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Krabs55
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Syren
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I'd just like to say, thankyou to all who have shown support. Well, any comment is welcome, praise or criticism. Helps me to learn.....

And please, anyone feel free to post their work yes


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What a fabulous thread! happy

You people are all very talkented!


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Syren
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*curtsies*

Thaks, Oh Artful One wink


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Old Post Jun 14th, 2004 07:50 PM
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Syren
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Gender: Female
Location: every which way but loose

Vampyr

Darkness alights, suffocating the skies,
Time stands still once more.
I walk alone, sounds sweep over me,
No wind, nothing touches my pale skin.
I try to recall the sun on my face,
Impossible, a far away place,
Where the warmth was once felt.
I shiver, more a reaction to lack of memory,
For I feel not a thing, clinically dead.
Eternity ahead,
I long to breathe again, to inhale the sweet aromas of life.
To taste something other than death.
Acceptance is my next step,
My fate sealed as I roam the Earth.
But I am strength personified,
For I am the undead, nor alive, it's a confusing state.
I know not what runs through my veins,
Nor do I care,
I am neither here nor there,
Always in one place and yet in another.
I walk on.........


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Old Post Jun 15th, 2004 10:59 PM
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CherryPop
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Okay here's one i wrote about four months ago

I try to stop them
I really do
In this case
They don't
Because these tears are for you

I don't want to cry
Not for you
I don't want to love you
But I still do
And that's why these tears fall

I want to try
To become more brave
I don't want to cry
I hope to save
Myself from drowning in my own tears

I cry you a river
And maybe more
Yet it's still no different
No different from before

I don't want to cry
Not for you
I don't want to love you
But I still do

I try to stop them
I really do
In this case
I can't
Because these tears are for you


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Syren
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That's beautiful, it really is. So short, sentence wise, but also holds such a deep message. That's my favourite type of poetry. I can't write like that because I tend to ramble on, I'm really impressed hun.........


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That's some really great work there Ash. Tramples is right, the message is really deep. I don't know what to say to encourage you to write more, but i'd really like to read some more of your work. I really like this poem.


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Syren
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thumb up

Brentix, we have another artiste in our midst........


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CherryPop
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embarrasment Wow thanks guys.


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CherryPop
I'm Bringing Sexy Back

Gender: Female
Location: California Sexually: Frustrated

Daddy...
Whyíd you have to leave me?
Why couldnít you stay alive to see
What I have become for you?
Youíve been with me all the way through
But now youíre gone
To the Underworld you have flown...

Daddy...
Why canít we return the days
When we used to laugh and play?
Weíd swirl around the bend
I prayed to God it would never end.
Now I have my restless nights
Without you there to remind me of the light

Daddy...
I wish you were alive now
Maybe I would not be so down
Now all my fears seem so near
Sometimes I canít even see you clear
You are there in my dreams
But I always seem to return to reality

Daddy...
I know that youíre with me in my heart
And thatís what keeps me on day and night
But I would like to say, Daddy,
That I have met some awfully nice friends
And our loyalty has no ends

So Daddy...
I miss you still
And you always have a special spot to fill
In my heart and in my mind
But now I think I can move on fine
But I will always remember the night
When you reminded me of the light....


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Originally posted by TKD_Byatch
Okay here's one i wrote about four months ago

I try to stop them
I really do
In this case
They don't
Because these tears are for you

I don't want to cry
Not for you
I don't want to love you
But I still do
And that's why these tears fall

I want to try
To become more brave
I don't want to cry
I hope to save
Myself from drowning in my own tears

I cry you a river
And maybe more
Yet it's still no different
No different from before

I don't want to cry
Not for you
I don't want to love you
But I still do

I try to stop them
I really do
In this case
I can't
Because these tears are for you


that is a very sentimental poem. Very beautifuly done. thumb up


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quote:
Originally posted by TKD_Byatch
Daddy...
Whyíd you have to leave me?
Why couldnít you stay alive to see
What I have become for you?
Youíve been with me all the way through
But now youíre gone
To the Underworld you have flown...

Daddy...
Why canít we return the days
When we used to laugh and play?
Weíd swirl around the bend
I prayed to God it would never end.
Now I have my restless nights
Without you there to remind me of the light

Daddy...
I wish you were alive now
Maybe I would not be so down
Now all my fears seem so near
Sometimes I canít even see you clear
You are there in my dreams
But I always seem to return to reality

Daddy...
I know that youíre with me in my heart
And thatís what keeps me on day and night
But I would like to say, Daddy,
That I have met some awfully nice friends
And our loyalty has no ends

So Daddy...
I miss you still
And you always have a special spot to fill
In my heart and in my mind
But now I think I can move on fine
But I will always remember the night
When you reminded me of the light....


That's beautiful smile


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CherryPop
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Location: California Sexually: Frustrated

Thanks Tabby


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CherryPop
I'm Bringing Sexy Back

Gender: Female
Location: California Sexually: Frustrated

You canít hurt me now
Because you are not here
It is funny now because you are far away
Maybe some day I may look back
And think of the times we had
You canít hurt me now
I got away from you.
Never thought I would
You canít make me shed one tear
I canít believe I survived it
Now I laugh at what happen back then
You canít hurt me no more


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CherryPop
I'm Bringing Sexy Back

Gender: Female
Location: California Sexually: Frustrated

You Are Still Here


You are still here
Here in my head
Why are you doing this
This to me

You have died so long ago
You are in my dreams
This makes them nightmares
Which how they can be terrible nightmares

I wish you would just let me be
Be with everyone but you
So I can experience life without you
But, I know all you are doing is protecting me

Believe in me, that I can take care of myself
But you are still here
Here to let me know you still love me
Here to let me know Iím still your little girl

I love you with all of my heart
But why did you still have to die
I know you loved me with all of your heart
But why did you have to leave me

You are still here
And I know that very well
I know you will always be here too
And I want to you know
I will love and miss you
For always father


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I wrote this last night. It's dedicated to TKDMaster
You've Kept Me Waiting

When you touch my skin I can't help but ask,

Do you know what you do to me?

Can you comprehend that I need you?

Your dark eyes, so quiet

Its hard to know what you'll do

When your strong arms hold me

I can't help but feel like nothings wrong

But that night before the tournament

you held me, but I couldn't feel safe

Whats wrong?

When you ran your hand through my hair

And said my name

I wanted to you stay with me

And hold me forever

Your body above me protectively

Kisses trailing down my body

Will you be by my side

If so, then tell me

Because,

You've kept me waiting long enough


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CherryPop
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Great job Tabby! smile


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