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Harry Potter and the Green-Flame Torch
OK, before we start there is a few things that I would like to say.
First up I did not create Harry Potter or anything else related to it, J K Rowling did, I do not hold any rights to it either, only Rowling and other companies holds it again. I am highly scared of lawyers and am looking forward to NOT to be sued. This is not the real “Harry Potter and the Green Flame Torch”, nor is it Harry’s sixth or any adventure at Hogwarts, it is merely my creation, because I am getting sick and tired of having to wait for Rowling to finish her sixth HP adventure and her continuos stupidness of killing off important characters, and have therefore stepped forward to create my own version. Now there you have it, enjoy.
Ratings: This story is mostly PG at the beginning, but it gets kinda MA after a while. If any one of you can’t visualize what I’m saying go to some porn sites and get your imaginations flying. I wrote those stuff with a lot of passion, so I’ll be really cross if you guys don’t get what I’m saying!
HARRY POTTER AND THE GREEN-FLAME TORCH
-By jennyanderson
It was the summer season at Privet Drive now, yet for some reason the sun shining and the beautiful scenery outside the peoples house seemed to have made no impression what so ever on the people who were residing inside this beautiful large homes. People agrees that something very creepy is going on here, it is as if some one has cast a spell on the people of Privet Drive so that they never feel happy, so that they feel every bit of pain and grief that this person is feeling.
And this person happens to be one black haired skinny boy, named Harry Potter. It’s been only a week since the summer vacation started. Harry’s room was untidy; he watched as the sun slowly sink back, and the room getting steadily dark, until it was so dark that you couldn’t see a thing, even it was a centimetre in front of you. He heard someone come up the stairs and a second later, a hand appeared through the cat-flap and pushed a bowl of soup through it. His eyes blinded by tears, and his sniffing muffled by his bed-sheet, he continued to cry silently, the pain inside him was unbearable and without realizing, he wished that he could stay like this way forever, ‘or better’ he thought closing his eyes furiously ‘to go through that stupid veil himself and pull Sirius back to this world!’
At that precise moment, his surrounding was suddenly filled with a white powerful force, when he opened his eyes, blinding white lights were coming from them, and suddenly he was floating in his room, the whole house seem to be shaking, yet there was no earth quake outside. Downstairs you could hear the Dursley’s terrified screams, the whole neighbourhood were now staring at no. 4 Privet Drive, but after one day none of them will ever remember this odd happening, except for the band of 12 wizards who were coming to collect Harry, and offcourse the Dursleys.
Mad-Eye Moody was the first to feel this force, then a split second later all the other wizards and witches. These were the band of people who were known for their daring bravery, but the moment they felt that power, they became weak with fear, this power, they would never be able to forget it and whenever they would retell this event to other people they could feel it too.
It was a few moments later that they saw Harry Potter float through his window, unaided by any broomsticks and his eyes were giving out blinding white lights, his hair flying in the wind. He hovered there for a few more moments looking all around him (though if you would call it looking, as his eyes had no pupils) and then suddenly he stretched his arms around his sides (a graceful motion as you would when you were at the bottom of the water and about to go up) and rose a few more meters. And then he suddenly burst into a huge speed and moved towards the direction of London.
‘FOLLOW HIM!’ screeched both Mad-Eye and Lupin.
There was no need to tell twice; the Advance Guards turned their course of direction in mid-air (they were all flying in broomsticks) and speeded after Harry.
He was flying very fast, they could not go near him no matter how much they tried, the power was just too great for them, and offcourse there was the matter of huge speed, but they managed to follow him anyway, aided by the help of the full moon, they could just see a tiny dot that was Harry moving fast ahead.
All the Advance Guard knew exactly where Harry was going and why he was going.
But this is insane thought Lupin no one who went beyond the veil ever came back, no one except…
‘Mungungus!’ called Lupin ‘fall back and apparate to Dumbledore and tell him to meet us at the Death Room!’
‘Right’ said Mundungus.
He dived down and landed from his broom, took a half a minutes rest before remembering that he might get splinched if he apparated in a hurry, then vanished.
‘Good idea!’ said Tonks ‘why don’t we just all apparate to the Death Room?’
‘We cant’ said Moody ‘if we live him alone, who knows who might attack him, we’ve got to make sure that he remains safe while were with him, isn’t that our job?’
‘I don’t think anyone would dare to attack him’ screeched back Emeline Vance ‘we cant even get close to him, and were suppose to be one of the bravest people on the world!’
They continued to follow Harry, miles after miles until suddenly theu saw him dive down. They also saw the force that was surrounding him blasting things out of the way as he drew nearer and nearer to the broken down telephone booth that was the entrance to the Ministry Of Magic.
Suddenly Harry stopped a few meters above the ground. From a distance, the Advance Guard felt rather saw him giving some order to the unknown force, and a split second later the telephone booth was blasted away and replaced by one wide and a very deep hole, through which Harry vanished.
They followed him, and gasped at what they saw next. Harry somehow managed to dive through solid floors after solid floors (for some reason the force did not blast away the floors) there was no other way, they abandoned their broomsticks, and apparated to the Death Room (though had the horrible and a painful feeling that a knife had just been slid through their body, luckily, no body got splinched).
They were just in time to feel that power, and a split second later saw Harry disappear behind the veil, living behind him a blue and red like electrical sparks that hissed menacingly.
They all stared at the veil horrified, as if that was their doom.
