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Lara
nice, very depictive althought the structure could do with a little attention.
good stuff.
DangerousBeauty
kk i'll work on that thanks
XvampbenjiiX666
*gets the crowd to appluad* yes!! i love it...has i sort of dark feeling to it
DangerousBeauty
awww thanks hun. ^^
Jedireaper
It is really sad. Lonelyness. And your use of words is rather visual, so i find it quite easy to see the imagery and the context from which you base it. Apart from some minor pacing and layout issues, this was good. Very well done love. x
XvampbenjiiX666
i can never get enoguh of this poem my love...it may not be perfect but i still lvoe it. never a such thing as a perfect poem, just one that is loved to perfection
DangerousBeauty
meh*shrugs* i just got bored and started writing i had something in mind but in the middle of it the poem grabbed me by the hair and said 'SQREW YOUR ORIGINAL WE'RE GOING THIS WAY!' And so yeah... Took a turn for the worst... I need to get something better out here... *sighs*
XvampbenjiiX666
...i can't wait for the new one
DangerousBeauty
The Couple Holding Each Others Hearts
For the couple who's love was lost in the sands of time
the look of love sends each other's souls into the sublime
one so beautiful, so innocent, the other so quiet, so sinful
both share a feeling of pure love that singes their souls
the goddess and the AntiKrist fall in love on first sight
spending together every hour of the day and night
holding each other dear, together they waste the light
in love they watch, in love they grow, in love they feel, in love they die
he runs a gentle hand down her body, staring into her beautiful eyes
the shiver of her body sends chills of his own down his spine
she gently pulled him onto her where they reached up to the great divine
she moaned to him to never leave but forever stay
he closed his and whispered the he'll stand by her, come whatever may
he looks back into her eyes, feeling her love wash his troubles away
and forever he stayed, never leaving come whatever may
for after their reach to the starry skies above, still they lay
as the night goes on, the AntiKrist looks into her eyes and gets on one knee
he slowly pulls out a velvet box with a a silver band inside and asks her "will you marry me?"
the blood red tears stream down his goddess' beautiful face
she nodded while she bent down to kiss him without haste
he smiled as she whispered "my love you soars past the stars in space"
"your so sweet" she whispered into her beloved AntiKrist's ear
"you always say that" he whispered back to the goddess he holds dear
"because its true" she smiled, her blood slowly pinkening her cheeks
the look froze the AntiKrist into a look of love, not able to speak
on the day of the wedding, the tears flown like foutains of red wine
the goddess wipes her tears and said to her beloved AntiKrist "your nothing but mine"
the AntiKrist looked into his goddess and said "you hold my heart your hands and i hold yours in mine"
the unholy prowless of the sacred two and up with them looking to the starry sky
for has anyone seen a love so pure, so unfilled with hate, so unfilled with lies?
this is where we will leave the couple. but don't worry, this isnt they end of their love
the AntiKrist from below and his beloved goddess fromthe starry divine above.
DangerousBeauty
a little something i found on the interwebs i like it so i had to post it
Hold High Satan's Pride
don't be ashamed to show your beliefs, there's nothing shameful to hide
be proud and hold up the inverted cross, hold high Satan's pride
burn the bible, a book written by a lonely drunk whom lied
live and praise Satan or die for the other, its your time to decide
Hail Satan! if not your life is a sin
look torwards evil, release the demon from within
rid the world of those many non-believers whom think they know
commit genocide on those failed to praise the unholy, let their blood flow
let the doves drop dead, slaughtered in cold blood by the beloved crow
praise Satan to all his might, let out the hate and evil and watch it grow
Hail Satan as the God of nothing and everything
leave those non-believers screaming and suffering
bow down to Satan! feel the wrath of Hell's furios fires
believing in the enslaver of the human race can be dire
believe in what Satan says, believe not in the enslaver, the liar
hold high Satan's pride! hold Satan as thy lord and thy sire
do you really care?
