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K3VIL
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What If topic
Imagine that in the future of MU a few heroes and humans remain alives on the Earth after a war between metahumans and humans, who creates supersoldiers and hi-tech weapons to stop the chaos that heroes generate with their activities.The heroes survived to the total war are Wolverine(thanks to is heal factor), Deadpool, Hulk(who like the Professor incarnation), Cyclops without an eye and cyborg left hand(Jean Grey before dying has grant Cyke immortality), Havok(his energy store abilities keep him young and in great condition), Thores, a fusion between Hercules and Thor, when humans attacked the pantheons of Earth through magic portals into their dimensions, they strike them with nuclear bombs enhanced with magical spells sufficiently strong to destroy gods.Hercules and Thor seeking revenge fight vs humans super soldiers army, but finally they were several injured and were near to dead, so with his last energies Doc Strange cast a spell to fuse the two heroes into 1, a powerful being, with both memories of the heroes, and the ability to fly, mjolnir anyway was losed when humans separate thor from him and send it into a dimensional portal into another reality.Many heroes lose their lifes fighting vs the humans supersoldiers and cyborg army, Mr. Fantastic seeing his wife killed by supersoldiers, his son too, The Thing and The Torch several injured activate the self destruction device of the Baxter Building, and a great energy explosion destroy 1/4 of NY City, Torch and Benji were saved by Jean Grey, wich infuse them sufficient cosmic energy to obtain immortality like Cyclops and survive to aging process, Spider Man and Daredevil were fighting with Luke Cage, Iron Fist, Shang Chi, and Black Widow, but they where defeated, Luke make himself explode with a plasma bomb granting spidey and co. the chance to escape, saying that if he have to die he will take with him more bastards he can.We see later spidey and co dying in a battle with super soldiers who where too much for them.Captain America die fighting with an unknown metahuman with sufficient power to destroy his shield with 1blow.The earth was half destroyed by nuclear strikes in many places.Now 10years later, can this handle of brave heroes remained defeat the crazy army of the "Human Earth" and help the few citizens of hearth in this desolated future into the reconstruction?
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Magee
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wolverine8888
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hell yes wolverien and hulk should just go all out in a double baserka
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Nov 13th, 2004 06:00 PM |
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great plot,, and yes, they should be able to win.
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Nov 13th, 2004 06:07 PM |
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Capt.JK
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I was with you right up until you killed off Cap. Now...
Nah, sounds cool. I think Hulk, Wolverine and "Thores" should just go all out berserk and beat the @#$%ing crap out of the remaining baddies and then let Cyclops run things from there.
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Nov 13th, 2004 11:53 PM |
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crazyspinz
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that was cool, u ever consitered writing?
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Nov 13th, 2004 11:58 PM |
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K3VIL
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Ok i try to start with the Chapter 1, don't pay much attention at my grammatical errors i'm an italian student so my english is not perfect.
Issue #1 Council Of War
The Council Of War is above all earth authorities, composed by important people like Doctor Doom, The Smiths(U.S.A. Government members that order the attack to Asgard in The Reign Saga) Abe Nuras, an un unknown rich possessor of energy source researching implants, Attuma, who have made a deal for the dominion over the submarine world.The Sureveillance Reports obtained from The Commission for The Superhuman Activities are sufficiently exhausting in terms of explanation: new mutants groups, affiliated to X-Men or to the Brotherhood of The Evil Mutants, new superhumans being appears every day, emergency caused from the extradimensional or cosmic enemies of the Fantastic Fours, the same for the Avengers, that had recently stop Galactus that has reach the Earth with an army of 30 heralds, he was stopped only thanks to the appearence of other extraterrestrial beings like Silver Surfer, Adam Warlock and other unknowns metahumans.One of the Smith stands up:
I'm Sick, and if i am sick, it means that the citizens are sick, from the day they have put on their ridicules spandex costumes and decide to act like Gods to adjust the world problems the equilibrium had been broken, also some of them are god-like status beings, how much time will required until they decid to take control all over us?
Doctor Doom: Touchè, we still know what's the actual situation, can we starts to prepare a solution or u have to speak more about useless informations?
Abe Nuras: It's simple.We need an army, a metahuman army created from the human blood, that is loyal only to us, the army must overwhelming the heroes, and after that, we can start to kill the few survived.
Smith Female: We all agree?
-Silent-.Their faces looked satisfied.
Smith Female: From your faces i can understand we all agree.
1 month later
The Avengers Mansion
Jarvis: Oh god!Captain America, sir, turn on the television, it's...
Wonder Man: What is this?The annual Star Wars fans meeting?
Cap: No, Simon they are all but not fans.They are troubles.
Henry Gyrich: We are pleased to present the you the future, the supersoldiers human army, they will fight against any kind of problem, little criminals, conquerers, space invaders, superhumans, anything.They're the mankind future, and they are all humans.
The crowd looks fascinated, like when they saw for the first time the Avengers.
From a rooftop Daredevil is observing.
DD: Supersoldiers for the mankind future, another way to say that they don't want metahumans between them
You are not authorized to act like a vigilante, show me your governmental permission, if you haven't got one, i'll have to arrest you
DD: Are you joking me?
