In the beginning before the timeline had even established the very first second the three powers filled the void with energy of immeasurable scale. The Ozuro’ ti Derioth was Darkness personified. Its energies swirled in no pattern it was absolute Chaos. Its brother Ozuro’ ti Zenucto was the Light the Hope of all that was yet to come. It’s was uniform Order was its herald. As for the Watching Force, Deoxys Shikur’e, its purpose was one of binding. Keeping the forces from repelling it allowed them to mix like a sealant so the energies of creation could form. The Balance had been formed and the machinations of existence had gone to turn. At the center of this a huge Vortex of all three energies formed and an imperial temple came into being. It is the oldest known thing in existence. The temple contains a book of vast power called the Book of Existence. It is said that whoever contains this book controls the power of the Timeline but it is perilous to come to the book as it is guarded by the Leviathan, Dark Guardians of the temple.
After the temple was created another being awoke. The first sentient being sprang forth from the Deoxys Shikur’e. He proclaimed himself God and found he had limited control over the Derioth and Zenucto. Using this power he began to form the Timeline. It was at this point the Book of Existence opened for the first time as words sprang forth on the pages chronicling God’s work.
God’s first creation with the timeline was the stars and the heavens. Looking over his work he realized he had already begun to tire from his work, he needed something to help maintain and run his treasure. It was then he decided to make the first life forms of his new dream. Lucifer the Guiding Light came forth to do his masters bidding. Lucifer’s duty was to shine and offer hope to all those who have lost their way. He shined with the light of every star in the Heavens. God was pleased with this but knew more was needed so Lucifer’s brothers came next. Michael the Flaming Sword stood on the right side of Lucifer. His duty was to defend God’s work. Gabriel the All-Seer could see and hear everything within the timeline. His duty to the All-Father was to make sure all knew their place.
More angels would come to be and Heaven grew into a paradise. God looked over and thought this was magnificent. He looked out over the cosmos though saw no desire to do well. He saw a place where they did as they were told not because they desired to do so. The angels had no free will. God decided he would change this. Although he couldn’t give the angels free will he needed them to maintain the cosmos so God decided to make a creation. It was thus the Earth was forged. God instead of making this place paradise like Heaven decided that this would be a hard place to live where to true goodness would shine because it was truthful not something that was used. After this event God had tired himself out and needed to rejuvenate him thus he did so leaving the machines he had provided his creation to run themselves. Retiring unto the thrown God rested.
For thousands of years everything ran smoothly. Michael protected Heaven, Gabriel opened the gates for the souls of those he knew departed, and Lucifer used his light to guide them to the realm of Heaven soon though the number of the dead outnumbered those of the angels. Many of the angels did not care of this. A few though did mind. For most on this list was Lucifer. He had grown tired of these creatures freely making their own choices while he had no choice but to do his Master bidding.
After many centuries of tense and vial talk the time came that sides had to be chosen. Lucifer in his only way of rebelling turned his light from the mortal realm so that they couldn’t find their way. Michael was angered by this obvious gesture of rebellion, though the Guiding Light would not sway beneath the Flaming Sword. The All-Seer refused to pick sides among his brothers.
Soon the Holy War over dominion of Heaven began. Lucifer’s angels were no match for the sheer strength of Michael’s sect. Lucifer in a last ditch effort recruited the damned souls of the mortals he had misplaced. He would shine to them the path into Heaven I in exchange for their fierce fighting. This allowed Lucifer time to plan and find a way to win. Lucifer found a path into the Zenucto where he managed to tap into some of its Dark power. This new found strength gave him the ability to not only stalemate but beat Michael’s forces. Lucifer was on his about to crush the remain forces of good when God himself after centuries of rest and watching decided now was the time to act.
He descended from his throne and the Heavens shook with his power. He faced of against Lucifer but even with Lucifer’s new found power he soon discovered his strength was like a stream trying to fight back the Ocean. Lucifer was banished into the darkness along with his minions for all eternity. Lucifer was beaten and cast into what was now called Hell.
