Registered: Jun 2008
Location: In Luna's mane, chasing STAAARS!
Kaiden and Ashley are teammates and so are Wrex, Garrus, Liara, and Tali. Since Shepard is dead (quit saying he's not), I was just wondering who would take his place to command the Normandy and save the universe from the reapers.
Registered: Jun 2005
Location: Lifting weights and lifting ass.
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Please a teaser trailer wouldn't spoil and give away such an epic event, if you paid attention to the mass effect forums, the designers already stated that the teaser tells you nothing.
Hell if that isn't the case then let me point out that the teaser for halo 2(or 3) listed master chief as KIA(dead) but was he in halo 2 or 3? No.
He said Master Chief was listed as KIA(Killed in Action) in Halo 2 or 3 in some teaser, then he asked was he in Halo 2 or 3? And his answer was no, while that may not be a technical grammar mistake, it is just incorrect.
Then Dorian is not a clear writer(or to be exact, he is not proficient at thinking his thoughts out on the keyboard, or more likely, chooses not to) in that his sentences are not precise nor clear in their meaning.
But because you find it necessary to bust my balls.
I will point out your errors in this post.
Your first error in typing this post is not using one apostrophe when typing "I'll," you had two between the "I" and "l".
A capitalisation error is found in your attempt at forming Dorian's sentence into one with a much clearer meaning, the starting "l" is lower case. Actually, several more can be found, I shall list them in the order you used them in, only capitalised.
"Halo 2"
"Master Chief"
"Halo 2" again.
Also, you neglected to add a quotation mark at the end of the rewrite of Dorian's sentence, there should be one because you had one at the beginning.
Weither? What the hell does weither mean? Oh, you meant whether? Spelling error.
"The" is usually spelled with a "t" before the "he."
You type far too fast for your own good, "ana ctual" makes no logical sense, unless rewrote to be "an actual."
In short, you, my fine sir, are the noobwaffle, and you will NOT give me an English lesson.
1. Because you read in a very shitty fashion, and as such recognise shitty writings point.
2. Do not lie to me sir.
3. That is bullshit. A paraphrase is simply a restatement of something that clarifies it, in your own words, and as such, is subject to error, seeing as how it is not a direct quotation. If you paraphrase something and mispell every word and have horrible punctuation, then you sir, are flawed in your attempt at paraphrasing.
4. Nah.
5. Nah.
6. Only if you give me naked pictures of your mother.
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