CTE
Gender: Male Location: Australia! |
I'm pretty certain Ties and Starship together on a Renegade is fine, we get 4 merits total.
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Jan 19th, 2011 06:52 AM |
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REXXXX
Networking
Gender: Male Location: San Diego Moderator |
Not much of a people person, that Jonn Daisuke.
Also, issue with the Force powers. You've got Lifting Mastered, but not Push/Pull. You'll want to do Push first, then get Lifting later with xp, perhaps.
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Jan 20th, 2011 12:39 AM |
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beeblebrox
Junior Member
Gender: Male Location: San Diego CA |
Ok,
I'll do:
Willpower: 4
Intelligence: 5
Charisma: 3
Perception: 4
I'll hold on to Ties
and master push/pull, dropping mastered lift.
Any ideas when the next join point for the main campaign will be?
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Jan 20th, 2011 02:39 AM |
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Ushgarak
Paladin
Gender: Male Location: Chelmsford, Essex, UK Co-Admin |
Oh, I mis-read your Merits; what you had is fine.
Next opportunity is when the Jedi leave their current world, which is not THAT far off.
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Last edited by Ushgarak on Jan 21st, 2011 at 01:43 PM
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Jan 20th, 2011 10:30 PM |
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Bespin Bart
Buggy
Gender: Male Location: Everywhere |
Welcome aboard, Jonn! Can't wait to have you in the game.
Yay more Renegades!
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Jan 21st, 2011 07:05 PM |
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Ushgarak
Paladin
Gender: Male Location: Chelmsford, Essex, UK Co-Admin |
A conversion here for a potential new player...
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IFFA NA'WORRU (Athlete)
STATS
Strength: 5
Agility: 4
Dexterity: 4
Defence: 1
Willpower: 4 (+1)
Intelligence: 4
Charisma: 4
Perception: 4
Force Rating: 6
Force Attack: 7
Force Defence: 1
SKILLS
Lightsabre: 8
Combat: 3
Guns: 3
Jedi Lore: 2
Leadership: 1
Pilot: 2
Sabotage: 2
Intrusion: 2
Languages: 2
Savoir-Faire: 2
SPECIAL: Gifted Acrobat- An Athlete gets two extra dice when making any form of acrobatic roll (that is NOT an attack)
MERITS:
Mentor (Kit Fisto)
Contacts (Jedi Archive)
Higher Purpose
FORCE POWERS:
Push/Pull
Master Leaping
Swiftness
Co-ordination
Balance
Master Sense
Presence
Intuition
BLADE SCHTICKS:
Balanced Guard
Cleave
GUN SCHTICKS:
Carnival of Carnage
Eye of the Storm
COMBAT SCHTICKS:
Dodge and Weave
Flying Attack
Street Fighting
Martial Arts
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That's as close a match as I could get, Mithlond, and it leaves you 14 xp to spend as you like.
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Tptmanno1
Life Ponder-er
Gender: Male Location: Dreaming...Or am I living... |
Yay, A Jedi!
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