DangerousBeauty
as i lie here with blood pouring out of fresh wounds
i now realise that my time here on earth is to end soon
theres no pain from the cut, just the memory of you
also, the thought of my death being your fault is there too
i wish i was back in a time of no pain
a time where your love wasn't in vain
when we were happy to spend time together
a time where you said you'd love me forever
my vision slowly burns to black and grey
there was never a thought of how this could end another way
i wish i could warn the next guy of your slow poison to the heart
so when you leave he won't go the same way i'm about to depart
the visions of marriage pass my tear filled eyes
now i'll have another place where family and friends will cry
a painful sight of me caused by your beauty and your might
a lonely house with silence throughout the whole night
tears run down to mix with my blood across the floor
i close my eyes for im getting tired and they're getting sore
through my clenched eyes tears of you still run free
i just wish to know why you did this to me
my time is near i can hear it call to me like the way you used to
i can care less now if this act of mine will actually hurt you
i just could care less of your worhtless, self-sacrificng life
and i can care a lot less that you used to call yourself my wife
i see the end of my rope, my time has come to an end
these are my last memories to you i send
don't come visit me when im buried, like you care
because why now would you want to be there?
this is it, im gone from this place of Hell
i can hear the slow rthym of the death-knell
looks like you had the last laugh, like you said you always do
just remember, the blood and tears on the floor are just for you.
DangerousBeauty
love this!
Torchured Living Souls (Intro)
For those on the outside scream
For those on the inside cry
For those few willing to live
For those many willing to die
Chorus
Bring to thee your crimson sacrifice
So unborn fetus shaped diseases
May weep for new found life
For those brave enough to face death
For those afraid of their own fears
For those never to have wept
For those whom freely lose tears
Chorus
For those that are loved
For those tortured living souls
For those whom are completely sane
For those whom lost all control
Chorus
This is for you!
DangerousBeauty
The Love Of A Thousand Hearts
For the one with the love of a thousand hearts
The Goddess with beautifuly stitched foreign parts
What made thee so evil but yet filled with innocense
With a smile so mezmerized and eyes so intense
With a stare that trapped my love in thy's heart, a bareless prison
The same prison that caused this colorless, twisting, tunnel vision
For the one with a laugh like a silver bells
Thee whom took me out of hate's many hells
How did thy get a touch that effects men with hemlock
The same touch that always sends thine body into shock
For the one with lips as warm and red as wine
Thee whom took my heart, thee whom I call mine
Your love was the cure for my loneliness
Not a mortal soul can come close to your holiness
Not one can master the five fold kiss
Not one can fill my life with such bliss
For the onewith eyes that never weep
Thee whom healed scars so deep
For the one with the love of a thousand hearts
My Goddess with the beautifuly stitched foreign parts
DangerousBeauty
Bring Forth the War
Heretics, fallen, angels, and demons alike, come forth and join the infinite war
come fight along side the forces of sin and obey Satan, Babylon's whore
Lies inside your head tell you to fight for the good, fight for the right
Dismiss the lies and fight for sin, take your soul away from the light
Bring the death of those who follow the enslaver, the father of lies and deception
Destroy those who would walk the light and use against us false oppression
Let them hear our organs and our blood curling war cries
For this is the day the deceivers and those against us die
The legions of the damned bring forth the new, but old, war
Our fanatkism will bring more killing, more bloodlust, all for more
Watch thier progenies fall from our forces of many creatures of Hell
Listen to the fallen prophets cry from pain under the Darklord's spell
Follow our vermifuge into heaven's gates, slaughtering the entire human race
Burn thier bodies under the false god's sign, the eternal cross of disgrace
Release the Black Mass on the place of "everlasting life" to ensure our victory
For there will be no more false promises, for there will be no more trickory!
XvampbenjiiX666
good job beautiful...good writing
ScarletSpeed
Originally posted by DangerousBeauty
love this!
