Hallucination

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Disturbing13
Frozen music,
A moving photograph,
Something seems wrong
Something is not right

Memories come to life,
From the ashes, from the dead
Motionless is the fire
Like a simple mistake

The eyes flutter, expressionless
Secrets come unshaped
Lingering still is the darkness
Daylight seems forgotten

Honest words bathe in lies
Your voice, whispering riddles,
Unreal moonlight cries,
With the sweetness enslaved

Travelling back in time,
Seeking comfort in tension
Something is not right
In this silently dying obsession

bordom
*shivers* eek! AGAIN! you keep makin me shiver! stick out tongue great job!

Disturbing13
Lol, I'm into Dark Poetry basically.

shoe-freak
i thought so, you made me shiver!

Disturbing13
Heh..

bordom
Originally posted by shoe-freak
i thought so, you made me shiver!
see I'm not the only one stick out tongue
Originally posted by Disturbing13
Lol, I'm into Dark Poetry basically.
I like dark poetry stick out tongue so mysterious

Disturbing13
I'm into Love Poetry too. But I don't write alot of Love Poems. I've had to many Relationships and be heartbroken to write any love poems.

Syren
That's dark, and disturbing... but really well written clapping

Also, would you mind consolidating your work so it's all in one thread?

snehin
Originally posted by Disturbing13
Frozen music,
A moving photograph,
Something seems wrong
Something is not right

Memories come to life,
From the ashes, from the dead
Motionless is the fire
Like a simple mistake

The eyes flutter, expressionless
Secrets come unshaped
Lingering still is the darkness
Daylight seems forgotten

Honest words bathe in lies
Your voice, whispering riddles,
Unreal moonlight cries,
With the sweetness enslaved

Travelling back in time,
Seeking comfort in tension
Something is not right
In this silently dying obsession kool

Coldfire
I missed that one.... it like gave me shivers too yes

Angelina_Taylor
Thanks for plagiarizing my poem. It makes me feel special.

Oh. And by the way. Your stupid site won't even let me post the link to the original poem I wrote. In this case:

Please go to poems-and-quotes.com and search for "Angelina Taylor". The title should come up, it's "Hallucinations".

Don't ever steal from me again. It pissed the **** out of me.

Cheers,

Taylor``

Coldfire
Originally posted by Angelina_Taylor
Thanks for plagiarizing my poem. It makes me feel special.

Oh. And by the way. Your stupid site won't even let me post the link to the original poem I wrote. In this case:

Please go to poems-and-quotes.com and search for "Angelina Taylor". The title should come up, it's "Hallucinations".

Don't ever steal from me again. It pissed the **** out of me.

Cheers,

Taylor``
WHAAAAAAAAT?!? You're saying this is your poem??? Oh boy....

Angelina_Taylor
Yes, it is. I can finally upload a link here. What the hell is it with new people not being able to post links?!

Check out the ****ing posting dates.

Good day.

Taylor``

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/dark/poems.php?id=466397

Ya Krunk'd Floo
Oh, man...That's funny! Some people are such sad-sacks...

NunYahBidness
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! Can anyone say, DORK??!!

Angelina_Taylor
Hmmmmm.. I hope you aren't talking about me :P

Taylor``

Angelina_Taylor
By the way.

Will the moderators or admins ever delete this? It's still here, and it bothers me.

Please.

Taylor``

DreamingWarrior
welll, i was gonna say good poem, but dude, you are an ahole for stealing that poem. stay in brittania.

Angelina_Taylor
Do you even HAVE moderators for these discussion forums?!?!?!

Because really, this site needs them.

Taylor``

Coldfire
Yeah there are mods here... if you want it taken, then PM lilbitchiness about it, cuz she doesn't have time to check every little thread smile

Angelina_Taylor
I've reported this thread about three times. Isn't that supposed to do something?

Taylor``

Coldfire
Originally posted by Angelina_Taylor
I've reported this thread about three times. Isn't that supposed to do something?

Taylor``
Hmmm.... well I honestly don't know then...

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