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finti
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I did post a little poem while back in this thread, but then again I never braged about my writing skills. I aint much of a writer when it comes to poetry and such, I can try for a minute and then it all becomes way too corny.
But my corny little poem went like this 
watching a bird
as a rainbow cracks the sky
a sun filled horizon
deceiving the eye
dazzling rain
as the wind
whispers my name
and the bird
starts to fly
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May 23rd, 2003 03:52 PM |
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GordonSkywalker
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Not bad.
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May 23rd, 2003 05:03 PM |
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Augeybana
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really cool finti here's another short one:
I'm Me:
I'm a quiet volcano
That about to erupt
I'm a dead violet
That will never bloom
I'm wounded bird
That will never Fly
I'm a urban legend
That is not entirely true
I'm a thorny rose
That will never be touch
I'm a pimple
That no one wants
I'm a wooden Floor
That just to be step on
I'm a homeless man
That is overlooked
I'm a dull knife
That's useless
And I'm me
That is no one else.
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"monkey ninjas are at a meeting as we speak,plotting my demise"
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May 23rd, 2003 10:41 PM |
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GordonSkywalker
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Original and impressive Augey. You are the Master of Words as far as I am concerned. Mine is nothing compared to what you come up with.
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May 23rd, 2003 10:44 PM |
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Augeybana
Augeygeta
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Thanks friend but your lyrics were very impressive then mine I wish I could write lyrics.
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May 23rd, 2003 10:51 PM |
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GordonSkywalker
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Heck I used to have to get my band to rearrange my lyrics b/c they were dull. Yours are better than most my friend.
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May 23rd, 2003 11:04 PM |
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Augeybana
Augeygeta
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AT first before my creative writing classes my were not togeter but I would love to have lyrics like your my old friend.
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May 23rd, 2003 11:12 PM |
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GordonSkywalker
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We better be careful with our mutual appreciation society here or someone might blow a fuse. Not everyone understands cool dudes like us my brother. 
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May 23rd, 2003 11:18 PM |
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Augeybana
Augeygeta
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Yes that true once agian I should ask where all the talent here like finti Ush and the great Lara to lighten us once again.
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May 23rd, 2003 11:24 PM |
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GordonSkywalker
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I don't think we shall hear from Lara again until tomorrow but I could be mistaken. Ush is on line as we speak.
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May 23rd, 2003 11:33 PM |
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Augeybana
Augeygeta
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The more the merrier.
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May 23rd, 2003 11:52 PM |
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finti
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well Gordo we`re waiting
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May 24th, 2003 12:36 AM |
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Bespin Bart
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What are we waiting for?
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THIS IS WHAT WE'VE WAITED FOR
THIS IS IT, BOYS, THIS IS WAR!
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May 24th, 2003 04:59 AM |
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finti
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the end of the world as we know it
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May 24th, 2003 09:45 AM |
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GordonSkywalker
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{Sorry gents but GordonSkywalker is unavailable at the moment.}
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May 24th, 2003 09:47 AM |
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yerssot
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*goes digging for nukes*
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May 24th, 2003 10:15 AM |
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GordonSkywalker
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{No I will not be posting any more lyrics for the masses to read today. I see no reason to.}
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May 24th, 2003 10:17 AM |
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Bespin Bart
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Oh, the end of the world then?
To the bunkers!
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May 24th, 2003 04:17 PM |
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GordonSkywalker
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{Quick everybody follow Bespin Bart!!}
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May 24th, 2003 04:21 PM |
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Bespin Bart
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What's with the brackets?
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