Emo Ninja
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Gender: Male Location: touching myself
love poems
will someone post a few love poems here to get because i am not talented enough to write a true love poem thank you. p.s. this is my attempt at a love poem
love is something the blind can see
love is something the deaf can hear
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Jan 12th, 2006 03:25 AM
Coldfire
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Well it's a good start, now just continue on with it
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Jan 12th, 2006 04:47 AM
~Forever*Alone~
Empress
Gender: Female Location: EveryWhere And NoWhere
damn you know, just this morning i gave the library back the love poem book i had been reading!
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Jan 14th, 2006 04:20 AM
Victor Von Doom
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Gender: Unspecified Location: In Rainbows
Re: love poems
quote: (post ) Originally posted by bloody bows1
will someone post a few love poems here to get because i am not talented enough to write a true love poem thank you. p.s. this is my attempt at a love poem
love is something the blind can see
love is something the deaf can hear
If it was about talent the forum would be empty.
That was a good idea. As Coldfire said, you could go on with it, although I guess as it stands it would qualify as an imagist poem.
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Jan 14th, 2006 04:34 AM
Princess Kuriko
Wolf lover
Gender: Female Location: Reatred in my own little world
K!
Love is something I don't have.
Love is something I can't have.
I am blind but can see the darkness in my own heart you see.
Once a flower now a beast
A wingless angel fallen asleep
I deny my heart as my wings are dipped and burned into the firey sea
I don't have this thing called love for I am wingless like the dove....
Hows that for you!
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Sing the evil Sing the good.Join the battle join the blood.Run with the wild run with the wolves.I am a keeper of monsters and gools.Born human.Made a god.I am the gardian of all the land.That is what and who I am....
All of those who think there worthless, think again,you were made for a reason,
no matter what it is, you are great, you are special, and somewere in life some one needs you, so don't take the easy way out, for if you do you are the one who is selfish, not the rest of the world...........
Jan 14th, 2006 06:18 AM
~Forever*Alone~
Empress
Gender: Female Location: EveryWhere And NoWhere
with love
the heart, beating with love,
feels a tender warmth,
like sitting 'neath the hearth,
bye the glowing embers,
of passionate fire,
anyway...
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Jan 15th, 2006 04:04 AM
Coldfire
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Gender: Female Location: Vancouver, Canada
quote: (post ) Originally posted by Victor Von Doom
If it was about talent the forum would be empty.
That was a good idea. As Coldfire said, you could go on with it, although I guess as it stands it would qualify as an imagist poem.
lol yeah. This is a place to help improve the writing ability of anyone who wants to improve
Yeah I guess it could be, but I think it has great potential to be a longer poem
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Jan 15th, 2006 05:53 AM
Emo Ninja
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Gender: Male Location: touching myself
sweet those poems are awesome and lovely you gave me an idea why dont i just go chedck out a love poem book
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Feb 18th, 2006 07:28 PM
Ladyluck
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Gender: Female Location: Canada
quote: (post ) Originally posted by bloody bows1
will someone post a few love poems here to get because i am not talented enough to write a true love poem thank you. p.s. this is my attempt at a love poem
love is something the blind can see
love is something the deaf can hear
That poem would be nice if you had actually come up with it yourself.
Feb 19th, 2006 10:56 PM
Coldfire
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Gender: Female Location: Vancouver, Canada
quote: (post ) Originally posted by Ladyluck
That poem would be nice if you had actually come up with it yourself.
Uh oh... Quite the predicament now lol
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Feb 20th, 2006 06:00 AM
Ladyluck
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Gender: Female Location: Canada
quote: (post ) Originally posted by Coldfire
Uh oh... Quite the predicament now lol
Quite the predicament indeed.
Feb 21st, 2006 01:26 AM
Coldfire
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Gender: Female Location: Vancouver, Canada
quote: (post ) Originally posted by Ladyluck
Quite the predicament indeed.
haha stuff like this makes me wonder just how much of the stuff I've read is actually the person's who posted it
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Feb 21st, 2006 04:11 AM
Ladyluck
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Gender: Female Location: Canada
quote: (post ) Originally posted by Coldfire
haha stuff like this makes me wonder just how much of the stuff I've read is actually the person's who posted it
I know. Anyone could post anything anybody's written. Woah.
Feb 21st, 2006 10:45 PM
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