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Ash

My love, if you look in my books
for love whispers that I lived in,

If you look for a story of a road I’ve

Lived in since I started to love.

Just search. Don’t hesitate!….Wait!

That what you see is a wreck made of ash

It never gets exhausted, never shows tiredness

That what your eyes looked for

Was remaining of hope.

Sleeping under pain.

A body someone lives in,

And that is ME.

This translation was done with my best knowledge as I tried to make it have the same main idea of the poem in Arabic and not to translate it literally.



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silver heart

Why did you make two threads?

where are you AOR?




Why did you make two threads?

maybe because it has been translated from one language to another language .

thx

Huh?
Nice poem, though I should say it's not immidately clear, must be the translation, anyway, keep at it, practice makes perfect right?

thx too much .. you made me happy Immortality