Simple yet not too simple. Superman's S-shield is a good example. Essentially, its just an S with a border, but its not literally just "S" inside of a triangle or something. If Batman's logo was just a giant letter B, nobody would remember it. Spider-Man's logo is a spider shape but it doesn't have tons of detail. Etc.
You need to contact the industry not us. The character you've concienved is also ridiculously powerful (over God?) so writing a story for him would be hard to sell and harder to write.
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SC how many times have we discussed this matter. I thought we all came up with the conclusion that Qezel dosent start off like that. He starts off as a low level metahuman. meaning it takes him years ans years to get where to his potential. Anyways Superman may be stupid to you and some others but he happen to be a worldwide icon...right?
Also I'm posting threads about Qezel do get everyone's opinion on things before I finalize him. Out of all people I an believe you would not already know that.......
Well of course it's going to sound similar too something you may know. Everything is about already taken. Also what is it that is bad about it and dont say everything unless you read his origin. Otherwise your assuming therefore. You conclusion has no back. Also instead of givong me such bad remarks you would be giving me advice or saying nothing at all.
Another thing Spawns is not the son of the devil or his first Trinity.Also Spawn's mother is not a Sepherim angel,with a son that has the energies of th emost powrful of all time flowing through his veins And as I said before he doesnt start off like this. I'll make it interesting.
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It sounds too similar to Spawn to be honest, whatever differences there may be in their origins they are both very similar in the fact they rise from street level to like God. It's like Superman and Captain Marvel really, Qezel (i dont like the name at all), would be the Captain Marvel to Spawn's Superman.
And I don't think there'd be enough room on the market for another Spawn type character really .
Oh I'm not taking away your freedom of speech. It wasn't a command.
He also is born with his powers after being sent to earth ant the beginning of the first Holy war to another time and universe than his other siblings. Therefore he doesn't start off as a street leveler but as a low ranked meta-human. Why don't you like the name?
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May 26th, 2007 08:48 PM
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I agree
That's why I'm asking people on how I can make it better . but still simple.
