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Smodden
Keyblade Chosen
 Gender: Male
Location: The Darkness |
Deeper
Shake the splintered hand of despair
Hold tightly the precious, giving repairs
To others you'll find, something important
In a thousand ways, /living each day,/something enormous
Something to hold, something to give
You give it all...to risk it all...and receive it all...
How do you breathe? the only thing that keeps you alive
is keeping to much? Take back from me, all you took away
I'll just fight back harder anyway.
This test we face, each and every day,
makes you stronger, in every way.
They'll break you down in your weakest days
they'll shake you down in your concrete cage...
You'll see you again, when your back to the start
and finish in the silence, to the rhythm of your heart
Always an exit a way to choose,
don't have to let it be the only one who rules...
You can take this time, to reflect on now...
and how your so much better with a smile than a frown.
When the dark in your room seems better than the light
and the person inside beats yourself in a fight...
When your alone and everyone isn't there
and the thought of pain seems like an answer to prayer
Give yourself another chance, to be ok,
and pray to God almighty for another day.
-Smodden
Not a very recent one.
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Dec 6th, 2004 09:08 PM |
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Trickster
True KMC Jester
 Gender: Male
Location: United Kingdom |
Didn't know you were religous, Smod. I did like the poem, and I really liked how you ryhmed it.
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"If clowns warred on monkeys, and the monkeys had guns, and were trained to use them, who would win?"
Death only gives another set of choices.
He who dies with the most toys. Still dies.
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Dec 7th, 2004 10:37 PM |
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drunk_nazgul
obscure
 Gender: Female
Location: YOU ARE HERE |
Hey, that was great!
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Dec 11th, 2004 02:16 AM |
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REXXXX
Networking
 Gender: Male
Location: San Diego Moderator |
Very good, Smodden! I liked it *puts approval stamp*.
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Dec 12th, 2004 03:37 AM |
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Smodden
Keyblade Chosen
Gender: Male
Location: The Darkness |
thank you, thank you....
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I love it. Keep up the good work. 
