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nope, syllables. but there are differing types, so we both may be right and wrong. like i said, haiku's are much deeper than that, but that is a start. haha.
nicely done.
haha. ever tried sonnets? I'll have to find my poetry rules.... got em in my binder somewhere....
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indeeed. thanks cold. IE; lines 1 adn 3 rhyme, 2 and 4, 5 and 7, 6 and 8, 9 and 11, 12 adn 14, and the last two. all but the last generally pose a question or are ambiguous and the last 2 lines kinda sum it up. or answer the question. try it out dude!
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For the life of me...have we forgotten Poetry 101? A sonnet is a fourteen line poem. The last two lines being as what DW stated. And it consists of a 4 line stanza. 3 stanzas and the last two line. 10 syllables to a line. And lines 1 and 4 match, 2 and 3 match.
So it goes A,B,B,A for the three stanzas then the last remaining two. Got it! Good! There will be an oral and a written exam at the end of the day.
Lonelynes
Im by myself
sitting in the corner of the room
wanting out, nothing to do
going more insane by the minute
start screaming, kick and puching to walls for a way out
but to no prevail
then u came along
And let me out
Suicide
The regret has gone
The impulse to cut, stab, slash
Closure to miserable life
The knife on my wrist
Press down hard and cut
bleeding
Getting dizzy
fainting
waking
in a hospital
annoyed
u live
but for how long.......
Car Crash
The Depression
Hatred for the killer
Angrey at the world
And at yourself
nothing u can do
feeling helpless
sadness taking over
suicide
hate
evil thoughts and plans
life is one big bastard
Yes i have lost a realitive to a car crash
It was my aunt and she died before i was born
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Sep 1st, 2005 04:55 AM
hahaha yeah. well, just an idea. haha... hmmm... bring on some more of your freeverse, mon frere!
Hmm well that's not what I thought... *shrugs* Well whatever lol Bring on da poems James 
rock on