‘He’s gone’ said Dumbledore from behind the shadows, Mundingus was behind him ‘he’s gone beyond the veil, even my most power fullest magic could not hold him back’
Nobody seemed to find the fact that Dumbledore was as surprising, they were still in as shock, then one by one, as their knees gave away, they dropped to the ground-shacking, only Dumbledore remained standing.
‘Gone’ he said ‘where we can never reach him’
And then suddenly he dropped to the floor too, and started shaking violently just like the others.
*
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The moment Harry entered the veil, he came back to his senses, though the force still remained with him. Then suddenly he jumped. Countless circular like creatures covered in violet furs (except the furs were actually spikes) about 2 meters in diameter, and trailing behind a long tail which in turn trailed behind them violet sparks, were charging at him from all directions, there were about a hundred of them. But something funny was happening to them. The moment they would come within a half a meter near Harry, he could hear a horrible hissing noise and the creatures turning away in defeat, then they would come back again and the same thing would happen again, until suddenly they would melt into a vapour and trail away. Harry had the strange feeling that they were going back somewhere, but where?
Then suddenly the remaining of them retreated and scurried away in mid air at top speed.
Harry commanded himself to float forwards, and as he did so he started to examine the environment of this world. It was very bizarre, yet very beautiful in it’s own way. The sky was the beautiful lest of lite blue, the sun was shining pleasantly, there were three full moon in the sky shining brightly, and the sky was littered with all sorts different colored stars. There was a huge river at one side, then at the bank of this river, there was a large and beautiful tree with what looked like crystals and diamonds dangling from it. The ground all around was covered in short grass.
Then suddenly he heard a huge buzzing sound, turning around he saw that those spiky creatures were back, and this time they were not just hundred in numbers, but thousands upon thousands. They all stoped in front of him but did not attack. Then very quickly they formed into two columns keeping Harry in the middle. Harry floated on, feeling a bit confused and he stared at the spiky creatures on his both sides as he passed them. Then suddenly something came on to Harry’s mind, it’s as if the creatures were honouring him, either that or they were told to not to attack him-but by whom?
In any case Harry hardly noticed, right now his mind seemed to concentrate on one thing: Find Sirius, grab him and go.
Suddenly the whole atmosphere changed, the sky turned blood red, the stars turned into countless multi colored lines in the sky that looked like several ugly veins, the ground seem to have given away, but he was still floating-a sure signs that his powers were still with him, all the spiky creature suddenly panicked and darted away again, Harry still moved on.
And then suddenly there loomed innumerable massive towers after towers, and more spiky creatures were zooming in, out and all around them. Harry went neared and was now in between the structures, nothing ever charged at him, though the creatures seemed to have suddenly stopped zooming around and was more interested in watching him. Again he hardly noticed, he could now feel Sirius very close indeed. He put a huge burst of speed and zoomed forwards.
Suddenly he saw a huge raised black platform in front of him, and at once Harry knew that Sirius was in there, he speeded towards it and sure enough there he was. Harry’s heart seemed to burst with joy. He touched down and raced toward Sirius who was lying down on the ground, his eyes closed, but Harry could see him breathing. Then as Harry made to turn Sirius over, he was knocked backwards by another very powerful force. He lay there for a moment before getting angrily to his feet.
Green colored rope seemed to have sprouted all around and above Sirius, trapping him in a cage. Harry swore and tried to get near, but again was knocked back. The same thing happened almost 20 times before he realized that some one or something was watching him from behind. He spun around, and sure enough found him self-face to face with a shadow. Or was it a shadow? It was standing erect though, it looked mostly like a shadow of a tall human girl, and on the place of its eyes it had a large almond shaped hole that was giving out bright green lights. Its two hands were by its sides. The shadow of a long mane of hair were whipping behind it’s back. It was breathing slowly and was staring at Harry. Harry had known it was alive the moment he saw it. It was blinking its eyes (a shutter would come over it’s eyes, killing the lights for a moment, then it would be back again). It seemed to be blinking politely at Harry, as if trying to figure out cause of his shoutings.
‘And what the hell are you suppose to be?’ shouted Harry more out of temper than anything.
‘I am a Torch’ she said ‘one of the Torches that is, but the highest in ranks’ she added politely.
Harry stared at it, and then suddenly his temper rose,
‘How do I get him out of there?’ he said gesturing at Sirius.
‘Simple’ she said ‘you have to battle me first. If you win you get to take him, if I win I get to keep both him and you’
All the blood see to rush to Harry’s head, and before he knew what was happening, he had charged at the shadow, she only managed to get out of the way just in time.
‘Ah ah, temper, temper Harry!’
Suddenly he felt her behind him, and before he could react, she had thrown some sparks at him, that caused him to scream out horribly, it was pain beyond pain.
‘What give up already?’ she said in a voice constricted with gasps.
Harry suddenly commanded himself to get to his feet and suddenly lunged at her again, she dodged him again, and send those sparks at him for the second time. Another terrible scream from Harry.
Torch seemed to be just as breathless as Harry was when she spoke next.
‘Not so tough are you now?’
Harry lunged at her and she managed to dart past him again, and send zooming green darts at him again, which left several cuts in his arms, cheeks, and hand legs and in various other parts of his body. He began to shake as the pain receded. How on earth can he rescue Sirius now, he was the most important thing in Harry’s life. Is he Harry just going to fail and die here with Sirius as well? Or is he going to get both of them out of here?
