Coldfire
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quote: (post ) Originally posted by bordom
Thanks
Okay so here's my newest one it's a riddle see if you can guess it )
It's something we can't avoid,
And something we can't live without.
Falling deep inside it's black holes,
And trying to fight our way out is useless.
Hearts are ripped from chests,
Emotions are tortured,
Eyes turn red,
And tears release the evidence.
The evidence of:
Heartache,
Loneliness,
Decaying souls,
And loss of the internal flame.
It's powered by passion,
And trust.
Lies,
And betrayal,
Are the kryptonite.
Nice!
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Aug 25th, 2005 04:41 AM
DreamingWarrior
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hahah cool
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Aug 25th, 2005 08:39 PM
bordom
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do y'all know what the riddle is?? hehe
Aug 25th, 2005 10:20 PM
DreamingWarrior
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the riddle is love.
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Aug 25th, 2005 10:22 PM
DreamingWarrior
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and : Hi bordom! hahahah!
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Aug 25th, 2005 10:23 PM
bordom
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quote: (post ) Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
the riddle is love.
yuppers
quote: (post ) Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
and : Hi bordom! hahahah!
hola!
Aug 25th, 2005 10:26 PM
DreamingWarrior
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quote: (post ) Originally posted by bordom
yuppers
hola! hahahahahah hola, como estas?
haha... you wanna talk riddles? that was good, but look at what 99% of my poetry is on, girl. hahahaha... gimme a tougher one.
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Aug 25th, 2005 10:28 PM
bordom
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quote: (post ) Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
hahahahahah hola, como estas?
haha... you wanna talk riddles? that was good, but look at what 99% of my poetry is on, girl. hahahaha... gimme a tougher one.
that was my first attempt
Bien gracias ?y tu?
Aug 25th, 2005 10:29 PM
DreamingWarrior
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quote: (post ) Originally posted by bordom
that was my first attempt
Bien gracias ?y tu?
ehhh maso meno.... or however that goes... en francais es la" comme-cis, comme-cas"
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Aug 25th, 2005 10:31 PM
bordom
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aw that sucks
Aug 25th, 2005 10:32 PM
DreamingWarrior
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good attempt, but like I said, king of love poems here.... hahah king of the broken heart anyway. ohhhh, you oughtta do one about like time or something.. heh.
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Aug 25th, 2005 10:32 PM
DreamingWarrior
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hah... sucks? yeah.
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Aug 25th, 2005 10:34 PM
bordom
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well I now know what I must do to puzzle you eh
Aug 25th, 2005 10:34 PM
DreamingWarrior
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heh heh heh... bring it on m'lady.
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Aug 26th, 2005 02:28 AM
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Aug 26th, 2005 02:56 AM
Ladyluck
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kayla I like your poetry!!
Aug 27th, 2005 12:52 AM
bordom
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thanks Lea!
Aug 27th, 2005 12:58 AM
Ladyluck
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more! lol
Aug 27th, 2005 01:00 AM
bordom
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I kinda got one in the works right now
Aug 27th, 2005 01:04 AM
Ladyluck
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yay!
Aug 27th, 2005 01:14 AM
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