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Swann&Sparrow
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I'm sorry, I'm being alittle bitter. It seems my crush has found a girl...it's nothing.

I'm just not being as kind and understanding as I used to be, I appologise. It's not good of me, that was awful. I'm sorry.


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Swann&Sparrow
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When I said that was awful, I meant what I SAID was awful. Not the script.


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haha oh sweetheart, its okay, we all have our ups and downs. i am so sorry if you are going through things. boys are really awful sometimes. cant live with em, cant live without em. i hope you feel better!

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Swann&Sparrow
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Lol thanksise. I know boys are a hassle. But really, the script was good, better than alot of fanfictions I've seen. I'm sorry surf. It was rude of me. I should've been nicer.

I hope these darn moodswings would go away. But you should really try writting fanfics, it would do the J/E shippers some good.


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Based on your normal writing, ie chatspeak, I wouldn't brand you a good writer. I'm not an awesome writer, but it's true, she asked for crisizism. And I didn't really like it, I'm sorry.

It's too detailed for a script for one, what too detailed when their actions are described. The dialog is alittle long for this kind of movie, going back and forth alittle. And I am alittle angry at you not titling it as a fanfiction, I"m tierd of rumours and spoilers so please don't EVER do that again. It doesn't matter if it's all in good fun, you can get into alot of trouble for spreading rumours like that.

Secondly, dont' blame that dude that said it could've been better. She did ask for comments and he gave it to her. It doesn't matter if he could do better or not, I don't think he's really comparing. I didn't like it much either.

I'm sorry for this, but it's the truth, I don't wanna lie to you.

I'm gonna wait for the bashing now.


im soz i already apoligised 4 false titleing i said i wouldn't do it again n i would change the name of this thread if i could its just im not the 1st person to do it on here thats all kk im soz n i wouldnt do it ever again i know better

anyway on a happier note ill keep in mind what you've said "Based on your normal writing, ie chatspeak, I wouldn't brand you a good writer. " is that 4 me or some1 else lol im just really confuzzeled *thanx jessigem n ibd43 4 the word its kool* so yep i wont write as long as dialogue lol and the reason i wrote exactley what the actors were supposed to do was because i wanted too give everyone a sorta movie/clip viual thing in their mind through words lol if that makes sense eveyone and if you catch my drift lol

thanx anyway guys its helping me build my writing skills. i might post a oneshot i had to write for an assignment but i probably wont because its got nothing to do with pirates or the movies

and everyone plz accept my sorry face lets all hug and move on lol im a nutcase *oh hey p.s. it was my dance concert last night it waz sooooooo much fun (as they always are lol)*

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i seem to be experiencing these intense intestinal cramps. They hurt me so.


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Originally posted by Swann&Sparrow
I'm sorry, I'm being alittle bitter. It seems my crush has found a girl...it's nothing.

I'm just not being as kind and understanding as I used to be, I appologise. It's not good of me, that was awful. I'm sorry.


dont mention it its fine i completely understand i wasnt offended at all it was very helpful constructive criticism its fine and im sorry ull find some1 way beta hes not worth if he finds another girl theres some1 there definately for YOU!!!

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Originally posted by ivebeendepped43
i seem to be experiencing these intense intestinal cramps. They hurt me so.


i hope u get beta im sick and home from skool i practically crawled here 2 see wat u guys were up 2 lol

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Swann&Sparrow
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Well see I'm just having intense problems with everyone's chatspeaking these days. Why can't proper English be used? Is it 'not cool'?

Anyways, it's not that the guy found another girl. It's just that he talks to another girl that used to be my best friend and now he's giving me mixed signals! And they say women are complicated. Lol.

Well, it really was fanfiction worthy surf. Good job!


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She doesn't drink, tears sting in her eyes. His face when she left, walked out of his life. This is not my pic, it belongs to Kalin from KTTC. All hail Kalin and her wonderful picture making ways.

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Thankyou. I don't put stories on fanfiction, I don't know why but ... *trails off*. I think I'm just a worrywart (lol), and someone might steal it, or any other person's work (not that what I write is worth stealing but anyway). So yeh, I've just got that sort of fear, not for me but others. It's a great site, but I think it's too easy for someone to take someone elses' hard work! okay, now I'M gonna wait for the bashing ...

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