And then suddenly that powerful force seemed to fill he every nerve, he felt alive, and before the Torch knew what was going on, Harry had pulled out his wand and said ‘Now it’s my turn. CRUCIO!’
A split second later the Torch was hit by a spell so painful, that it thought it may die. And at that same time Harry felt that same pain too.
‘But how can this be possible’ was his last thought before he fainted.
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When Harry came around next, Torch was coming around too. Slowly very slowly he managed to sit down, and realized that all the other spiky Torches had been watching them battle from the beginning. Torch finally managed to sit down too.
‘What are you?’ he asked her.
‘I am you Harry.’ she replied simply.
Harry gaped at her.
‘Shocking isn’t it?’ she said and then sighed deeply ‘I am your opposite, yet at the same time your exaggerated self. Its balanced you see, some of my personalities are your opposite while others are your exaggeration, and I think I might have a few personalities that are similar to yours. I also feel the same pain as you do, but only in this world do you feel the same pain that I do. I guess the only difference between us is that I am a girl while you are a boy, but I bet that if I could go to the other world too I would look just like you.’ She paused then continued ‘ I was created the same time you were born. Whenever you felt pain, I would feel it too, but it was never the other way around, as if I would have anything to harm me around here, I am the leader of all the other Torches you see, so there is no one to control me. Back in your world you sometimes liked and disliked some certain people, so did I, even without knowing them. And sometimes I liked or disliked them too much; you see that’s one of the parts where I’m your exaggeration. My appearance here is a mere shadow, not that I need any appearance in here much, still I was getting sick and tired of having to stay here as a mere antenna that would turn on and off as your mood varies. Yes in this case you became Voldemort and I was you. So I began to wait for that day, and that is to day, you see it has been foretold that a day would come when you would enter this world seeking for a thing that would make you mad if you don’t have it-obviously that is Sirius; and it would be this day that either I enslave you or you enslave me. You see the green lights that is coming from my eyes Harry?’ she asked pointing at her eyes ‘I like to call them flames, anyway, my full name is Green-Flame Torch, ruler of all the Torch world. I have great powers Harry and you also have powers in a great number that happens to be in one of the locked rooms at the Department of Mystery. Did you know that it has been foretold long ago that there will be only a handful of people who would have the same powers as you have and only one Green-Flame Torch-me? If you defeat me, you not only get Sirius but you also get to have my powers as well with which you can destroy Voldemort permanently. But if I defeat you, you get to stay here all alone, while Voldemort destroys your friends, you see this is where our opposite personalities comes in-I could be very ruthless sometimes you know. But we do have something in common, Sirius you know, I feel the same about him as you do, that’s why I kept him alive, and if I get out of here I take him with me, and poor you, all alone in this world, but then again you get to rule this world you know, so I am not totally that ruthless. So what do you say, lets battle again, huh, who ever gets to use the power fullest spell again the other wins, but we will both feel the same pain you know.’
She paused for a long time looking at Harry, then said waving a hand around all the spiky creatures ‘ They are called Torches too you know, Violet-Flame Torches, I named them, you see. Offcourse the whole of this world is not merely occupied by us, there are other creatures too, but we mostly keep ourselves to ourselves. This world is a lot bigger than yours, and we do not fight amongst ourselves of course, we do not have that sort of cravings. But as I am the only odd ball around here, I am different-I want to be where all the action is Harry, right in your world. So I’d either go there or die trying, what do you say Harry?’
Harry stared at her, then said ‘ who makes all this rules, who tell all the Seers to make up all those prophecies? Where does magic come from? Where do people go when they die any way?’
‘I don’t know.’ She said shrugging ‘shall we?’
Harry stood up and hovered, wand raised. Torch stood up too, flexing her shadowed fingers, then charged at Harry.
‘AAAAHHHHH!’
And so the battle began.
*
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No matter how calm the Torch leader appeared, she too was reluctant to use the most powerfullest spell. They kept throwing sparks at each other, then darts Harry was bleeding porously, and in case of Torch she had torns on her body like clothes do.
Each seemed determined not to be the one to go down first. Their screaming filled the air, while the other Torches hovered around, not daring to go nearer, afraid of disobeying their leaders order.
It was at his moment that Sirius stirred and managed to hoist himself in a sitting position, and watch the terrible battle between his godson and Torch. Though Sirius was not at all surprised at seeing Harry there he was however terrified about the outcome of the battle, if Harry lost, he would be killed for sure, or would die. But there was nothing that Sirius could do right now, except to watch helplessly.
And it was at this time that Harry screamed
‘I know that you are me but I am stronger that you! CRUCIO!’
Harry watched through pain Torch dropping to the platform like a rock, and after a few minutes Harry dropped too.
Now the other Torches knew that it was over, their master had been defeated and Harry Potter had won. They carefully picked him and Sirius up. Then ever more carefully and slowly, they carried them to the veil and pushed them back on to the other world-Harry’s world.
Harry came around for a couple of seconds when they were back and knew he had succeeded. He idly fumbled for Sirius’s hand, and a smile appeared upon his face, and he held Sirius’s hand tightly.
There was a huge commotion going on around the Death Room, some people were screaming and then there were hurried footsteps, and then sounds of gasps. Harry’s state of mind and body already numb from the battle dozed off again, only Sirius could hear it, though he too dozed off after a while-the journey from one dimension to another happens to be a very tiresome voyage.
*
After Harry had disappeared behind the veil, it took quite a few hours for the Advance Guards, Dumbledore and Mundungus to recover.
