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silence.
creeps.


night.
shines.


two dots.
of light
glows.


cursive.
prints of
hands.


seep.
through the
glass.


alphabets.
glisten the
skin.


dark.
almost thin
path.


door.
partly closed
secret.


white.
chalky pasty
glistens.


laughter.
sneaks.

wow that sounded pretty.

thankies.

*bumps*

bumps ermm

It sounds like you're just saying every thought that goes through your head. Also two light does not 'glows' they glow. Keep it up though, you just need to inject a more exciting topic into this rythm structure.

It certainly unique, stylistically. Artistically, however, I'm afraid it is not.