SLAM!
DD throw is stick rop and jumps of the rooftop but the supersoldier jump and catch him in mid air hitting him with a spinning kick, DD is nearly KO.
SS: I tell u to show me the permission, didn't hear me hyper-sense freak?
FTLAM!
A haymaker punch knockdown the soldier.
I've lose the count of how many times i save your ass red friend.
Luke Cage: Matt?Oh jesus
The Avengers Mansion
Cap: So he attack you after asking for a goverment permission, but everyone knows that some vigilantes are not authorized, but they can still operate thank to a deal with the society.
Wonder Man: Cap i think that we are going to be imprisoned like Kang did when he conquer the Earth, we have to do something
LC: You have the permission Simon, what the matter for you so?
Some web tap the mouth of Luke
The matter is: how much time will required until they decide that the Avengers are like the other vigilantes?Ehm but i'm a vigilante too!
LC: It's not joking time wallcrawler.
Spidey jumps of the wall and lift on the sofa
Spidey: So what we are going to do Cap?
Cap: It's time for a Council, guys, we have to call all the ex-avengers the FF4 and the vigilantes, Logan can u call Prox X by your mental link?
Wolverine: Ok
[Chuck?You hear me?]
Prox X: Speak Logan.
Wolvie: We need you all in the Avengers house no time for explain, be quick.
In half an hour most of the AVG, the ex-Defenders, the X-Men and their affiliated and other heroes are in the Avengers Mansion, exactly in the tactical room.
Cap: So this is what's happening, DD was attacked, the army of supersoldiers seems to be composed by ten thousand soldiers, and from Hank and Beasts check up it seems they are on the level of Namor in terms of strenght, they're heavy armored, and their weapons are created to weaken metahumans.2 weeks ago i lost a communication with Alpha Flight, and i tought they were simply attacked, by Dipartment H sayed to me they have problems with communication.Now with the supersoldiers apperead in Canada, and Europe, it's simply to understand that someone is preparing a war against superhuman beings.
Wolvie: So what we do?We wait until they come to kick our butts?
Hulk-Professor: They're like O.N.U. soldiers they can operate everywhere, and they haven't to ask permissions.They can attack in every moment, the clawed dwarf is right, we wait or we go out and kick their faces?
Tessa: Wait guys, we cannot do that, or we will play their game.
-Silent- No one knows what they can do
The Olympus
Mens, most of them are like savage dogs, and what's happening prove what i think.
Thor stands up.
Hercules, your like a brother to me, that's why the thunder god asks you to reach the avengers, they may need us if the humans starts an attack.
Herc: But Asgard, the Olympus, will be weakned without our help.
Zeus: Son, you think that mortals are so crazy to attack Olympus or Asgard?*And if they want to, they cannot reach us, the dimensional access is close for them.
*Zeus have never read The Reign Saga 
Thor and Herc greet Zeus, and they leave the Olympus.
Spidey: Hey gold hair, finally you arrive, there was traffic from the Olympus to here?
Thor: In truth Spider-Man, no.
Spidey: Luke did he understand my joke?
LC: Uhhm, no.
The Council restarts, and after hours of discussion
Reed Richards: Finally, we decide to wait, probably the army will stop us only if we do something that menace public security
Thing: Ok Reed, but if they comes to us only to break boxes, it will be clobberin time.
H.T.(Human Torch): Hey Benji calm down, you're old.
The Thing throw the glass of beer he have in the hand to the Torch.
Cap: Ok, so that's all folks for now.But maintain a permanent contact to be sure it's all ok.
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Magee
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Nice. Although theres something a bit strange about it  Its not often the majority of earths heroes come together.
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Nov 14th, 2004 07:41 PM |
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K3VIL
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UP, i need opinions 
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Nov 15th, 2004 09:28 PM |
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K3VIL
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I need support for the second issue, i was thinking to make the total war between humans and metahumans starting.
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Nov 18th, 2004 07:22 PM |
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Paola
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K3VIL> here's what I think:
*clears throat*
this needs to be in "General Fiction Area" forum!! 
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Nov 20th, 2004 08:15 AM |
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k3vil it's really good. i like it. to be honest i know your from italy and english isn't your first language, but the grammar could use a little tweak. its not that iomportant though. no offense intended
Great story, i look forward to reading more 
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K3VIL
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And after a long time, here comes back my what if or elsewords story.
This time a briefing of what's happening in the this time i reveal you whos' the killer of Captain America
Earth 2020
The war between metahumans and humans his started 2years ago, many heroes fought at the cost of their lifes, Luke Cage, who die to save Spidey and their group, the "Street Heroes" as they called themselves from an army of supersoldiers, or Reed Richards, who kill himself after all the FF4 except for Ben and Johnny, saved by Jean Grey who grant them immortality and heal them before fuse with the Phoenix Force and "die" again.Captain America, who stay and fight in New York fighting super soldiers that he called dark and deviant copies of himself, of the original dream of Professor Erskine, but suddendly a blast of black energy destroyng the army of soldiers Cap was fighting.
