Gender: Female Location: With Kevin somewhere. . .
I want to tell you about my comic. . .
Me and my friends finally did it together. My friends Ashley, Jessie, and Andrew helped me with the story. Me and Chelsie did the character designs. I don't have the pictures scanned but I will post them soon, but in the mean time, you can read the story thingy so far, I hope you like it. But if you can, please tell me what you think.
Ashley the Vampire Story
Ashley, a young witch, stays after school to finish her fantasy school project. She leaves too late at a time where werewolves and vampires venture outside. While she walks home, she is being followed. She has no idea who or what, but she is pretty sure that it is something with fangs, after she has been chased then bitten. She runs home and call her broom to fly her up to her window before her mom can suspect that she was bitten. Hoping that it wasn't a vampire, she hides the bite mark on her neck with her choker. She goes to school the next day and notices that her teeth had formed into fangs. Ashley goes to school and notices that she can't see her reflection in the windows, Keirsten, a demoness, tells her that she is indeed a vampire. Her skin and eyes become more sensitive into the light, she has to wear a cloak all day and a pair of sunglasses.
Angry as ever, she goes to look for the vampire in the deepest darkest woods in her kingdom. She gets lost, and then runs into a baby werewolf with her foot caught in a trap. The pup's name is Chelsie, and she said that she was abandoned a few days ago. Ashley said that she would take Chelsie into a nice home as long as she helps her get out of the woods. Agreed, they both leave the woods and go back to Ashley's house. Her mother, Hawsparrow, who is the queen of the kingdom, agrees to let Ashley keep her new best friend.
A few days pass and Ashley and Chelsie have gotten closer since their run in, in the woods. They decide to go celebrate their friendship at the beach. Playing fetch with Chelsie, Ashley notices a blue skinned girl with a bunch of dolphins by some rocks. She takes Chelsie over to see the mysterious girl. She greets them by showing some tricks that she and her dolphins can do. Her name is Jessie and she is the dolphin princess of the sea. Able to move water with her mind and communicate with sea critters, Jessie begs them to be friends. Ashley agrees, but Chelsie turns away, jealous. Chelsie runs away to gather some thoughts to herself, and runs into a group of ally dogs. Scared but willing to fight back, Chelsie gets beaten up pretty bad. After a few bites, Jessie and Ashley come and save Chelsie. Chelsie thanks Jessie and regrets being jealous of her.
The three friends go out and have a picnic. They have a fun time and soon realize that they were being followed by a little black and red spotted puppy. The puppy is happy and tries to play with them. Ashley tries to ignore it so that it doesn't get attached to them. On their way home, they run into a demon named, Andrew. He's really friendly and incredibly cute, according to Ashley. He tells them that it is a good idea not to get attached to the puppy, on a count of that it is Cerberus. Andrew is about to take the puppy home to the underworld the next night, but Ashley confesses her feeling for him. He feels a little weird and wants to leave even more, but decides to come back after dropping the puppy off. Andrew then develops a little crush on Ashley too, and tells her that his mom is an angel, and his dad is Satan. Hating is dad and loving his mom, Andrew is suppose to combine Heaven and Hell to create a new planet. Ashley invites Andrew to live in her kingdom to avoid his dad, and he decides to stay.
Ashley and her two of her three great friends, come home from school and see Chelsie there to greet them. But Chelsie's not the only one there to greet them, Kittie, Ashley's evil hearted step sister is there too. Kittie's father is just as evil, but Ashley's father is just as nice as her. Kittie show her up at school and turns almost everyone against her. After a few hours, Ashley get Kittie to confess something. The certain something is that she was bittn by the same vampire as Ashley. After the vampire had bitten her, Kittie sent him to go bite Ashley. Ashley gets fired up and decides to take her down.
After sending her evil step sister to jail, a new girl joins Ashley's class. The girl's name is Bailey, and she has a very dry sense of humor. Nothing amuses her, not even Ashley's effort to become friend's with her. Bailey just turns away, but Ashley keeps assisting to bother her. Bailey finally gets annoyed and decides to take Ashley and her friends into space to eat them. Ashley finds it very difficult to defeat Bailey because of her alien abilities to go invisible and produce force fields. Finally, finding a way to stop Bailey from turning them into their lunch, Ashley is dropped back off on Earth and Bailey moves to a different area.
(I will post more info soon)
Whoa watch it. Perhaps this may not be the best place for you story, but that gives you no reason to say the things you just did. Consider yourself lucky if all the moderator does is close this thread...
Gender: Female Location: With Kevin somewhere. . .
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YOU WANNA KNOW WHAT SETS ME OFF!! IT'S HOW YOU JERKS LAUGH ABOUT THE DUMBEST SHIZ! I DIDN'T KNOW WHERE TO POST THE STUPID THING, AND YOU KNOW WHAT? I DON'T CARE ANYMORE. . .IF YOU WOULD OF JUST TOLD ME WHERE TO PUT IT, INSTEAD OF LAUGHING AND POSTING YOUR STUPID LITTLE <--- LAUGH, THEN I WOULDN'T BE SO MAD!! BUT NEXT TIME, I'M ASKING SOMEONE NICE WHO WON'T BE STUPID AND PUT STUPID SMILIES WITH STUPID LITTLE SMILIES! close this thread, please.
No, it simply doesn't go in this forum, therefore it's going to get moved or closed. And do not presume to tell people that they cannot post in a thread.
Freddy Lover, cool down, will ya? It's not that big a deal, but you calling people an ass is bashing.
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I want to tell you about my comic. . .
May 22nd, 2005 03:09 AM
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