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Elizabeth "the monkey! It was here! The monkey, he went thru the window!"
Jack and will looked out the window, but saw nothing.
"the monkey," Elizabeth was breathing hard,"he was a skelitan! He still is apon the curse!"
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Johnny's Angel!
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hey if this turns out good let's send it to the writers lol so they'll have their story and can start sooner
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We're rascals, scourdrals, villans and knaves,
Drink up me 'earties, yo ho.
We're devils and black sheep, really bad eggs,
Drink up me 'earties yo ho!
Yo ho yo ho, a pirates life for me!!!
**sigh!**
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Jan 5th, 2004 04:24 AM |
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Jack peered out the window and paused for a second and jumped out of the window, sliding down the roof onto the ground. Will grasped Elizabeth's arm and said, "This may be harder than we thought."
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We're rascals, scourdrals, villans and knaves,
Drink up me 'earties, yo ho.
We're devils and black sheep, really bad eggs,
Drink up me 'earties yo ho!
Yo ho yo ho, a pirates life for me!!!
**sigh!**
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Jan 5th, 2004 04:25 AM |
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lol yea i kno!
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Johnny's Angel!
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Jack looked about and followed miniscule tracks to the start of a dock and then they dissappeared. He heard chiriping and looked to the right where Jack the Monkey was. JtM grinned a cute monkey smile and dived into the water. Jack followed him into the black waters.
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We're rascals, scourdrals, villans and knaves,
Drink up me 'earties, yo ho.
We're devils and black sheep, really bad eggs,
Drink up me 'earties yo ho!
Yo ho yo ho, a pirates life for me!!!
**sigh!**
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Jan 5th, 2004 04:28 AM |
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Johnny's Angel!
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am i doing good or bad, honestly
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We're rascals, scourdrals, villans and knaves,
Drink up me 'earties, yo ho.
We're devils and black sheep, really bad eggs,
Drink up me 'earties yo ho!
Yo ho yo ho, a pirates life for me!!!
**sigh!**
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Jan 5th, 2004 04:28 AM |
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no ur doing good whos JtM?
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Really good. Better than I could ever have done.
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Jan 5th, 2004 04:30 AM |
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nevermind i get jack the monkey
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Jan 5th, 2004 04:32 AM |
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your doing great!
Will grabed elizabeth by the arm and the raced outside to the dock.
Elizabeth"where did he go?"
Jack"he dove, love. but i know where he's going. now, get on to the ship, we've got to find that treasure before monkey does."
will suddenly rememebered in his dream his dad told him to find it before they did. Was they the monkey. who were the rest of them?
he climbed onto the ship, along with jack and elizabeth.
Jack barked orders to the rest of the crew and they sliced threw the icy black waters.
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Johnny's Angel!
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lol yeah i'm a bit lazy so i abbreviated! thanx on the writing thing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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We're rascals, scourdrals, villans and knaves,
Drink up me 'earties, yo ho.
We're devils and black sheep, really bad eggs,
Drink up me 'earties yo ho!
Yo ho yo ho, a pirates life for me!!!
**sigh!**
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Jan 5th, 2004 04:33 AM |
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am i doing any good. I'm kinda pesimistic so i'm not good at rating my own writing.
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Johnny's Angel!
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Elizabeth turned to Jack and said, "How have you been, Jack? We haven't seen you for more than a year!"
Jack turned and gave her a small smile and pulled his shirt a little to the right a turned around. Five long slashes raced across his back. Elizabeth gasped and ran her finger lightly over them as Jack winced slightly.
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We're rascals, scourdrals, villans and knaves,
Drink up me 'earties, yo ho.
We're devils and black sheep, really bad eggs,
Drink up me 'earties yo ho!
Yo ho yo ho, a pirates life for me!!!
**sigh!**
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Jan 5th, 2004 04:36 AM |
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Johnny's Angel!
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lol yeah u're great
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We're rascals, scourdrals, villans and knaves,
Drink up me 'earties, yo ho.
We're devils and black sheep, really bad eggs,
Drink up me 'earties yo ho!
Yo ho yo ho, a pirates life for me!!!
**sigh!**
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Jan 5th, 2004 04:36 AM |
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Johnny's Angel!
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jack spoke softly, his voice acidic. "I'll find the bastard that did this. HE took-" "What?" Elizabeth whispered. "Never mind, love."
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We're rascals, scourdrals, villans and knaves,
Drink up me 'earties, yo ho.
We're devils and black sheep, really bad eggs,
Drink up me 'earties yo ho!
Yo ho yo ho, a pirates life for me!!!
**sigh!**
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Jan 5th, 2004 04:37 AM |
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Johnny's Angel!
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"Tell me!" She hissed. "He's kidnapped someone dear to me."
"Who?" "Love, he's kidnapped me daughter."
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We're rascals, scourdrals, villans and knaves,
Drink up me 'earties, yo ho.
We're devils and black sheep, really bad eggs,
Drink up me 'earties yo ho!
Yo ho yo ho, a pirates life for me!!!
**sigh!**
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Jan 5th, 2004 04:38 AM |
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"ur daughter" elizabeth said in shock, "well where did he take her"
"i dont kno" jack said "but I'll find out
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Will turned around startled. "What?" Jack squinted a bit. "Her name is-"
"Captain!!! WE've got a ship on our tail!"
"What is the flag have on it?" Jack hollered to the bird's nest.
"They haven't got no flags, sir!"
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We're rascals, scourdrals, villans and knaves,
Drink up me 'earties, yo ho.
We're devils and black sheep, really bad eggs,
Drink up me 'earties yo ho!
Yo ho yo ho, a pirates life for me!!!
**sigh!**
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Jack "jack the monkey isn't alone. he has friends. his friends are not friendly."
Elizabeth"they did that to you?"
Jack"yes. their owners arn't friendly, eather. the scoundrals are looking for the same treasure, mate. They have been looking for it for over 8 years and havn't found it. when they heard that I had the map, they sent the monkey troops to find it."
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www.homestarrunner.com
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A dark, ghastly ship was lumbering behind them, steadly increasing the pace.
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We're rascals, scourdrals, villans and knaves,
Drink up me 'earties, yo ho.
We're devils and black sheep, really bad eggs,
Drink up me 'earties yo ho!
Yo ho yo ho, a pirates life for me!!!
**sigh!**
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