Torchured Living Souls (Intro)
For those on the outside scream
For those on the inside cry
For those few willing to live
For those many willing to die
Chorus
Bring to thee your crimson sacrifice
So unborn fetus shaped diseases
May weep for new found life
For those brave enough to face death
For those afraid of their own fears
For those never to have wept
For those whom freely lose tears
Chorus
For those that are loved
For those tortured living souls
For those whom are completely sane
For those whom lost all control
Chorus
This is for you!
I genuinely thought this was great.
vast improvement.
DangerousBeauty
omg *sniff* i love this song... i cry everytime
For My Fallen Angel
-my dying bride
As I draw up my breath,
And silver fills my eyes.
I kiss her still,
For she will never rise.
On my weak body,
Lays her dying hand.
Through those meadows of Heaven,
Where we ran.
Like a thief in the night,
The wind blows so light.
It wars with my tears,
That won't dry for many years.
"Loves golden arrow
At her should have fled,
And not Deaths ebon dart
To strike her dead."
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zLmspcgrYrY
DangerousBeauty
anothers song that makes me cry
"Sound The Bugle"
-BRYAN ADAMS
Sound the bugle now - play it just for me
As the seasons change - remember how I used to be
Now I can't go on - I can't even start
I've got nothing left - just an empty heart
I'm a soldier - wounded so I must give up the fight
There's nothing more for me - lead me away...
Or leave me lying here
Sound the bugle now - tell them I don't care
There's not a road I know - that leads to anywhere
Without a light feat that I will - stumble in the dark
Lay right down - decide not to go on
Then from on hight - somewhere in the distance
There's a voice that calls - remember who your are
If you lose yourself - your courage soon will follow
So be strong tonight - remember who you are
Ya you're a soldier now - fighting in abattle
To be free once more -Ya that's worth fighting for
Jedireaper
Awww, that a beautiful song... finally tracked you down DangerousBeauty. Yaay!
DangerousBeauty
a little something a friend of mine wrote for me
on this day
on this day as the white snow hits the ground and clouds darken the sky
we wait patiently for the moment when we bind our lives till we die
a gentl breeze blows through a window in the room i nervously pace back and forth
my shaking fingers trace the image of my amulet of Baphomet the North
as seconds change to minutes, my heart starts to beat fatser at the thought of how beautiful you'll look
a low bell chimes, summoning me to the altar, i slowly make it to my spot as my body shook nervously
our families all seated, stare in my direction with loving and caring eyes
i stare back, noting that the men would smile while the women would cry
as my knees start to shake, i turn my head side to side, slowly looking for a seat
in the middle of leaning down, a lighter bells chimes and our families rise to their feet
i, too, quickly rise, my heart beating faster than it ever has before
my eyes dart back and forth, something catching my attention at the door
your father stands there, smiling as he waits for you to come to him
you enter my vision, more beautiful than the greatest sin
the blood red dress flows with each graceful step you make
your father stretches out his arm in which you take
my heart came to a stop as you made your way to the altar
you and your father stopped, he kisses and leaves you next to me without falter
i look into your eyes, the light from them engulfs the room
your smile is like many cherry blossoms in bloom
my hands shake as i watch our families seat themselves and watch us
i look back at you and feel the height of my nervousness
the Satanic high preist walks over and tells us to hold hands as he binds our wrist
i slowly shake my head, clearing my mind of this thickening mist
the high preist stepped back and brought forth a goblet of wine
yoo run a calm finger over my knuckles, sending a shiver up my spine
"as you drain your life's blood into the wine" the high priest said
"show the Dark Lord your love. Even after you lay dead"
a razor was given to me so i could slit your free arm
i lean into you and whisper" i do not do this in harm"
you kiss me slowly and nod, holding your breathe
slitting your wrist, my heart beats more rapidly in my chest
the high preist then hands to you a dagger, telling you to do the same
i heard your father mumble that this whole thing is insane
you roll your eyes and slowly slit my wrist, the blood starting to flow
i close my eyes as my mind slowly loses its hold
the high preist raises the goblet to our lips, telling us to take a sip
the blood wine made my body feel light as blood still drips
"time has come to let the Dark Lord bring together these damned souls,"
the high preist said softly, "and to let their love run black like a flock of crows."
