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The Matrix: Recreated

sorry for the name but all the good names are taken basicly its 10 years before the 1st matrix movie. and its 100 years after the war against the machines begun

i know i havnt finished my previous storys but this will be finished no matter what it takes

the 1st chapter is : Get Out Now!


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Chapter 1: Get out NOW!

Michael Dresden was a typical 15-year-old boy. He had dark, brown hair, blue eyes, and a chubby face. He was an average size boy weight wise. He only had 2 friends who were both 15 as well. Greg Neil and Tom Coarsen. Greg was a smart funny boy. He had ginger hair and brown eyes that matched his slim face. He was bulky and no one dared insult him. Tom was almost identical to Greg only much slimmer and shorter. People often mistook them for brothers, since they were best friends, they used that to their advantage. Like last year when that school bully Ben Plaitstow threatened Tom to bring in £1000. Tom replied “get off or ill get my brother to beat you up” to that Greg stood infront of Ben and edged him of. It was June 30th and everyone knew what that meant. Last day of school. They where really looking forward to it only today would be much worse than any other school day they’ve had


First lesson was science and Miss price wasn’t in. so they had a cover teacher instead. Mr Glover. He was the nicest teacher in the whole of Harrow Smith School. He was looking forward to the school holidays as much as the Children surprisingly, so he let the class do what they wanted. Michael started playing around with his new high tech phone and showing it off. Ben got jealous and stole it. The phone rang and Ben answered it pretending to be Michael, his face went blank and white as the phone said to him “give Michael back his phone Ben, I need to speak with him immediately.” Ben gave Michael back his phone. Michael put the phone to his ear and said “who is this?” “That is something that I cannot tell you but the matrix has you and you have to get out of there, now”. Michael went to the class door but the phone shouted to him “NO NOT THAT WAY! THE WINDOW”. Michael did as he instructed wondering 2 things: What was so urgent and what was The Matrix? He jumped out the window and landed on his legs he heard a loud crack as the class door flew of its hinges at ease. Stood there was a man in a black coat, tie, Trousers and Square like Shades. He also had a white shirt and an audio feed going into his right ear. Tom and Greg followed Michael as the man started shooting at them.

Everyone in the class was frozen with shock as the man followed them out but did that so fast that it was almost 40 times faster as super man Michael was following the directions the strange man was giving him. Tom and Greg could hardly keep up with Michael. Michael and his friends arrived at the roof. “ Jump of the roof” the man at the other end instructed “WHAT!” Michael bellowed. “IM giving you a choice” the man said. “Either die or know the truth”. The man hung up. He told his friends and they agreed with him. It WAS crazy. But they heard footstep’s behind them they turned around only to see 3 FBI like men coming out of the roof access door. They all pointed their guns toward them. They had to make up their mind either way was crazy but what could they do…


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Good start! Keep it up.


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