Dumbledore immediately called a meeting for the Order and told them to stand guard at the Death Room. They guarded it day and night without even knowing whether Harry would ever be back. Though it is impossible to realize that a few hours in the other dimension is equal to a week in this world, Harry would know of it when he came around again.
Ron and Hermione were almost always there no matter what, and so after 7 days when Harry finally reappeared clutching Sirius they were overjoyed, and they even managed to look over the fact that he had also brought along with him an additional third person-a girl with long hair who was wearing nothing.
*
Both Harry and Sirius took more that a week to recover. Though Sirius is magically very powerful, still he had no power to protect him against the bizarre environment of the other dimension, but combined with Torches power and he managed to stay alive, but began to become weak by the hour.
Harry had lots of deep cuts, bruises and broken bones all over his body, still people were happy, but more often than not, they became more and more interested about the third person-the girl that he brought along with him who recovered two days before Harry and Sirius did. She had long jet black hair and huge almond shaped green eyes, she was the same height as Harry and the same built, yet she was extremely beautiful, they even doubted whether the most pretties Vella would have this much of beauty in them, yet for some reason she reminded them of Harry.
*
Harry was stirring in his bed. Very slowly he opened his eyes. He was in a big room and in a four poster bed, it was not Hogwarts he could tell it The sunlight was streaming in from the open window, the room was pleasantly cool and the bed was very comfortable. Slowly as he adjusted his eyes to the light, he looked around and took in the view of the room, and then his eyes rested on Sirius, who was sitting on a squashy armchair beside his bed, wrapped in a shawl and a smile upon his face as he was watching Harry. Sirius looked some what different, he looked very handsome exactly like the only picture of him at the Potters wedding that Harry had, his long black hair was tied in a pony tail and his large beautiful black eyes were shining with smile
‘Hi, Harry!’ he said brightly.
‘Sirius!’ said Harry sitting up and beaming ‘it’s so good to see you!’
‘And you’
They simply sat there and beamed at each other, until they heard the door open and someone screeching ‘OH HARRY!’ and the next second a tall, red haired and freckly some one came swooping at him and the next second he was knocked back on to his bed as someone jumped on him.
‘It’s so good to see you mate!’ came Ron’s muffled voice from Harry’s shoulder, and Harry could tell that Ron was crying.
Though Harry was a bit surprised about Ron displaying his feelings to the public, Harry hugged him back.
‘It’s good to see you too Ron, it’s good to see you.’ he said.
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Interesting story, very interesting, I like it. A little fast-paced but its a good concept and I expect there will be more on the green-flame torch? Anyway, I like it a lot, very pleasing. And Sirius is back which, of course, I like. Very interesting indeed.
yeah I know what you mean, the story is very good indeed, but I think the fast pace is kinda ok, I mean it’s a fan fic after all and they tend to get boaring if they are not a bit fast paced, keep up the good work jen!
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Harry was stirring in his bed. Very slowly he opened his eyes. He was in a big room and in a four poster bed, it was not Hogwarts though he could tell it, the sunlight was streaming in from the open window, the room was pleasantly cool and the bed was very comfortable. Slowly as he adjusted his eyes to the light, he looked around and took in the view of the room, and then his eyes rested on Sirius, who was sitting on a squashy armchair beside his bed, wrapped in a shawl and a smile upon his face as he was watching Harry. Sirius looked somewhat different, much more like the only picture of him that Harry ever had-at the Potters wedding. His long black hair was tied back in a ponytail, and his large beautiful black eyes were shining with smile.
‘Hi, Harry!’ he said brightly.
‘Sirius!’ said Harry sitting up and beaming ‘it’s so good to see you!’
‘And you’
They simply sat there and beamed at each other, until they heard the door open and someone screeching ‘OH HARRY!’ and the next second Harry was knocked back into the bed as a tall, thin red haired freckly some one jumped on him.
‘It’s so good to see you mate!’ came Ron Weasley’s muffled voice from Harry’s shoulder, and Harry could tell that Ron was crying.
Though Harry was a bit surprised about Ron displaying his feelings to the public so openly, Harry hugged him back.
‘It’s good to see you too Ron, it’s good to see you.’ he said.
‘Oh move over’ said Fred and George (Ron’s older brother who were both red-haired and identical to the last freckle, who had come just after him) elbowing Ron aside ‘let us have a go too!’
They both hugged Harry at the same time, and stood back beaming.
Mr and Mrs. Weasley who seemed to have to investigate what Ron, Fred and Georges screeches were all about were now taking it in turns to hug Harry.
‘How is everyone?’ asked Harry beaming.
‘Were all fine, how are you?’ said Mr Weasley (a tall thin and balding red haired man) also beaming
‘I’m fine’ said Harry.
‘And not to mention happy!’ added Fred.
‘Where are we anyway?’
‘No. 12 Grimmauld Place ofcourse’ said Mrs. Weasley smiling ‘Yes we’ve changed a lot of things around here, we’d been cleaning it forever, and now its squeaky clean.’
‘And Dumbledore magicked a back and front yard all around the house. Harry you wouldn’t believe how pretty the yards look now, there are all sorts of white flowers in there, and then there is that new fountain that was installed last week, and I’ve polished your Firebolt and later we can both play Quidditch, oh yeah by the way we’ve brought all of your stuff from that muggle house. And I’ve got all sorts of chocolates up in my room, Fred and George bought them, ofcourse their business is booming-‘
‘Ron will you stop gibbering! Let Harry catch his breath.’ said Mrs Weasley sternly.
