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azszhz
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fan fiction
this topic probably wont be up long but i wanted to show this fan fiction i found on fanfiction.net cuz its really good.
By GTA Otaku
"Whispers in the Dark"
The company have come to a stop in the mines of Moria. Exhausted and lost even with the guidance of the wizard, they decide to get some sleep ready to continue on the morrow, not that any concept of time telling exists in the underground. Slowly the light of Gandalf’s staff dies to glowing embers, then nothing.
As the rest of the company sleep, two small voices penetrate the darkness.
“Merry?”
“What?”
“I’m hungry”.
“You’re always hungry”.
“Yes, but I’m REALLY hungry now”.
“Then try thinking about something other than food for a change”.
“Okay”.
Pause.
“I’m cold”.
“Pippin!”
“I am”.
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Jan 13th, 2004 06:51 PM |
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azszhz
I Have No Name
Gender: Female
Location: Edoras, Rohan |
“You don’t think I am?”
“You don’t seem to be”.
“That’s because I’m not COMPLAINING about it. Now go to sleep”.
Silence fills the cave once again. Merry closes his eyes, though in the pitch black it makes little difference. He evens out his breathing and tries to relax but it is no use, despite his exhaustion and effort he just can not get to sleep.
Neither can Pippin.
“If we ask Strider nicely, do you think he’ll let us have a second breakfast tomorrow?”
“I don’t believe you Peregrin”. Merry sits up. “Here we are in the middle of the biggest historic event ever, making daily decisions that could shape the entire future and all you can honestly think about is FOOD”.
“I have to”.
“Why?” Merry raises his hands in frustration, although in the darkness the expression is about as useful as closing his eyes.
“Because if I don’t concentrate on trivial things I start to concentrate on big things; like going to Mordor through Sauron’s army, Wargs, black riders who knows what else. I look at how dark these mines are and it makes me realise how dark and dangerous the whole world is now. Merry by this time tomorrow we could all be dead; I don’t want to think about that, do you?”
Now it is Pippin who turns over and closes his eyes, trying to bite back tears and forget everything the conversation has brought his attention. He finds himself unable until…
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azszhz
I Have No Name
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Location: Edoras, Rohan |
“Pippin?”
“What?”
“I’m hungry”.
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Jan 13th, 2004 06:52 PM |
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azszhz
I Have No Name
Gender: Female
Location: Edoras, Rohan |
Pretty good story if you ask me
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Jan 13th, 2004 06:52 PM |
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orlandoOYEA
Since When?
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Awwwww thats great
i love it
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Jan 13th, 2004 08:27 PM |
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Tassie
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hey we shuld come up wit our own fan fiction sometime
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Jan 13th, 2004 08:58 PM |
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azszhz
I Have No Name
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Location: Edoras, Rohan |
that would be interesting, yes very very intersting
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Jan 13th, 2004 11:08 PM |
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Camellia
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WOOOOO! Fanfiction.net!!!!
I live for that web site!!
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Jan 14th, 2004 05:40 PM |
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The Inkeeper
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you live for THAT website
that website alone???? i hope not...dont make me get my mace 
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Jan 14th, 2004 07:40 PM |
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Camellia
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Well, no, I live for many others too...KMC being one of course
Actually, I have become very obsessed with RPS archives..the only problem being, I don't like to read the slash stories...
Have you any idea how it is to find a story about a real perosn (e.g. an actor) that DOESN'T involve them having a gay relationship?!?!?
Anyway, off topic...sorry
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Jan 14th, 2004 08:22 PM |
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azszhz
I Have No Name
Gender: Female
Location: Edoras, Rohan |
i don't know how to avoid the slash 
so i can't help you exept to say keep looking eventally you can find what you want
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Jan 14th, 2004 09:38 PM |
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flickerstick
uh......no?
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My only suggesting is to change the narrative to past tense (e.g. "Merry sat up" instead of "erry sits up") It flows better.
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Jan 15th, 2004 01:22 PM |
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azszhz
I Have No Name
Gender: Female
Location: Edoras, Rohan |
well i didn't write that story a GTA Otaku did but i can put that in a review for her story
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Jan 15th, 2004 10:46 PM |
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Kitoky
Starting Anew
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Thank you so much Eezy!!
I'm starting over, do not mistake me for my brother - he has left. Eezy has convinced me to come back, give him some credit.
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Jan 15th, 2004 11:21 PM |
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azszhz
I Have No Name
Gender: Female
Location: Edoras, Rohan |
i already am registered and this is not my fic it was just so good that i couldn't help but show it off. i thought that this tread would be closed by now.
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Jan 15th, 2004 11:27 PM |
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azszhz
I Have No Name
Gender: Female
Location: Edoras, Rohan |
in fact half the time i'm online i have that site up even if i'm looking somethink else up at the same time
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Jan 15th, 2004 11:28 PM |
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Elessea
Senior Member
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Location: Neverland |
Me like
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Sep 8th, 2004 12:16 PM |
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Fëanor
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a very good story indeed...
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Sep 8th, 2004 05:49 PM |
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