as the ceremony goes on, my heart is at its natural beat
the shaking still goes, making me want to take a seat
the high priest tells us to kiss, the closing of the ceremony
our lips part after a long kiss, your laugh is like a song of harmony
families pass in blurs, voices faintly muffled
"i can't belive we're married" you mumble
i smile and kiss your cheek, our families wait for us to dance
my eyes fall onto you, your body in a relaxed stance
through the speakers, Vermillion part 2 slowly begins to start
arm in arm, our blood drips to the floor in the shape of a heart
our lips lock, the music making your body slowly sway
we pull away, both smiling, knowing we live on this day
Jedireaper
Daymn!!! Thats really good. Who wrote that love?
XvampbenjiiX666
Kelsey...i'm always here. i love you with all my heart and soul. i know we will find a way out of this black hole called life. please hold on as i know i will because i know in the end we will be together. i love you so much and if i lost you i don't know what i would do...again please hold on my love, my goddess
DangerousBeauty
Originally posted by Jedireaper
Daymn!!! Thats really good. Who wrote that love?
Justin did.
Originally posted by XvampbenjiiX666
Kelsey...i'm always here. i love you with all my heart and soul. i know we will find a way out of this black hole called life. please hold on as i know i will because i know in the end we will be together. i love you so much and if i lost you i don't know what i would do...again please hold on my love, my goddess
I'll hold on as long as you do.
Lara
you know thats really sweet. nice to see that some people still do things the old fashioned way and dont just give up when it gets hard.

DangerousBeauty
thank you.
XvampbenjiiX666
Originally posted by Lara
you know thats really sweet. nice to see that some people still do things the old fashioned way and dont just give up when it gets hard.

thanks...
DangerousBeauty
His teeth they shine
This dragon of mine
So cruel and cold
Has only eyes for me
I stay be his side
Till the end of my life
I do not run
There is nowhere to hide
I love him so
But he does not see
This dragon of mine
Has only eyes for me
I heard a cry
I turned in time
To see him die
This dragon of mine
I began to weep
His wounds did seep
I feel his pain
This dragon of mine
The knight was proud
There was a crowd
They came to see
This dragon of mine
Jedireaper
I like it, Kelsey! xx
Cammii
I love these poemss (:
XvampbenjiiX666
You and me were once a fairy tale in love
No happily ever after, just a horrorble disaster
You tried to drag me down, so I put you in the ground
You brought it on yourself and now this coffin fits you well
I tell my love goodbye
I watched the dirt fall by your side
You I could never trust
Ashes to ashes, dust to dust
Rot, rot for me, my darling, rot for me
So rot, rot for me, my darling, rot for me
I carved it in your chest so you'd never forget
And I loved you to death, and I'll take your final breath
I hope you understand that our story had to end
Now I lay you down to sleep
And pray the worms your soul to keep
I tell my love goodbye
I watched the dirt fall by your side
You I could never trust
Ashes to ashes, dust to dust
Rot, rot for me, my darling, rot for me
So rot, rot for me, my darling, rot for me
Ashes to ashes, dust to dust
Ashes to ashes, dust to dust
I tell my love goodbye
I watched the dirt fall by your side
You I could never trust
Ashes to ashes, dust to dust
Rot, rot for me, my darling, rot for me
So rot, rot for me, my darling, rot for me
Jedireaper
Talk about subtle hint ^^
XvampbenjiiX666
oh trust me, that is subtle to what i want to say. but i'd rather say it to her
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