‘Its ok Mrs Weasley. I think I’ll be getting up right now’ said Harry.
‘Great!’ said Ron brightly.
‘All right then, well live you guys here’
‘See ya later!’ said George beaming as he and Fred made to follow Mr and Mrs Weasley outside the room.
‘Here’ said Ron handing Harry a robe ‘lets go outside, it’s much better.’
Harry put it on and together with Sirius and Ron went downstairs.
It was all true. The house looked really beautiful now. The once peeled green wall was now a freshly painted off-white. New doors and windows were fitted in, and sunlight was streaming through the windows. The floor was covered in brand new golden carpets. The walls were respectfully covered in still portraits, though Harry thought some of them might be magical. The stairs were all gleaming and the banisters were made up of black wood, just like the doors and with golden borders.
They walked down, past the entrance passageway, past the large living room to the very back of the house.
Harry never even knew that a door ever existed on this part of the wall. Ron reached first and pulled it open. Harry couldn’t stop saying a soft ‘wow’.
The back yard looked more like a garden stolen right out of a paradise.
It looked very beautiful. Harry guessed it must be about 3 acres in area. There was a magnificent fountain right at the middle; it consisted of three golden phoenix with water pouring down their mouths. There were small Christmas trees surrounded by circles of white flowers. The sun was warm and the air was cool. Harry realized that at the perimeter and at the top of the garden there was something that looked like very thin glass.
‘It’s a sort of shield cham, very lite yet very strong, we can see and hear what’s going on outside through it but nobody can or hear see us from outside.’ said Ron when Harry asked him about it.
Then he looked away as two people came charging at him from the corner of the garden-one with lots of bushy brown hair-Hermione Granger, Harry’s other best friend, and the other rather small with a long mane of flaming red hair-Ginny Weasley, Ron’s younger sister.
‘Harry’ squealed Hermione hugging him so tightly that he thought his bones might break ‘I’m so glad to see you! Oh, how are you?’
‘I’m fine everybody, you guys have got to stop asking me that all the time you know.’
‘Oh, its good to see you too Harry’ said Ginny hugging him ‘and were all fine.’ she added laughing.
‘Shall we’ said Ron leading the way to the patch of grass where Hermione and Ginny were sitting.
The five of them sat down. It was very nice sitting there, and Harry could not help feeling that he was the luckiest person alive.
‘So whats been going on around here’ asked Sirius to the other three.
‘Well a lot to begin with.’ said Ginny ‘For starters there has been a massive change in the political area you know.’
‘What d’you mean?’
‘Well’ said Ron ‘ you see people were outraged that Fudge had been trying to keep Voldemorts return a secret (he gave Harry furtive look, Harry on his turn gaped at Ron. It was the first time that Ron had ever said Voldemort’s name out loud!) and not only that but also the fact that he was trying to squash out any rumours about his return made them even more furious. So before they could demand for his removal, he stepped down and handed all the power to Dumbledore. Obviously Dumbledore did not want to take up the job but seeing as no one was capable of it, and time was short and he needed to act quickly, so he’s made dad the new Junior Minister for Magic. Obviously he needed someone from the order to be by his side all the time. Yeah I know!’ said Ron laughing seeing the expression on Harry’s face ‘who could’ve ever thought that dad would one day end up being a Junior Minister for Magic!’
‘Yeah,’ said Ginny nodding vigorously ‘now dad gets paid a lot and he is very respected too. Anyway, the last we heard about Fudge is that he is completely withdrawn from the public. Apparently he stays shut up in his house most of this days. Can’t blame him much though seeing as how the papers and magazines are full of his disgrace everyday.’ she finished with satisfaction. Harry who could not forget what sort of hideous measures Fudge had taken the previous year just to keep Harry and Dumbledore quite about Voldemorts return could only imagine why Ginny was so happy about the fact that Fudge was in the brink of a suicidal attempt.
‘So anyway,’ said Ron continuing on ‘we thought that this might be the time when Percy would put his tail between his legs and come crawling back to us, but he didn’t. It might’ve got to do something about being put in Gryffindor during his school days, I don’t know… he’s got too much of a dignity anyway, so now he stays shut up with Fudge as well.’
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‘So who’s going to be the new Headmaster at Hogwarts?’ asked Harry
‘Oh that would be McGonagol and Snape’s the new Deputy Headmaster’ said Hermione.
‘And you know what?’ asked Ron gleefully ‘the git didn’t even apply for the Defence Against the Dark Arts teachers post this year. Apparently he’s been too busy with something, and get this: we’re hearing some rumours that there’s going to be a new Potion’s Master!’
‘Why are so happy about that?’ snapped Hermione ‘your performance at the Potion classes were poor. So poor that I even doubt whether you’d be able to take it now.’
‘Oh yeah, who asked your opinion anyway!’ snapped back Ron ‘no ones preventing me from becoming an Auror, specially not some greasy haired git!’
‘Oh yeah this I gotta see’ retorted Hermione ‘what are you going to do, grab hold of his hair and demand that he put you in Potion?’
‘There might well be a new Potions Master by the time school starts!’ snapped Ron.
‘No there won’t be!’
‘How do you know!’
‘It’s obvious!’
‘What’s obvious!’
‘That you’ve got the sense and the brain of a tea-spoon!’
‘And what’s that suppose to mean!’
‘Merely the fact that you don’t even see the simple obvious signs around you!’
