I've had a few good stories and writings in my head, So I'll just write a little poem for you. (and some Short stories later on). So, Enjoy. This one is called 'I love her for it'. It's got a strange structure, but I've been thinking about it for a number of days now. I think we've all dealt with someone like this before
'I Love Her for it'
She caught my eye
Her wicked figure
She's a Desirable piece
I talk to her and get lost with her
She says her name is Anna
We part physically, but she doesn't part my mind
She calls me that night and we get personal
We get more serious and I enjoy it
We get together and I want to get close enough to hear her breathing
She lets me get close
When she does a shot of thunder goes through my veins
We Part once again and nothing registers until I see her again
She invites me and I desire her more than ever now
A sure shot of satisfaction that she is mine and mine only is present
She's a wicked devil and her words crack like a whip
She does everything and I praise her
She appears delicate but something is amiss
We part again, Her and I
I leave all my friends for her
They have been friends since the beginning, but who needs them now
that I have her
I don't seem myself anymore
I yell at my parents
I don't answer the phone unless I'm sure it's her
My Best friend warns me of her and calls her names
Names that I'm not proud to hear
I punch him in the face for speaking like that
"You've Changed"
He's a Liar
He's Jealous
She's mine and no one else's
She's everything I want and I can't focus on anything else
This Desirable dame
2 Weeks later and things aren't like they were before
I call her, she doesn't call me
She yells at me and blames me for everything
She flirts with other men
She threatens to hurt herself if I talk to her
But, I haven't done anything wrong
I lean to kiss her and she pulls away and ignores my presence
I can't take this torment anymore
I yell at her and say things that I regret
We aren't what we were
We were lovers
I stay at my house and I don't go to class
I drink until I pass out
I wake up with a roaring headache and I try to drink until it fades
My friend knows the news and he calls
I don't answer
Two days later my elementary girlfriend comes to visit
Sweet April
She tries to comfort me and I turn
She hugs me and a beam of light hits me in the face when she looks into my eyes
Why the kindness? I left you
She puts her finger to my lips and tells me it's okay
I hug her and forget about Anna
April and I get back together and nothing is better
I look back at Anna and I laugh at my stupidity
Anna calls me to apologize but I hang up
Never in my life have I felt so great
April and I share everything in common and it's everything
She calls me right when I want her to
We talk and laugh and share old memories
She's the one that was meant to be
Anna was a Desirable Dame and I liked her for it
April is a sweet Angel and I Love her for it.
Gender: Female Location: every which way but loose
Re: Dusty's Writing Corner
Dusty, that's bloody fantastic! I really, really like it... and you're right, I think everyone can relate to the concept. Also, I think it could be used well as song lyrics, it has that kind of structure and flow
My Sword is my only friend
Mistake it not, for an object
For you may meet your life's end
A blade of samurai steel is cold
But so are the intension's of a samurai built for business
If forever truth be told
A Yojimbo, or a mercenary, it matters not
No words can describe my patience and loyalty
along with the skill I've shown in the battles I've fought
A Ronin has no definite lord
Only works for food when his gut begins to roar
And that is the way of the samurai sword