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Lara
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hey!
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May 23rd, 2003 02:27 PM |
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Lara
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not the response I wanted but never mind!
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May 23rd, 2003 02:29 PM |
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May 23rd, 2003 02:31 PM |
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Lara
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blessed be x
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May 23rd, 2003 02:33 PM |
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GordonSkywalker
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May 23rd, 2003 02:40 PM |
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Lara
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May 23rd, 2003 02:43 PM |
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GordonSkywalker
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Not much more to say unless someone comes along and posts some of their creative work. Me and Augey cannot be expected to carry this thread all on our own.
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May 23rd, 2003 02:43 PM |
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you and augey carry the thread? Augey has posted some of his writing allright, but you contributed once. Dont overestimate your role in this thread cause 99% of your posts have been chit chat, while augey at least posted something more constructive
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May 23rd, 2003 02:53 PM |
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GordonSkywalker
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Sod off. I can be just as mean as you are. You are the one who overrates his importance and likes to enforce his will on others. At least I tried to contribute something to this thread.
Last edited by GordonSkywalker on May 23rd, 2003 at 02:56 PM
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May 23rd, 2003 02:53 PM |
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Lara
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Location: Some where in the Poison Ivy |
*cough, cough*
Nightmare
Dreams of unnatural origin,
So real and full of fear.
They make me jump in the night,
So frightened and fretful, I shed a tear.
I wonder if they'll go away,
So I sit alone in the dark.
Somewhere I the distance I hear a dog bark.
The rain comes down hard,
As I drift to sleep again.
Only to jerk awake by some one calling my name.
They pressed down on my bed,
These dreams of unnatural origin,
So real and full of fear.
I wish they would just disappear.
What Was Left Behind?
Your there, I'm here.
We're in the same place we were last year!
Have none of us learned?
We've all crashed and burned!
I have so much I want to say,
But the word just won't come my way!
The salt from my tears stung.
I'm up the ladder, your on the last rung.
I want to help but the gaps too wide!
That final night I cried and cried.
So much to do, so little time!
So little of it really mine.
Now its twenty past nine,
How much further do I have to climb?
Bring her back, she's mine!
Don't say she's gone for a long, long time.
She's mine, don't make me climb,
Don't make me leave her behind,
Don't say its all in my mind!
Don't let her go!
You, Her and Myself
how could you just walk away from me
and leave me that way
there must be more to what you had to say
I wanted to scream,to shout to rear my head
but you just got up and went to bed
you made it look like you didnt care
like you didnt want to share
all I could do was stand and stare
at the back of her beautifully blonde hair
I didnt want her to go that night
though I tried with allmy might
I really couldnt stop the fight
my caring siezed and you creased my clothes
I thought you knew everyone knows
when its all blown over it will still show
so tell me now, how could you let her go
leaving a fathom of air,
where apon I used to stare?
I think i may have posted some of these before, but they might be different I dont remember!
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May 23rd, 2003 02:54 PM |
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finti
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Well Gordon the aspiring songwriter, you who claimed to have so much longer experience than Lara let see some more of your wast experiense as a writer or was the contribution you made all you have accomplished in all those years as a writer.
I think you posted this one before Lara, but thats allright
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May 23rd, 2003 02:59 PM |
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GordonSkywalker
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Let us see you say something constructive then we might consider your most generous offer............. 
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May 23rd, 2003 03:00 PM |
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finti
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hmm now there we have confidence
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May 23rd, 2003 03:02 PM |
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Lara
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gordon! *makes big puppy eyes*
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May 23rd, 2003 03:02 PM |
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GordonSkywalker
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Finti by all means go first. I will critique your work with much fairness of course.
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May 23rd, 2003 03:15 PM |
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Lara
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I think you know what they mean.
and i agree maybe finti should post some thing original other than other ppls words.
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May 23rd, 2003 03:22 PM |
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GordonSkywalker
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No I do not.
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May 23rd, 2003 03:29 PM |
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Lara
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Location: Some where in the Poison Ivy |
I was being nice!
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May 23rd, 2003 03:34 PM |
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GordonSkywalker
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I am aware of this now.
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