‘Oh yeah, give me one good example!’
‘Why don’t you see that I-‘
‘So anyway’ shouted Ginny because Ron and Hermione were bickering loudly at each other. Hermione suddenly stopped (looking horrified as if she was about to let one of her most inner secrets out). Ginny looked at the pair of them before continuing ‘we still don’t know who is going to be teaching us Potions, nor who is going to be the new Defence Against the Dark Arts teacher. And did I tell you that that Fred and George are official members of the Order now? And Charlie still couldn’t get transferred to England, a bit disappointing but we’ve got Bill anyway, and talking about Bill, he and Fleur Delacour are officially a couple now. Yeah, he invited her over dinner with mom and dad . Oh, and did you know that we’ve completely renovated The Burrow now? Yeah’ she added with a chuckle ‘Fred and George used a part of their profit from their joke shop, the Weasley’s Wizzarding Wheezes. A band of wizards came to our house and within two days completely renovated the place, really gave it a make over. It took a lot of Galleons because they used a lot of complicated spell to do it, and Fred and George just paid them as if they were buying a Chocolate Frog. Their business is really booming, they earn what, 1000 Galleons per week is it?’ she asked looking at Ron.
‘2000 Galleons per week actually. They said they were doing all this to repay mom and dad for all those irresponsible stuff they did in the past.’ said Ron laughing.
‘You guys seem to forget to mention the most important thing.’ Said Hermione frowning.
‘Well I was going to’ said Ginny chuckling ‘but at that precise you and my brother started bickering. Hold on’
Ginny stood up and in one swift movement she vanished inside the house, and came back just as quickly, clutching what seemed like several paper cuttings.
‘Here you go.’ She said holding one out to Sirius and Harry ‘And mind, read it out loud so that we can all savour it’s effect once more.’ she added smirking.
Harry read.
“THE TRUTH, THE REAL TRUTH AND NOTHING BUT THE TRUTH ABOUT SIRIUS BLACK.
Startling new evidence shows that the mass murders that Sirius Black was accused of doing was actually done by none other than the only supposed wizard victim Peter Pettigrew. This new evidence was unearthed while subjecting the captured Death Eaters (who forced themselves into the Ministry Of Magic itself a few days ago) to Legilemency and Varitaserum. Various other information’s were found, but apparently this was the most important ever. Peter Pettigrew and Sirius Black seemed to be having a fight out in the open, the subject appears to be Pettigrews alliance with He-Who-Must-Not-Be-Named, and that Black was going to expose it, when suddenly Pettigrew blasted the whole place and escaped with the help of his Animagus form-a rat. It is also with great pain that the Ministry announces that Pettigrew is indeed an unregistered Animagus.
‘We’ve subjected the captured Death Eaters again and again to both Legilemency and Varitaserum and have found out that Pettigrew is indeed an unregistersd Animagus.’ said the Head Obliviator ‘If people studies hard and follows the instruction carefully they can become an Animagus. It is not the Ministries fault! Training to be an Animagus is in the same line as making bombs in the muggle world. Anyone can make them, but if they don’t follow the instructions carefully it may blast killing them. Animagi is in the same line. Instructions are very hard to find, but once you found it and followed it carefully then you can become an Amnimagus. But that does not mean that you should all start looking for those instructions; in England alone 150 people dies every year just by secretly practising to become an Animagus. The methods are so complex that there has been only seven registered Animagus this century in Britain.
But we’re not saying it’s impossible so don’t start pointing fingers at us!’
Ministry officials again got annoyed when asked how they could have put an innocent man in Azkaban for this.
‘Look it was the deceased Mr Crouch’s order, not ours. In any case we apologise to Mr. Black porously for putting him in such a position, though we know very clearly that he would never forgive us, but there is very little we can do for him right now apart from clearing his name, perhaps we could award him the Order of Merlin First Class. Though I very much doubt whether that would be enough’ said Auror Kingsley Shacklebolt we was the Head in charge for the recapture of Sirius Black.
The whereabouts of Mr Black are still unknown, though some rumours suggest that he is dead, but nothing is made sure and the Ministry declines to make any comment. Apart from this certain things are still unclear, like how did he break out of Azkaban and into Hogwarts, but the reason apparently is not. Peter Pettigrew, it seems had been hiding in the school ground under his Animagi form, Sirius Black being under the power of the Dementors for 12 years seemed to have come to his senses one day and somehow escaped and went after Pettigrew. Apparently Mr Black seemed to have figured out that Pettigrew was hiding under the school ground so that he might assassinate none other than the Boy Who Lived-Harry Potter and in doing so avenge his masters then downfall. Sirius Black who used to be a childhood friend of James Potter immediately went to his rescue.
Mr Black is no doubt a real hero we only hope that there is a reward suitable enough to award him, and there is also no doubt that he is one of the most bravest and determined man…’”
‘Wow! Sirius you’re an international hero right now!’ exclaimed Harry.
‘Yeah I guess so’ said Sirius looking mildly impressed.
‘And here’s some more’ said Ginny, handing them rest of the stack.
There were more articles about how Sirius was a real hero, what sort of hardship, injustice and ridicule he had to endure and endless debates about what sort of award should be awarded to him.
‘This is just perfect, you’re a free man now Sirius!’ said Harry happily ‘that means I can stay with you permanently from now on!’
‘Yeah I know’ said Sirius laughing ‘I’m a bit of a celebrity now, eh?’
