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Coldfire
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Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
good attempt, but like I said, king of love poems here.... hahah king of the broken heart anyway. ohhhh, you oughtta do one about like time or something.. heh.

You and me both hun Cept for the king part o course stick out tongue
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Originally posted by bordom
I kinda got one in the works right now embarrasment

yay is right!! big grin


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Old Post Aug 27th, 2005 03:25 AM
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bordom
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Okay so here's the one that was in the works the other day erm

We met in a chat room,
Sometime during the month of June.
He began the converstation with "Hey",
"Hi" I say.
I explain that I'd met a lot of strange guys that night,
He says "Can I tell you a joke? Is that alright?".
So he tells me one I'll never forget,
And at this point me talking to him is no regret.
He tells me Harley is his name,
Then asks me to share the same.
I tell him,
"Kayla".

Later that night I show him a picture of me,
He replies with "You're hot I see".
I had heard that all before,
And didn't need to hear it anymore.
Soon after I tell him I have to go,
He just cries out "Noooo!".
I tell him that I must,
Then I log off.

After that night we talked everyday,
"Talking to you brightens my day" he would say.
On June 12th he admitted his feelings for me were growing,
I could tell he was afraid about me knowing.
He says he would date me even with the distance,
I figure I'd give it a chance.

A month and three weeks into our relationship,
Coldfire and I went on a trip.
We stayed on a farm,
And I met her old friend that was full of charm.
He was everything I looked for in a guy,
Plus he had gorgeous hazy blue/green eyes that would follow you,
Everytime you walked by.
At this point I had forgotten,
Forgotten that I was taken.

When we left I was sad to go,
But I didn't let myself get too low.
I returned to my house and told my mom all,
And how Cold's friend wanted me to go back in the Fall.
A few days later I broke up with Harley.
I didn't talk to him for a week straight,
But instead I talked with Cold's friend on the phone late.

I finally talked to Harley 'gain,
He tried hard to hide his pain.
We talked awkwardly for a bit,
Then I told him about all the shit,
That was running through my head.

I told him about that long phone calls,
Then I realized my heart was on the falls,
The falls of being inlove.

He called me 'Baby' and 'Baby Girl' like he always did,
And said he was as happy as a little kid,
That had found his lost toy.
A tear ran from my eye,
But it was not a sorrow-filled tear of 'Goodbye',
It was a tear of love,
And happiness.

Tomorrow will be our third month,
And lately I've had a heaviness on my heart,
A heaviness that I fear will tear me apart.
You see,
Recently,
Cold's friend admitted to wishing to go out with me.
This was something I had been hoping for,
But there's more,
I don't feel exactly the same way for Harley like I did before.
I've blown off talking to him a few times,
Cause Cold's friend was online,
Or he was waiting on the phoneline.

Now I feel horrid and I don't know what to do,
I keep telling myself to think things through.
I love Harley for the way he treats me and his personality,
But Cold's friend is real to me.
I don't want to become a cheater,
But I don't want to lead Harley on either.

Maybe Harley and I don't 'Belong Together'.

Kay guys, tell me what you think embarrasment

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Coldfire
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That was better than when you read it over the phone! eek!

And as to the question in there... you just gotta follow your heart, as difficult as that may sound...


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I know... but omg.. it's so hard right now sad

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eek! good poem!

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thanks... it's kinda lame tho erm

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DreamingWarrior
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Bor, that was cool! Wow, that is alotta trust you gave to us to let us read that. hahaha.... wow. yeah, follow your heart, and be true with those nearest to you and those all around. if you are true to us guys, most of us are true with you.


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yeah I don't really care who knows stick out tongue but thanks big grin

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Hahah goofy girls... geez. hahaha


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nice one bordom....sad and a lil heart wrenching to be sure.

and amber, should this happen to you...do the right thing. big grin

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Damn straight.


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quote: (post)
Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
Hahah goofy girls... geez. hahaha

laughing out loud Yes we totally are stick out tongue
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Originally posted by Fëanor
nice one bordom....sad and a lil heart wrenching to be sure.

and amber, should this happen to you...do the right thing. big grin

embarrasment thanks Feanor

Kay well here's the latest riddle y'all big grin

Sometimes they aggitate a person,
Like a sliver deep beneath the flesh.
But sooner or later they are removed,
By a needle bearing the labels of "Guilt", "Truth", or "Conscience".
They have a special place in minds,
That takes determination inorder for then to be discovered,
Hiding beneath such layers as "things to do", "time", and any other events or problems that may rise to the occasion.
They may hold valueable information,
Either to the keeper or to another subject.
The data could be life threatening, life altering, or just passed on.
Results of releasing the contents can bring good fortune, or become the bearer of bad news.

So can you guess what it is?? I tried to be a lil less obvious stick out tongue

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Coldfire
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nice one bordom....sad and a lil heart wrenching to be sure.

and amber, should this happen to you...do the right thing. big grin

Lol I can't really see that happening in this lifetime


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Lol I can't really see that happening in this lifetime
mhmm....

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quote: (post)
Originally posted by Coldfire
Lol I can't really see that happening in this lifetime

laughing out loud yeah that's right I'm the one that gets too many guys lmao jk jk stick out tongue

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mhmm....

pffft stick out tongue


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Originally posted by Coldfire
pffft stick out tongue
wink thumb up

*canadian mode*
i'm just saying, eh? should that happen, know wotta mean vern? stick out tongue

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Originally posted by Fëanor
wink thumb up

*canadian mode*
i'm just saying, eh? should that happen, know wotta mean vern? stick out tongue

laughing out loud
I know whatcha mean eh, but we'll see eh stick out tongue


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Originally posted by Coldfire
laughing out loud
I know whatcha mean eh, but we'll see eh stick out tongue
eek! so what are you saying? eek!

that....there....might...be a possibility? huh?

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eek! so what are you saying? eek!

that....there....might...be a possibility? huh?

Never! no


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