Me and a few of my friends, family, and friends I treat as family are starting a comic book company. Per se. We have a few comics that are being worked on. After we work on our comics and make a few issues we are going to start putting it out in our local area. So if you live in Yuba City your in luck! but i doubt you live there.o im going to give you a taste of my comic book that is just getting started with some basic ideas and Charecters.
It is a story of the Eternal war between heaven and Hell. But something unexpected happens. Purgatory starts to fill with souls. Because Purgatory is the place where souls are fist put when they die, cept the Pope, who goes strait to heaven. Some souls have gathered in Purg, and are thinking alike. Soon it has control over souls. This new God's name is Vultus (mass).
Ok there is the plot, there is actually more. But i dont want to put too much out at a time. My next post will have a charecter and his backstory. Maybe some art.
He was born and raised in the military. He has done extraordinary things for our country, and yet all goes unnoticed. He runs an elite team, most of which are born in the military and have no friends or family, accept each other. They had no knowing of their castration when they were younger, so their sex drive is almost completely gone. He died on a mission. It was in Afghanistan. He was killed by a terrorist. "Dux Ducis" means leader in Latin, This is his name in Hell. His real name was unknown to all. He was always referring to as his military title. In Hell it is the same way. He has a power not well known to himself. All he knows is that he can Teleport/Rift people to hell and earth. Soon he will learn he is much more than that. He is capable of teleportation to Purgatory, and to the Gates of heaven, but not inside, although that is a power Satan wishes he had. He can also willingly increase his power. His limits are almost unbound. He could lift an entire building, but that may drain him heavily. He also has slight distance teleportation he doesn’t know about. Like Nightcrawler, from X-Men. Ok, I’m though talking about his power and past. God knows about him. He knows that he can bring him on his side, and allow him to fight for the light. But what God doesn't know about is the Forming of Vultus. Until Recently.
Dux Ducis is covered in a living suit that gives him most of his power. Sometimes the suit may not do what Dux Ducis may want to do, which may cause problems. But it is what brings him the unlimited power. He can tap into the power of the suit. It is like a spare gas tank. Being reborn in hell gives you special evolutionary quirks. Some get different things. Duke, as he is sometimes called, has been reborn with a tail. It can lift twice Dukes body weight, so he can use it in battle effectively. It can hold a sword, or slap someone in the face. It isn’t controlled by Duke though. It is controlled by the suit. So it may not respond, or it may attack Duke. It can be cut off. But will grow back slowly. But once Duke realizes he can forcefully heal himself, it can grow back very quickly.
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Last edited by RayIsGay on Jul 1st, 2005 at 10:27 PM
Hey, I LOVE that. Really! I don't live in Yuba City. Actually I live far far away in Poland. You probably don't even know where my beautiful country is located.
Yea, he is a mix of Spawn and Nightcrawler, and in what way is he like this "Freeza" you spaek of? I remeber something about that...isnt that like the first fight that Goku went SS? I dont watch anymore. But I remeber that.
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