‘Yeah you are’ said Ron excitedly ‘here look it says in Witch’s Weekly that according to the most recent polls held about who they thought was the most popular of all celebrities, you and Harry were tied at the first place! And-’
While Ron chatted way happily, his parents Mr and Mrs Weasley who were watching them from the house appeared to be not so happy but tense.
‘What do we do about the girl Arthur?’ asked Mrs Weasley.
‘I don’t know Molly.’ said Mr Weasley ‘from the looks of it she looks just like Harry, except for the fact that, well, she’s a girl.’
‘What did the Unspeakables say about her?’
‘They said that they needed a bit of time to figure out who or what she really is.’
‘Have you asked Sirius yet?’
‘No, he only just recovered 3 am in the morning today, I didn’t have the time, seeing as how busy we all are…Anyway, is she awake yet?’
‘No, she’s still sleeping. At what time are they coming?’
‘7 o’clock sharp tonight, and tell Harry, Sirius and the others to be there.’
‘But Arthur they are all too young-‘
‘Molly’ said Mr Weasley firmly ‘they are all in this together with Harry, and besides hell tell them anyway, whats the use of having to relieve those horrible memories other than causing Harry every bit of his strength? Once is enough.’
‘As you say dear.’ said Mrs Weasley defeated.
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Thanks a lot! and I'v been receiving a lot of pm about how often should I upgrade the story and I'm really sorry to say that I can only upgrade it once a week because of my hedious school stuff, i'm in grade 12 if you must know, so i hope you guys would really forgive me for that (I'm feeling really guilty now).
It was too long so I didn't read it, but you should be very proud to write such a big story, and i'm guessing Harry didn't see his O.W.Ls, so you kind of screwed up in that, and sirius will never come back, so thats a bad thing you did by bringing him back, i'm glad he's gone, he was kind of annoying.........
If I made a Harry story it would be like this: "The stars littered the crimson sky as patches of blue sunk slowly beyond the horizon. A young sixteen year old boy lay on his back in the back yard of number four privet drive. His jet-black hair fell over his lime-green eyes and his glasses lay askew. This teenager was no ordinary teenager, for he was about to start his 6th year at Hogwarts School of witch craft and wizardry. Harry Potter was his name, and there was only one thing on Harry's mind at the moment."
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Why dont you go and start your own story instead of butting into mine! I'm really honored that you thought I am really proud of my story though, and for your kind information, Sirius is not annoying, it seems as if you have heard from some one that he is and proceeded to post that comment instead of varifying it yourself, that was so shallow of you and in the furure try to post something nice instead of downright annoying stuff
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Harry, Sirius, Ron, Hermione and Ginny were all seated at the long kitchen table about 10 minutes to 7 that night. Harry must admit that even the kitchen had been transformed. The dizzying ceiling was no longer covered in menacing black pots anymore, but with several magnificent crystal chandeliers, the long wooden table was now replaced and made up of black wood, and covered with fine china plates with gleaming cutlery’s around them and crystal glasses and flower vases that were stuffed with pretty flowers, the chairs were royally decorated with soft red cushions at the seating and leaning area. At the two width of the room windows from floor to ceiling were newly added and thick red velvet curtains were pulled back at both sides, while the window was covered in periwinkle white curtains. The floor was now made up of gleaming marbles.
‘Fred and George did all of this’ muttered Ron at Harry’s ear.
The kitchen door was thrown open, and about 50 people started filling the room in the next 10 minutes.
‘The Order seemed to have grown.’ Harry muttered to Ron smiling.
‘Yes it has, we’ve now got about 19 more new members-Aurors, Obliviators, some of Mundungus’ friend and a few common people and of course Fred and George’ said Hermione.
As everyone settled down, Dumbledore got up from the end of the table where he was sitting, silence fell immediately as everyone looked at him and most of the people who were about to hail Harry and Sirius for coming back alive decided to do it after hearing what he has got to say.
‘Yes as you all know today is a day for celebration as we welcome back one of our old member amongst ourselves. Go ahead Sirius, take a bow!’ said Dumbledore beaming.
Everyone clapped as Sirius stood up and took a bow.
‘And to Harry who made it all possible, we owe it all to you. Go ahead Harry.’
Again everyone clapped as Harry stood up and took a bow, he couldn’t stop beaming.
‘However, this is not the only reason for tonights celebration.’ continued Dumbledore ‘As you all know when Harry came back from beyond the veil he also brought along an additional third person with him, without knowing of course. Molly if you please.’
People turned to look excitedly as the door opened and Mrs Weasley walked dramatically into their midst-clutching the hand of a skinny long haired girl. The girl was very beautiful, she had large almond shaped green eyes, and her straight black hair fell to her waist, she had a thin mouth and she moved gracefully. Several of the man were staring at her, including Ron. She and Mrs Weasley suddenly came to a stop beside Dumbledore, and Harry immediately knew who she was, and by the glance he stole from Sirius it was obvious that he too knew.
‘Ladies and gentleman’ said Dumbledore ‘this is Torch. The Green-Flamed-Torch. She is the one who kept Sirius alive beyond the veil, and she also happens to be a part of Harry’s life. Having her in our midst is a huge advantage, for if Harry combines his powers with hers then he would be able to destroy Lord Voldemort permanently. For this Harry must learn to control her powers, as I have come to know that Harry has defeated her in the battle, therefore he holds all controls over her. And for this she is going to be attending Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry from this year onwards. She is also going to be at the same year as Harry’s in, and taking the same subjects Harry’s taking, and why don’t I just let her tell the rest.’
