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At the World's End: our Take
Well, the deleted scenes thread really inspired this one. Let's make our movie. Just add when the spirit of the pirate moves you.
(Opening scene)
Gov. Swann was tossed out of Beckett's office by two menacing looking thugs. Slowly, Beckett followed them outside, looming down over poor Gov. Swann, reduced to a wigless old man.
"I told you," he held the brand. "You will help me with whatever I want or your daughter will be found."
"She could be anywhere!" Gov. Swann summoned his quiet courage. Enough philosophy and class, he thought. Elizabeth needs me. "You would never find her anyway, not with Will Turner with her."
"Will Turner," Beckett laughed. "Oh, Weatherby. How you make me laugh. Elizabeth is in the company of someone much more sinister, much more threatening to not only your reputation, but possibly to her life."
"Jack Sparrow!" Gov. Swann moans.
"Now, I may have already lost Mr. Turner, but you can still help me." He pointed the brand even closer to Gov. Swann's cheek.
"You miserable man! You are more a pirate than the very men you chase."
"Take what's left of the Royal navy that is under your command." Beckett ignored the insult. "You want Elizabeth found? Then send them to find her. My spy informed me she will be in the guise of a young cabin boy. Tell them to keep an especially close watch on The Black Pearl. Now go. Go!"
End scene. Someone else's turn!
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Aug 15th, 2006 03:16 AM |
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thats great!!!  (does this have to be serious? i am in a goofy mood... lol)...
Suddenly, a ship appears in the middle of the ocean. Actually, it is a very small, fast ship, with room on it for only a couple of people. However, near behind we see another larger ship with the pearls old crew... pan back to the small ship, where you see Elizabeth at the ships helm, dressed head to toe in black, with tons of eyeliner on. A long black cape billows behind her. Her hair is hidden under a black hat. Behind her, we get a glimpse of someone leaning against the mast, roped loosely. It's Will, fast asleep. Gibbs is leaning against the rail, drinking. He walks over to Elizabeth.
"How much farther do you reckon?"
"A few hours. We should be there by dawn." Elizabeth's voice is hard.
"And then?"
"And then we exchange the prisoner. You heard Tia's instructions."
Gibbs squints over the dark ocean, then looks at ELizabeth. "You know Miss Elizabeth, I could take the helm. You should get some sleep."
A tear drips out of Liz's hard eyes. She brushes it away angrily and grips the wheel. "i can manage."
"What's troubling you, Elizabeth?"
Liz turns to him and smiles cynically. "What troubles all women, Mr. Gibbs?"
Gibbs looks confused, then appears to have an idea. He glances down at Liz's tummy.
Liz looks put out. "No... not that. A Man."
Gibbs looks relieved. "Will? He's been awful quiet lately."
"I betrayed him," Liz says simply, glad to say it.
"You betrayed him? How?"
Liz sighs. "I was trying to save him. Things got out of hand."
"Does this have to do with Beckett?" Gibbs asks, remembering the conversation they once had aboard the pearl. Liz laughs softly, and then looks back at Gibbs, deciding to trust him, since Jack always had.
"No, Mr. Gibbs. This has to do with Captain Jack Sparrow."
Understanding comes into Gibbs' honest face. He looks at Liz in awe and wonder. "Jack? You betrayed Will... for Jack?"
"Jack would argue I betrayed him for Will... but he would be wrong..."
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Aug 15th, 2006 04:14 AM |
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DIVING
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Good! Not much of a story teller, but I'll try!
Setting: A few hours later aboard the ship Liz climbs to the crows nest to take over the watch. Will spots her and climbs up with her,..
"Elizabeth?" It was Will.
"Hmm,.." she replied, her thoughts stretching to the horizon.
"Do you still want to be married?"he questioned
She gave him the 'of coarse I do' look.
Looking away from her he continued,"Well, I..er.. saw you kiss Jack and well, you two looked so,..so,.."he left his sentence unfinshed
Elizabeth shook her head, and with a hint of a smile of what he said, she repllied,"No there is nothing between me and Jack." She said it with defiance in her vioce.
And with that she climbed down the ropes, went into her cabin, locked the doors and sat on her bed. Quietly she sobbed to herself.
"Why, why, did I do it?" she moaned to herself,...
Someone elses turn!