Cap: Simon?Thanks to god you're here, the situation is going to
S: Simon, it's funny you call me in that way.But you're wrong Cap.My dad is not here, and he wouldn't be anymore.
Cap: Dad?What...
Dunno what's happening simon but it's not the moment for
Another ionic energy blast hits Cap who protect himself with his shield but get throw into a building.
The black ionic energy being, with the red S on his chest fly at Cap's location, but from the ruins of the wall Cap jumps at him charging him with his shiedl, his foe just hit the shield with a blow passing through it with his fist and knocking down Cap
Cap: What?No one has do it before...you're not Simon, who are you?
S: Assuming that dad was Wonder Man, maybe i can be Wonder Boy, but it's better if you called me the Soldier.
Now die Cap, you can't beat me
Cap try to jump and hit the Soldier but the ionic being from his hover position deal a blow that totally destroy Cap's shield and cause a massive ionic energy explosion.
This was supposed to be earth mightest combatant?Bah...
The dark figure fly away leaving behind him the body of one of earth greatest heroes.
Welcome back to Sky Reign 2 Soldier, Professor Johnasson is waiting for you in the Lab Magna 1.
Another useless test, he thinks.
Prof. Johnasson: Welcome back John, how are you today?
John/Soldier: Bored.
PJ: And what about your task?
J/S: Captain America?He's dead, it was so easy, just 2 of my fists.
PJ: That must be easy John, you're the son of one of the strongest Earth being in terms of physical powers, and the warp reality powers of your mother grant us to give you powers more over the level of your father.Potentially your strenght, stamina, invulnerability, reflexes, speed and flight powers have no limits, you can summon all the ionic energy you need without being worried about and overload of energy, cause you're born as energy that has human shape.A really energy/human being.
J/S: I know it, but i still feel to fight something more...hard to defeat.I mean, Thor for example, or Hulk, but they are dead.Being the strongest in a world where there aren't people on your level don't give me satisfaction.
PJ: John, you're a hero of the mankind, on Sky Reign 1 and 2 youre loved and estimated, it's not sufficient?
J/S: Yes, father, yes.
Few minutes later
PJ: He still possess similar character to that of his father, but he was born as pure energy.
In the mind of the professor comes back the memories of when he stole John from his father and he kidnap his mother with the Mankind Government supersoldiers.
In the sub levels of the Avengers Mansion
Scarlet Witch: Oh Simon, we have to send him with the other child at the Trainer mansion, we cannot keep him here anymore.
WW: I know it, Wanda.But he's...he's the greatest thing happened to me from when i live and die, in my life, yes, with our union obvious
A plasma explosion destroy a wall, Simon turns into his ionic form and prepare for the fight
Supersoldiers Lt: Give us the child and prepare to be executed
WW: Never, NEVER!
Beams of ionic energy hits soldiers and Simon kill most of them, they are not a match for him, but they are superior to him in terms of numbers, but he continue to fight but
From a soldier crash into the sub level from the ground and hit wanda with an energy beam that leave her unconscious and he take the child.Simon his fighting hundreds of soldiers and get defeated by a multiple energy attack that block his powers sufficient time to knock down him.
Into Sky Reign 2, Wanda has been put into a machine that will magnify her warp reality powers, to grant her son unlimited use of ionic energy, and will accellerate her son aging, taking him to the age of 19 years old.
PJ: We are ready?
Scientist: Yes Sir
PJ: Aren't you happy?You will see your soon growing up in a few, but there wouldn't be any birthday party, i'm apologize
SW: You, idiot, monster!
WM: When i'll brokek this chains
PJ: You'll never broke them, their made of adamantium, and even you broke them, we kill Scarlet, energy man.
And now go!
A flash of magical energy starts from Wanda's body and go into a cylinder linked to ionic energy batteries, in the cylinder there is John, that in a few minutes grow up, and transform his body into ionic energy form, similar to his father, but of black color.
John: What?Dad?Mom
PJ: John, they are not youre parents don't you remember?They are traitors
John: Yes, the traitors, you were going to use me against humans, but now i will defeat you totally.
WM is leaving free from the chains, just to see his son charging him and hitting him, Simon is crying, he cannot fight, he's just hovering in his ionic form, and he say only one thing before being killed,
John i love you son.
John: You're not my father.
John hits Wonder Man with a strong punch that destroy his energy form, and kill him.
Wanda free himself from the machine but get killed by the guards of the lab, without the chance to talk to her son.
The false memories we implant in his brain works good, really good.
But we stole a son from his parents we...It's not the time for think about that, now mankind is free and the earth too.
Johnasson stands up from his chair and exit from the lab, but the shadow of the past his still oppressing his mind.
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K3VIL
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UP Need Opinions
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Dec 22nd, 2004 10:34 PM |
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K3VIL
Neutral Force
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No one likes the last addition?
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Jan 2nd, 2005 09:32 PM |
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osa
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It's cool I enjoyed it  . Just, number of dying heroes is too big . Don't let this discourage you. Keep writing, it's great.
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