Dumbledore sat down and Torch moved forwards taking his place.
‘Good Evening everyone.’ she said pleasantly, her voice sounded just like Harry’s except or the fact they were more of a feminine type ‘As you all know I’m Torch, one of the beings who resides beyond the veil are called Torches and I was their leader. I was created the same time as Harry was born…’ and she told them everything she had told Harry during their battle. When she finished Harry said out loud,
‘You said that you would either defeat me or die trying, why would you even want to battle me if you knew that you could come to this world even after being defeated?
‘You’ve already answered your question Harry. If I knew. You see I didn’t. I tried to come to this side of the veil, but whenever I got too near I was always blasted by a very powerful force. So I thought if you could defeat me, you’d only be able to take my powers with you, but now it seems that you have to control me, so there you have it.’ she finished.
There was a slight pause as Harry looked around the kitchen. He didn’t know why, but suddenly he doesn’t hate the girl anymore. It was strange that he would feel like this towards someone who was deliberately preventing him from rescuing Sirius. She seemed to be smiling at him right now, and then suddenly something clucked back into his mind.
‘Wait a minute, where’s Kreacher? How come I don’t see him? What’s happened to him?’ he suddenly burst out.
‘Ah yes, Kreacher. You see Harry after Sirius disappeared beyond the veil, Kreacher had no master to serve, he was a free elf, so he went to serve the Malfoys now.’ said Dumbledore.
‘But what if Voldemort uses Legilemency on him? I’m sure even though house elves don’t want to reveal information’s they were forbidden to, they stand no chance against him!’ he said defiantly.
‘That they cant, but Voldemort would only be able to get the information if its still there.’ said Dumbledore smiling.
Harry blinked.
‘You mean you brainwashed Kreacher?’ he asked.
‘No, we more like took the information out of his head and stored it into my Penseive Harry.’ he said still smiling.
‘Oh, that’s okay then!’ said Harry happily.
Dumbledore stood up again and said ‘Let the feast now begin.’
Mrs Weasles took out her wand and made several swishing movements, suddenly the closed door was flung open and plates upon plates carrying several dishes floated into the room by their own accord, and landed neatly on the table, then came the Champagne bottles followed by Butterbeer and water bottles.
And that’s when Harry realized for the first time how some of the adults didn’t need to incantate to cast a spell but merely give a flick of their wand and the spell was cast…how did they do that?
The party lasted well after midnight, with adults drinking merely. Harry and Sirius were introduced to the new members who were soon demanding their autographs. Three of them were Obliviators who interrogated the captured Death Eaters and helped the Order by keeping information’s secrets that would usually mean trouble for the Order; five of them were Aurors; six of them were Mundungus’s friend; one of them was Lee Jordan-the Weasley twin’s best friend; two of them were Professor Sprout and Professor Flitwick, Harry’s Herbology and Charms teacher respectbly; and the last was Stan Shunpike-bus conductor of the Knight Bus who greatly admired Harry. When they had all excused themselves after getting their autograph, Harry realized that there was one new face who did not come and introduce himself to them.
‘Who’s that?’ Harry asked Ron, nodding at the direction of the tall man with long silvery grey hair and beard ‘He seems familier.’
But it was Sirius who answered.
‘Ah, that would be Aberforth, Dumbledore’s brother.’ he said.
Harry looked curiously up at him.
‘He also happens to be that bartender of Hog’s Head.’
Then Harry remembered something.
‘Hey, wasn’t he that guy who served us drinks during our first Hogsmeade visit last year, when we went to the Hog’s Head for our first DA meeting?’ he asked.
‘Yeah he was!’ said Ron.
‘So what happened to him? How come I’ve never seen him before?’
‘It’s because I think he either had a fight with Dumbledore, or he was the rebel in his family.’ said Sirius ‘Anyway, he’s a really grouchy fellow. Notice the sparks in his eyes when he comes too near Mundungus? Apparently he still hasn’t forgiven him in 21 years.’
‘Yeah, what did Dung do anyway?’ asked Ron.
‘Well, you see Dung slept with Aberforth’s only child and a daughter when he was away once, and he happened to come home early and found them all stark naked in the bed. He was ready to kill Dung you know. He was one of Aberforth’s best customer, and he was going on about how Dung had betrayed his trust and all.’ said Sirius sounding amused.
Harry greeted the other members as time went by. Professor McGonagol seemed to restrain herself with extreme difficulty as she greeted Harry and Sirius (it was obvious that she wanted to give them a big hug but was telling herself that it did not go well with her stern personality), then as she could no longer hold back, she rushed forward and had Harry and Sirius in such a tight hug that they thought their bones might break; while Snape completely ignored them.
The rest of the members were either shaking their hands or giving them hugs, even Mad-Eye Moody after staring at Harry and Sirius for sometime finally stumped over and shook their hands, satisfied that nothing was wrong with them.
That night when Harry went to bed he again couldn’t stop feeling that he was luckiest person alive, and there was a huge grin playing upon his face as he finally fell asleep.
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Christ, I was talking about not BUTTING IN, NOT entering, you can enter as much as you want to, but telling me how to write a story in YOUR style defenitely qualifie as butting in!
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Mar 9th, 2004 05:29 AM
thank you very much Spaz Gurl and Master Siren, and yes there is going to be a lot more about the our new Torch friend, you just wait nad see!
