iluvhpsomuch1_7
A/N First-Like i said this is the remake of the unfinished James/Lily Story. I'm rewriting it because again when I started it before I was a beginning writer and let's just say the writing wasn't all that good. Summer Changed my new story in General Fiction has the writing style that I use now check that out and you'll see it's way better.
Second- Here I start whole new writing style. Same idea but things might be taken out or moved. Somethings just didn't work out.
Third- All rights belong to J.K Rowling. Much Love to her for creating these characters lol.
Fourth- Okay I want you guys to comment! Even if it like "God this story is completely crappy! It doesnt make sense!" Just anything! But please no "PPPOST!!!!" those are just plain annoying and I don't even pay attention to them so what's the point.
Fifth- Enjoy! And I promise the rest of the Author's Notes will be at the bottom of the posts.
Much <3 --iluvhpsomuch1_7--
Chapter 1
"Prongs wait up!" a tall boy with dark, long hair that hung in his face yelled.
He was running towards another teenage boy named James Potter. James too had dark hair but it was much shorter than the boy's running to him, Sirius Black. James wore his slender glasses, blue jeans, and a t-shirt under his school robes. Every few minutes James would ruffle his hair with his hand to make it look even messier than before. He thought it was more attractive. Lately he had stopped the habit though since the girl he was really after, Lily Evans, thought it was rather annoying. He was a Chaser and new Captain for the Gryffindor Quidditch team.
"Hey Sirius. Let's find an empty compartment." James said.
Both boys walked to the end of the train until they could finally find a free compartment.
"So how was your summer?" Sirius asked put his trunk up in the luggage loft,
"Dream about Evans at all?" he asked with a smile.
"Sod off." James snapped. "I don't dream about her."
"What about last year when we heard you moaning her name out in your sleep. I would define that as dreaming about her, Prongs." Remus Lupin said walking into the compartment.
"Lily! Oh Lily I love you!" Peter Pettigrew moaned in imitation of James.
"Shut up Wormtail." James playfully punched him in the arm.
Remus, or Moony, was a sick looking boy with sandy blonde hair that was slightly gray at the temples. Peter, or Wormtail, was a short, chubby boy with slightly darker hair than Remus.
The boys called themselves the Marauders for the name they were given by their Head of House, Professor McGonagall. They were the trouble makers of their year. Pranks, jokes, and any other shenanigans that happened at Hogwarts were indeed the Marauders fault.
"I'm gonna lay off this year. No more asking her out. I'll try not to show off as much." James explained
"Fat chance with that, mate." Sirius snorted.
"It's not my fault she can be nerve racking, Padfoot." James spat. "I'm just going to be nice around her. I'm gonna be her friend then ask her out. It'll take time though."
There was silence. A reassuring silence though.
"Remus we have to go to the Prefect's Carriage." Someone in the doorway said.
"What?" He replied.
"Prefect's meeting remember. You're Head Boy." Lily said.
"Sorry, I'm not Head Boy. Prongsie over here is." He replied smiling.
"Excuse me?" she said disgusted.
"I'm Head Boy." James piped up.
"No you're not." Lily said utterly confused.
James held up his badge.
"Is this some kind of sick joke?" Lily spat.
"It's not that hard to believe Evans." James said and stormed out of the room down to the Prefect Carriage.
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"So he just left?" Alice said.
"Yeah he didn't make a joke or anything he just left. Do you think he's finally grown up?" She said with a frown.
"Maybe let's just see but I just don't get how you hate him so much. He's so handsome and funny." Lily's other friend, Jen, said while brushing her wavy, blonde hair.
"Well, the stupid way he messes up his hair more than it already is, just to make it look like he just got of his stupid broom. The way he walks around the castle thinking he owns the place. He hexes everyone in his way. He's just a jerk to everyone." Lily complained.
"Ooo lala. Lily has a crush." Alice said.
"You're joking right. I've just finished complaining about the guy and you say I have a crush. How thick could you get?"
"Well I mean you talk about him with passion." Alice said laughing.
"Yeah, I hate him with a passion if that's what you're saying." Lily said with a smile.
The train ride went by surprisingly fast. When they arrived at Hogwarts they departed the train, made their way into the horseless carriages, then into the castle for the Start of Term feast. Dumbledore made his usual speech,
"Welcome to a new year at Hogwarts! As a reminder the forest is off limits and hopefully old comers will do to remember that. Welcome our new caretaker Mr.Filch. He has asked me to remind you all that magic should not be used in the corridors between classes. I must remind you that this year caution must be taken. As you may have read in the Daily Prophet, a very powerful and dark wizard has been causing havoc in the Wizarding World. At exactly 10:00 every night the school will be put under more security enchantments. It will be smart to not get yourself caught outside the school after ten or you will be locked out. Enough of that, my shining pupils must be starving by now! Let the feast begin."
The delicious food appeared and students immediately began eating.
After everyone was finished Lily and James along with the Gryffindor 7th year Prefects, which happened to be Lily's friend Alice and James's friend Remus, lead the first years to the Common room.
"Aconite." James said to the portrait. It swung open and Lily helped everyone up as James led everyone into common room.
"This is the common room. Girl's dormitories are on the left as boy's on the right. You will get your schedules in the morning in the Great Hall at breakfast." He said.
The Head Boy and Girl were to patrol the corridors every night from ten to eleven.
"Alright Potter ready to go?" she asked later that night.
"Yeah, one sec." he replied and ran up the stairs with a piece of blank parchment.
He came back and started walking with her out the portrait door, immediately putting his hand in his hair for the umpteenth time, "Oh sorry, old habits are hard to break." He said smiling.
"You're trying to break that habit?" asked a confused Lily.