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Aug 15th, 2006 05:52 AM |
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tia dalma
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Beckett's Office......a discussion is taking place between Norrington and Beckett about a deal for the heart.
Norrington: I want to be govenor, and have my own ship and crew.
Beckett: Commodore, and a new house
Norrington: Admiral, that's my final offer.
Beckett: Since it was the compass i was after perhaps you would like to enhance your offer.
Your turn!
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Aug 15th, 2006 12:13 PM |
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DIVING
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continueing with you
Norrington sighs as if saying'yes I know'.
Beckett continues," So, since you have failed to retrive what I want,.. I think it's only fair not to reward you."
Fuming with anger, yet trying to sound cool norrington said,"Yes, but the heart is better! You can control the sea's with this!"
Beckett could hear the strain in his voice,"Yes, I can now." A hint of a wiry smile trailed his face
contiueing,"Still,....
I'll leave you guys to finish!
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Aug 15th, 2006 04:34 PM |
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Beckett continues to be annoying. Norrington is getting fed up.
"All I want is to step back into society where I last left it- as a commodore, with my own vessel for a flagship."
Beckett considers. "Very well. I will ask only one thing."
Norington shrugs wearily. "Anything."
"I need you to find out what Governor Swann knows. He won't talk to me."
Norington laughs. "He'll talk to me. Where is he being held?"
Cut to the prison. Some guards throw Norrington into the cell with Govenor Swann, as though he has also become a prisoner. Norrington dramatically faints. Swann helps him up....
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Aug 15th, 2006 07:50 PM |
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tia dalma
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I like, we're doing well. 
Elizabeth slowly wakes up after crying herself to sleep. She steps out onto the deck and finds Tia standing at the helm. Everyone else is asleep. They stand beside each other, while an eerie silence commences. "Do not blame yourself, ya did what right" Elizabeth looks up at the moon while two tear drops sparkle as they run down her face. "I'm so confused, i thought i knew what i wanted". Tia smiles and turns to walk away "Ya do know what ya want, but worry about the consequences"
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Aug 15th, 2006 08:01 PM |
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"Consequences? What consequences?"Elizabeth says.She turns to find Tia gone."Well, that was mighty odd."she says to Jack(the monkey) as he hopped on to her shoulder.
Someone else!
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Aug 15th, 2006 11:14 PM |
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"Consequences? What consequences?"she turns to find Tia gone
"What shall I ever do??" she mutters to Jack(the monkey)
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Aug 15th, 2006 11:15 PM |
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oops sorry, computer glich!
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Aug 15th, 2006 11:15 PM |
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CaptinJackLover
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MORE MORE! i like reading what you guys write. im not too good. so u wont enjoy what i write
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Aug 15th, 2006 11:18 PM |
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Try! Just "let the story write it's self!" Write what you feel!,.. sorry, this probably sounds sappy!
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Aug 15th, 2006 11:19 PM |
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CaptinJackLover
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haha it kinda does
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Aug 15th, 2006 11:20 PM |
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Just givin' my advice!C'mon try! Mine sound lame!
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Aug 15th, 2006 11:30 PM |
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CaptinJackLover
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no they dont. mine suck and thats why i dont post them
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Aug 15th, 2006 11:39 PM |
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diddly
DIVING
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Is Scch on here?? If so, can you post a part in this??
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Aug 15th, 2006 11:40 PM |
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CaptinJackLover
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yeah plz!
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Aug 15th, 2006 11:44 PM |
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these are funn to read =P
keep goin guys!
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Aug 16th, 2006 12:59 AM |
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DIVING
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I don't know what to say!
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Aug 16th, 2006 01:17 AM |
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willofthewisp
Savvy did my sig
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Okay, so we have Norrington in jail and Liz feeling guilty. Let me throw a wrench in.
"Elizabeth?"
"Go away!" she shouts to Will. After Tia, she was in the mood to see absolutely no one, except one person.
"Elizabeth, I know you're having a hard time, but we're going to make a stop on this nearby island. Tia seems to have a good feeling about it."
"You think Jack is there?" she asks.
"I have no idea, but she seems to know everything," he answers. "It seems like we've been sailing forever. I wonder how my father is."
"He's all right, Will, I'm sure of it," she pats his hand. "Let's get the boat ready for departure."
The two of them, along with Gibbs and Tia, stopped once the boat hit the surf, when a strange sound silenced all of them.
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