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Coldfire
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Aug 8th, 2005 04:32 AM

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Way to dig up an ancient thread, Bilb

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quiet you

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Ya Krunk'd Floo
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Originally posted by Lana
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Walked through the door
Fell to the floor
Opened up my eyes
And then I realized
That I couldn't see
What was in front of me
And now here I lie
Wondering, why?

You didn't realise you were staring at the floor?

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Aug 9th, 2005 09:24 AM

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Peach
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quote: (post)
Originally posted by bilb
quiet you

quote: (post)
Originally posted by Ya Krunk'd Floo
You didn't realise you were staring at the floor?

......

This comment is not worth a response, but I shall anyway.

Did the thought occur to you that people don't necessarily fall face-first?

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Aug 9th, 2005 04:57 PM

Coldfire
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quote: (post)
Originally posted by Ya Krunk'd Floo
You didn't realise you were staring at the floor?

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Aug 9th, 2005 05:05 PM

kimmeh
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quote: (post)
Originally posted by Lana

......

This comment is not worth a response, but I shall anyway.

Did the thought occur to you that people don't necessarily fall face-first?

should we mention its a a friggin metaphor as well? roll eyes (sarcastic)

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Aug 12th, 2005 04:25 AM

Peach
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I really have no idea where this came from. It sorta just popped into my head, and as I haven't really written anything for months, I figured I should post it.

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a chill
like ice down the spine
what's going on?
I thought everything was fine

a drop
of water from my eye
falls like a raindrop
from a cloud-filled sky

torn
my heart ripped in twain
inside I feel
like I have been slain

alone
never again with you
your life torn away
and mine started anew

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Aug 15th, 2005 08:17 PM