"Yeah. I'm not impressing anyone with it. You have to grow up sometime right?"
Lily blushed.
'Maybe he really is growing up. He said it himself.' She thought.
Second- Here I start whole new writing style. Same idea but things might be taken out or moved. Somethings just didn't work out.
Third- All rights belong to J.K Rowling. Much Love to her for creating these characters lol.
Fourth- Okay I want you guys to comment! Even if it like "God this story is completely crappy! It doesnt make sense!" Just anything! But please no "PPPOST!!!!" those are just plain annoying and I don't even pay attention to them so what's the point.
Fifth- Enjoy! And I promise the rest of the Author's Notes will be at the bottom of the posts.
Much <3 --iluvhpsomuch1_7--
Chapter 1
"Prongs wait up!" a tall boy with dark, long hair that hung in his face yelled.
He was running towards another teenage boy named James Potter. James too had dark hair but it was much shorter than the boy's running to him, Sirius Black. James wore his slender glasses, blue jeans, and a t-shirt under his school robes. Every few minutes James would ruffle his hair with his hand to make it look even messier than before. He thought it was more attractive. Lately he had stopped the habit though since the girl he was really after, Lily Evans, thought it was rather annoying. He was a Chaser and new Captain for the Gryffindor Quidditch team.
"Hey Sirius. Let's find an empty compartment." James said.
Both boys walked to the end of the train until they could finally find a free compartment.
"So how was your summer?" Sirius asked put his trunk up in the luggage loft,
"Dream about Evans at all?" he asked with a smile.
"Sod off." James snapped. "I don't dream about her."
"What about last year when we heard you moaning her name out in your sleep. I would define that as dreaming about her, Prongs." Remus Lupin said walking into the compartment.
"Lily! Oh Lily I love you!" Peter Pettigrew moaned in imitation of James.
"Shut up Wormtail." James playfully punched him in the arm.
Remus, or Moony, was a sick looking boy with sandy blonde hair that was slightly gray at the temples. Peter, or Wormtail, was a short, chubby boy with slightly darker hair than Remus.
The boys called themselves the Marauders for the name they were given by their Head of House, Professor McGonagall. They were the trouble makers of their year. Pranks, jokes, and any other shenanigans that happened at Hogwarts were indeed the Marauders fault.
"I'm gonna lay off this year. No more asking her out. I'll try not to show off as much." James explained
"Fat chance with that, mate." Sirius snorted.
"It's not my fault she can be nerve racking, Padfoot." James spat. "I'm just going to be nice around her. I'm gonna be her friend then ask her out. It'll take time though."
There was silence. A reassuring silence though.
"Remus we have to go to the Prefect's Carriage." Someone in the doorway said.
"What?" He replied.
"Prefect's meeting remember. You're Head Boy." Lily said.
"Sorry, I'm not Head Boy. Prongsie over here is." He replied smiling.
"Excuse me?" she said disgusted.
"I'm Head Boy." James piped up.
"No you're not." Lily said utterly confused.
James held up his badge.
"Is this some kind of sick joke?" Lily spat.
"It's not that hard to believe Evans." James said and stormed out of the room down to the Prefect Carriage.
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"So he just left?" Alice said.
"Yeah he didn't make a joke or anything he just left. Do you think he's finally grown up?" She said with a frown.
"Maybe let's just see but I just don't get how you hate him so much. He's so handsome and funny." Lily's other friend, Jen, said while brushing her wavy, blonde hair.
"Well, the stupid way he messes up his hair more than it already is, just to make it look like he just got of his stupid broom. The way he walks around the castle thinking he owns the place. He hexes everyone in his way. He's just a jerk to everyone." Lily complained.
"Ooo lala. Lily has a crush." Alice said.
"You're joking right. I've just finished complaining about the guy and you say I have a crush. How thick could you get?"
"Well I mean you talk about him with passion." Alice said laughing.
"Yeah, I hate him with a passion if that's what you're saying." Lily said with a smile.
The train ride went by surprisingly fast. When they arrived at Hogwarts they departed the train, made their way into the horseless carriages, then into the castle for the Start of Term feast. Dumbledore made his usual speech,
"Welcome to a new year at Hogwarts! As a reminder the forest is off limits and hopefully old comers will do to remember that. Welcome our new caretaker Mr.Filch. He has asked me to remind you all that magic should not be used in the corridors between classes. I must remind you that this year caution must be taken. As you may have read in the Daily Prophet, a very powerful and dark wizard has been causing havoc in the Wizarding World. At exactly 10:00 every night the school will be put under more security enchantments. It will be smart to not get yourself caught outside the school after ten or you will be locked out. Enough of that, my shining pupils must be starving by now! Let the feast begin."
The delicious food appeared and students immediately began eating.
After everyone was finished Lily and James along with the Gryffindor 7th year Prefects, which happened to be Lily's friend Alice and James's friend Remus, lead the first years to the Common room.
"Aconite." James said to the portrait. It swung open and Lily helped everyone up as James led everyone into common room.
"This is the common room. Girl's dormitories are on the left as boy's on the right. You will get your schedules in the morning in the Great Hall at breakfast." He said.
The Head Boy and Girl were to patrol the corridors every night from ten to eleven.
"Alright Potter ready to go?" she asked later that night.
"Yeah, one sec." he replied and ran up the stairs with a piece of blank parchment.
He came back and started walking with her out the portrait door, immediately putting his hand in his hair for the umpteenth time, "Oh sorry, old habits are hard to break." He said smiling.
"You're trying to break that habit?" asked a confused Lily.
"Yeah. I'm not impressing anyone with it. You have to grow up sometime right?"
Lily blushed.
'Maybe he really is growing up. He said it himself.' She thought.
