just tell me what you think:

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feltonfreak
so sad
so lost
i wander alone in a desert picking flowrers that turn to dust
my mind has gone
my soul lingers beyond my grasp
no where to go
no where to hide
now i'm scared
filled with hate
if i was a scale i would drop
having said this i am filled with nothing..................just space



*o and don't try to copy, i already entered it to books, and a poetry contest. sorry*


muahahaha stick out tongue jus telll me what ya think... please

Vetkin
Its nice. Very sad yet romantic.

DeNiro
is that a song u r writing or a poem but very good

feltonfreak
idk, i wrote it as a poem but i could make it into a song.

DeNiro
look i gave insprational advice now why doesnt ne one ask for my advice on my thread i did so well i thought lol

Dexx
"if i was a scale i would drop" What the f**k? omg....how....contemporan *hysterical giggle*

Fire
quite good

feltonfreak
hahahahaha, very funny, and i must congrtulate you "dexx" becasue you have no sence of humor sorry.

feltonfreak
actually scratch that
you did give you option

Dexx
no, i do. it's just more peculiar.

LindsIsTightK
I think its ok, could be longer and more detailed

dublecee
who watches invader zim

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