hey peoples...i havent been here in a while...but anyways....i wrote this poem called you're somebody, i'm not and i wanted to know what you think about it....love it, hate it, anything else....peace <3 Kelly
you're somebody, i'm not
you're just like them.
you know that, right?
you look the same, dress the same, look the same and even think the same.
it makes me cringe just thinking about it.
you are just another one of those mindless clones.
you're programmed down to every last hair flip and giggle.
if it weren't for them, you'd be nothing.
just like me.
you'd spend your life at the mall doing nothing.
maybe watching kids master the art of ddr if you are privledged enough.
they dance infront of all the ooing and ahhing people.
enchanted by their moves.
but i just sit and watch.
oblivious to all things around me.
but still, that doesn't change the fact that you are not like me.
you're somebody, i'm not....
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you're somebody, i'm not
Mar 8th, 2005 01:37 PM
Fine, I take it back, all right?? Happy now????
