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silver heart
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Ash
Ash
My love, if you look in my books
for love whispers that I lived in,
If you look for a story of a road I’ve
Lived in since I started to love.
Just search. Don’t hesitate!….Wait!
That what you see is a wreck made of ash
It never gets exhausted, never shows tiredness
That what your eyes looked for
Was remaining of hope.
Sleeping under pain.
A body someone lives in,
And that is ME.
This translation was done with my best knowledge as I tried to make it have the same main idea of the poem in Arabic and not to translate it literally.
best
silver heart
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Jan 1st, 2007 03:10 PM |
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King of Blades
The King
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Why did you make two threads?
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Jan 2nd, 2007 04:05 AM |
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silver heart
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AOR
where are you AOR?
Why did you make two threads?
maybe because it has been translated from one language to another language .
thx
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Jan 2nd, 2007 07:48 AM |
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Immortality
Such a hateful world...
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Huh?
Nice poem, though I should say it's not immidately clear, must be the translation, anyway, keep at it, practice makes perfect right?
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Jan 2nd, 2007 04:19 PM |
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silver heart
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yep !!!
thx too much .. you made me happy Immortality
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Jan 3rd, 2007 09:41 AM |
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