Eventually Lucifer would manage to find his was to the Vortex eventually making it to the temple. Lucifer could the dark energies that now inhabited his body drawing him into it. The Dark Guardians stood at the Temple entrance but using the last Zenucto energies inside of him he dispelled them forth back into the walls. Inside the Temple he soon discovered the Book of existence. Putting his hand on it he felt new power unlike anything he had ever felt before. He felt like he could even take on God but then he had remembered his defeat at the hands of the Highest Lord before. He knew even with this power it would not be easy. Instead he decided to use the book to make three children by his wife Ciah. Their names became Jadiah and Lucifer II the Enveloping Darkness, the sons. His daughter would be named Crises. He knew he would have to hide his children though and Lucifer cast them into the parts of the timeline as babies to conceal them even from the Almighty himself.
Lucifer had wasted all his power. He was now trapped in the Vortex with no way to leave the temple. Lucifer’s only hope being that where he had failed his children would succeed.
Jadiah was born in our present day.
Crises was born in the future.
LuciferII was born in the past.
to be continued...
The Balance- consist of the three living forces of all existence the force of Darkness,the force of Light and the force of All, which is the force that keeps the other two forces equally aligned (Ozuro' ti Derioth,Ozuro' ti Zenucto,Deoxys Shikur'e).
Ozuro' ti Derioth - Force of Darkness. This force if is the source to everything evil and dark.
Ozuro' ti Zenucto- Force of Light. This force is the source of everything light and good.
Ozuro 'ti Deoxys Shikur'e- Force of All. This is the greatest of the three forces and also the Creator of God.
Lavioaths- Dark Guardians. These amazingly powerful and illentellegent creatures were created fore the sole purpose of guarding the Temple of Prophecies .They were created by Deoxys Shikur'e(to be contiued).
The Holy War- When Lucifer was banned to all interity in Hell he seeked to find a way to get his revenge by destroying God and taking the throne over Heaven. While knowing that he was outmatched he had decided to uptain th Book of Existence from the temple and conceal it's powers not for himself but for his first three children, The Trinity. With it he thought his children could one day follow in his footsteps and rule over all.(to be continued)
Lucifer I-The fallen Serphim angel.(to be continued)
Ciah- A serphim angel that wanted a chance to ruler her own kingdom, but God would not allow it. Therefore she made a deal with Lucifer to give her a place on the throne in return she would have to spend all eternity in Hell.
The Trinity- The first three children of Lucifer. They are also the most powerful (more powerful than the future bloodline).
LuciferII- The first son of Lucifer.(to be contiued)
Jadiah(Qezel)-The second son of Lucifer.(to be continued)
Crises-The first daughter of Lucifer.(to be continued)
The Reapers- Creatures made by God to destroy The Trinity.(to be continued)
Possible Powers of Lucifer
omnipotent, omniscient, and omnipresent.
inherent omniscience the ability to know anything that one chooses to know and can be known and
total omniscience actually knowing everything that can be known.
omnipresent.
Man...I didn't even bother with reading this. I'm sorry, but this comic idea you've been pushing for the longest time is just an amalgam of old stories that are forcing people to think its cool. You can't make your characters indestructible in a thousand ways and expect people to care. Look at how boring the cosmics are in DC and Marvel. Aside from a few, like Galactus, nobody gives a damn about them because there's no highs/lows - just a frozen scale. And even at that, how can "They are also the most powerful (more powerful than the future bloodline)" be true? You can't have more than one character be the best. The best is the best...#1...not #1, 2, 3, 4....
For some reason, these demon/God/angel stories seem to be what most people want to write...but they all end up just copying off each other. I'd suggest doing something totally different man. Don't go the route of trying to make up "Ultra Man, a Superman ripoff with bright colors!" like a lot of fan fiction ends up being, and stray away from the deity stuff. The most realistic things (in all forms of writing) tend to get the best reception, even when you look at something that is an epic fantasy, but is rooted in our own personal psychologies to give us something to connect to. If you just throw around a concept containing characters that absolutely nobody can relate to in any way...simply put...nobody is going to care.
It's posting the same thing over and over about a person people obviously know nothing about. Ergo, spam. I also don't like being duped into allowing the same thread over and over without at least being informed.
If you want to dedicate 1 thread to this...whatever....then fine. But keep it out of the vs. forum or everything is closed.
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